I think you still don't understand why we are complaining. I want them to behave like normal people and not start making out right after dumping the person they both cheated the other one with abd supposedly loved until five minutes ago, among other complaints.
The scene could be better with minor changes, but it would take too long to write it now.
I think you still don't understand why we are complaining. I want them to behave like normal people and not start making out right after dumping the person they both cheated the other one with abd supposedly loved until five minutes ago, among other complaints.
The scene could be better with minor changes, but it would take too long to write it now.
well technically you're the one who dumping them
they may forgive each other way to easy i agree. but once you dump them, they free to do as they please and they clearly like each other.
look , I did not like the twist from the beginning, i think making them lovers was already a bad decision for just the sake of shock. and I think DPC also realized its to time consuming already to much going on , so just like the cheap twist , the way out was also simplified. either end it or a fresh start.
so this is more like a writing problem then actual character problem, the story itself weak in a way.
hopefully he can fix it. this is not like a simple Jill story where probably the story is the poor kid is not good enough for the rich famous chick , two different word etc.
also we don't know how he plans this game. it's gonna be full 4 year at the college? because if so then time jump and changes are needed. like Sage is probably gonna leave, she's in her last year, Jill is in 3rd or 4th ?
the next generation is MC, Derek, Josy, Maya, Quinn. etc and this is just the relationship aspect, we still have the Dik, hots, alphas story etc etc.