- Sep 20, 2018
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You know, Bella's desperation might just be the key to my issue with all this.I'm not so much arguing with you but agreeing with you just along a different mental path. You mention Josy's desperation and yet choose to ignore Bella's. Bella has been without her husband for 3 years if I remember the number right. Now we don't know what the reason is but imagine how lonely Bella is vs Josy. Josy and Maya have been apart for a year, maybe a little more?
The MC doesn't strike me as a deep thinker, not saying he's stupid, however he is definitely thinking with his little head.
I agree, Bella clearly craves the MC's attention on some level. But Bella also seems frightened by the MC's attention on some level, and unlike with Josy or even Maya, the MC doesn't wait for the girl to sort out that dichotomy before he makes a move on her.
This time he seems intent on on sorting it out for her, purely by wearing down her resolve.