VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [DrPinkCake]

[Darkwen the Josy lover]

A man of wisdom I see

Darkwen the Josy lover ; do no know jackshit about whats gonna happen in the game.
AS A MAN OF CULTURE IM GONNA SIMP HARD FOR ALADY ;
ALL ABOARD THE JOSY TRAIN!!!!



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Can't go wrong with Queen Josy

 

[Macky009]

I'm a simple man, I liked Sage cause of red hair. Her having to fulfil the "I can fix her" fantasy was just a bonus.

That being said though, Sage's path has proven to be the one I liked most, writing wise. I'm at an entirely different stage of life, so I forgot about this game since the whole Ex-gf interlude and I forgot majority of the things that happened in this game. However, Sage's scenes stayed with me.

I think it's just harder to like the others, when the main conflicts with them were:
Jill: not realising how entitled she is.
M/J: having communication issues/accepting help issues
Isabella: forgot she has emotions and have a dead beat ex.
Chloe: went on a vacation and came back

Infact, I liked the side characters much more than the non-Sage main LI. Even Quinn is far more interesting, and I hated her guts. Riona is such a mood, Envy breaks beauty standard, and Derek is just good ole Derek.

Who the fuck is Chloe??? You mean Zoey right

 

[Macky009]

True Josy fans call her Alady, by the way.

ALADY !!

Not decided yet on whose my favorite girls; that redhead puss- SAGE. She packs a lot of milK! Josy is the only girl who is exotic. And petite girl mean great faktoy!

Umm I think you were influence by Darkwen the Josy lover which is the only person I know that uses Alady. I don't even know what it means, it just stuck with Darkwen whenever he talks about Josy at the end of his post he will type Alady 3x.

 

[Bazsa4]

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[Macky009]

Alady Alady Alady Josy is love Josy is life Alady and all Josy's simps said Alady
A man of wisdom I see

Darkwen the Josy lover ; do no know jackshit about whats gonna happen in the game.
AS A MAN OF CULTURE IM GONNA SIMP HARD FOR ALADY ;
ALL ABOARD THE JOSY TRAIN!!!!



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Can't go wrong with Queen Josy

Looks like you found your long lost Alady Brother Darkwen the Josy lover

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

In a college full of idiots, sluts, bullies and rich assholes, Jill was a breath of fresh air. As you say she can be considered a "typical girl next door", she is just a naive nice rich girl (too nice sometimes) who cares about the MC, without caring who he is or what fraternity belongs. I agree DPC made some huge mistakes during season 2, but overall she is, as I said before, the (almost) perfect waifu

Overall, Jill is not my cup of tea. Too nice and proper, in the game it's pretty boring and in life it doesn't always work according to the principles that Jill follows. But she was very well written in Season 1, that's true. And even in the little interlude in Episode 5, when Jill puts Rusty in his place.
Sadly DPC made her retarded later for 3-4 episodes.

 

[ChipLecsap]

JFC, the Darkwen pretender created an another alt account for himself to spread that cringe shit

 

[Darkwen the Josy lover]

Looks like you found your long lost Alady Brother Darkwen the Josy lover

this how i'm going to take over the world in the name of Josy

 

[Darkwen the Josy lover]

JFC, the Darkwen pretender created an another alt account for himself to spread that cringe shit

I do not fear the cringe side as you do. I have brought peace, freedom and justice to Josy's new empire
Alady Alady Alady

 

[saynotoNTR]

Overall, Jill is not my cup of tea. Too nice and proper, in the game it's pretty boring and in life it doesn't always work according to the principles that Jill follows. But she was very well written in Season 1, that's true. And even in the little interlude in Episode 5, when Jill puts Rusty in his place.

Sadly DPC made her retarded later for 3-4 episodes.

This version of Jill (putting Rusty in his place) is the best version of Jill. Sassy and confident in the right measure. It doesn't even seem like the same naive Jill from S2.

What was that scene in EP.10 (MC out of Jill's path) where Jill preferred to believe that the MC had stolen her panties instead of Tybalt? WTF?! Jill at this point in the game has already become one of my least favorite characters.

 

[ChipLecsap]

I do not fear the cringe side as you do. I have brought peace, freedom and justice to Josy's new empire
Alady Alady Alady

you do realize that Anakin was on the wrong side , right ? And in the End he realize How wrong he was
The original Darkwen realize d this at the end, and disappeared. You just a cheap pretender, who Hate Josy more so than the original did.
I'm no longer gonna respond to you , I did not even count the original one as worthy of my attentiöon let alone a pretender

 

[jd8097619]

What really worries me is that it’s been three weeks without a new preview release. When was the last time we had such a long gap?

