Dr.Slime
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- Nov 15, 2022
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like Tybalt calling Jade mommy and stephen daddy in front of people thats sooo brat likeYea and it's not about looking for flaws in the writing, most here have very reasonable expectations and we take the game for what it is, an adult novel.
The stuff that makes no sense to begin with, like Maya's tuition or reading the diary 1 page per episode and ignoring the picture that comes with it, are prime examples where it's just too much. It's hard to justify it and yet it drags out and out and the very long development time sure doesn't help, because you get reminded of them again and again.
Overall DPC's writing is fun, easy to digest and it comes with good pacing, and that's good enough for me, but man some of those stories make you wanna rip out your hair.
there are some poor writing here and there but never boring
except Gen studies thats just pure boring to listen and watch
it's sooo bad