Oh that is interesting.. there is some catastrophic event coming then?
Is it already written or is something expected give the title of last chapter "calm before the snow"? Although, isn't the phrase calm before the storm? So probably I am confused.
Thing is novel is quite long and time haa become a luxury. I am willing to give it a second go if quality improves. If it becomes more than it was in the first 4 chapters.
Thank you very much for your input.
The title of EP10 is “Calm Before the Snow”. So from EP11 onwards the drama picks up speed.
The second chance thing is something the MC said to Maya in EP2. Many forget that the entire game is a narrative from the MC himself. It's all already happened and the MC tells his story. We just don't know to whom or when he tells his story. We're not at the end of his story yet either.
But when you read in EP3 that the MC would have preferred not to get involved with Isabella if he had known about Isabella beforehand, something has happened that we don't know about yet and we will only find out about it later.
Quinn and the MC can love each other and Quinn might change too. But it doesn't have to be Quinn directly that could harm the MC, but Quinn's environment. Drugs, prostitution, kidnapping and extortion. She is in contact with dangerous people. Mick, Vinny and Buddy.
Josy says to the MC in EP9 so he will be the one to have a heart attack. Will, not had. Maya can tell the MC in EP9 that he almost needed a second birthday suit. Why is that?
And with Jill, it's not the STD test that worries me. Rather, I think the Jill Branch drama will be the hardest drama because it will be completely unexpected for many players. Cue “Romeo and Juliet” from EP5. Julia is clearly defined and is Jill. But it is not clearly defined who is Romeo and who is Paris. (Not the city, but the name of a person in "Romeo and Juliet"). Julia's parents wanted to marry her to a Paris. Is the MC now Romeo or Paris? It doesn't really matter because it sucks for both of them. Paris would marry a woman who loves another guy and Romeo would love a woman who is betrothed to another guy or perhaps already engaged to him or has been engaged to him.
It won't be as dark as AL, DPC wrote that themselves, but that only means that no one will die. There will be a drama, the only question is which and when, but definitely after EP10 “Calm Before the Snow”.