Three weeks since they released around a dozen of them.

 

[Darkwen the Josy lover]

you do realize that Anakin was on the wrong side , right ? And in the End he realize How wrong he was
The original Darkwen related this at the end, and disappeared. You just a cheap pretender, who Hate Josy more so than the original did.
I'm no longer gonna respond to you , I did not even count the original one as worthy of my attentiöon let alone a pretender

This is why your the Maya of Josy simp's a attention seeking victim card playing whining whore

 

[KАRАMBA]

this how i'm going to take over the world in the name of Josy

That's a strong word.
Truly, the King's words!
It needs to be perpetuated.

 

[Bazsa4]

pretender

 

[Gunizz]

I think DPC is not very inspired when it comes to Jill's storyline. It seems like she is a character that is supposed to be there, that MUST be there for obvious reasons, but it is below par when it comes to Jill's storyline and dialogue. I understand that there are plot holes and very borderline situations in various other parts, but I feel like the best parts of Jill are when DPC has to throw in Tybalt or Derek for the comic relief. I find Jill's characterization a bit weak and very standardized.

 

[Darkwen the Josy lover]

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he lives on a throne of lies, I live with Josy

 

[The Krogan Dude]

I think DPC is not very inspired when it comes to Jill's storyline. It seems like she is a character that is supposed to be there, that MUST be there for obvious reasons, but it is below par when it comes to Jill's storyline and dialogue. I understand that there are plot holes and very borderline situations in various other parts, but I feel like the best parts of Jill are when DPC has to throw in Tybalt or Derek for the comic relief. I find Jill's characterization a bit weak and very standardized.

Jill had one job. Introduce Bianca to us

 

[saynotoNTR]

I think DPC is not very inspired when it comes to Jill's storyline. It seems like she is a character that is supposed to be there, that MUST be there for obvious reasons, but it is below par when it comes to Jill's storyline and dialogue. I understand that there are plot holes and very borderline situations in various other parts, but I feel like the best parts of Jill are when DPC has to throw in Tybalt or Derek for the comic relief. I find Jill's characterization a bit weak and very standardized.

Jill is too stupid for my taste. The scene where she believes that the MC stole her panties and not Tybalt is absurd. At this point in the game, the MC could be CHICK, be on Bella's good side (unlike Tybalt), have positive RP with her and even help her with the recital while all Tybalt did was blackmail her into having a few dates with him. It makes no sense.

Also, Jill needs a wake-up call. People are complex, her saying she doesn't believe in the MC because he does good and bad things is a testament to how disconnected from reality she is. People don't just make CHICK choices their whole lives, just like they don't make DIK choices their whole lives either. I'm not surprised Jill was added to the game at the last minute, she doesn't fit in with the wild world of Being a DIK.

Jill had one job. Introduce Bianca to us

At least Jill was helpful at some point.

 

[Chalk boss]

In a college full of idiots, sluts, bullies and rich assholes, Jill was a breath of fresh air. As you say she can't be considered a "typical girl next door", she is just a naive nice rich girl (too nice sometimes) who cares about the MC, without caring who he is or what fraternity belongs. I agree DPC made some huge mistakes during season 2, but overall she is, as I said before, the (almost) perfect waifu

There's no conflict in Jill's arc. This is why her entire arc is perceived as somewhat sterile and boring.
Tybalt? No one takes him seriously. No one seriously believed he could win Jill's heart. Not to mention how much DPС humiliated Tybalt the entire game.
The connection to MC's mother. But it's not a conflict. Also Lynette's diary is the most boring part of the whole plot.
Conflict with the parents over MC's past. But there isn't. He's well received.
Unfortunately DPС can't create an interesting conflict that drives the story, other than the possible cheating with Bianca. This shows his low level as a screenwriter.
You ask what would you do?
Okay, I would have initially changed Jill's character a bit. The foundation of any art is contrast.
For example, Jill could have argued with Bianca about dating MC. It could have been a bet of sorts. It would have immediately added ambiguity and drama to Jill's character, she stopped being such a one-note right and flat uninteresting character.

Sure, I agree Jill's character is a contrast in itself compared to other female characters who are sexually active. But I'd like to get a lot more out of her line than the words that characterize her, which are more like an obituary than a living person: kind, sympathetic, sweet.
Right now, the only two things that can get me on Jill's branch are the cheating with Bianca and the threesome with Bella. And he gets it.