VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.11.1] [DrPinkCake]

[Deleted member 3006697]

where i can find it?

OP
https://f95zone.to/threads/being-a-dik-v0-6-1-dr-pinkcake.25332/post-2283634

 

[afk69]

OP
https://f95zone.to/threads/being-a-dik-v0-6-1-dr-pinkcake.25332/post-2283634

my man, ty mate

 

[JagsFan84]

If the guy who's responsible for rewriting DPC's dialogue to make it sound more "American" is reading this, you should seriously consider offering your services to the guy who's doing "Become A Rockstar."

The dialogue is incredibly stilted in that game.

 

[shazba]

Why do you guys write about Jill being a NTR infact she is not NTR and the proof is MC has touched her in between her thighs the night after MC and chad has fight incident tools place and the other when at the Bella's house sofa where MC dry humping Jill but she says it's going too fast for her MC would fell if something there was odd but he didn't so I request you guys never say anything about Jill being NTR

People write about Jill fucking Tybbie because they know it upsets others at a deeply profound level and they find that entertaining. The definition of trolling.

Or are you getting confused between NTR and Futa (NTR is someone else fucking your girl, Futa is your girl, or any girl for that matter, having her own cock)? Of course the same reason applies as to why dudes keep pushing that agenda, the misery of others...

If the guy who's responsible for rewriting DPC's dialogue to make it sound more "American" is reading this, you should seriously consider offering your services to the guy who's doing "Become A Rockstar."

The dialogue is incredibly stilted in that game.

Is someone "rewriting" DPC's dialogue? Isn't he just writing it himself?

 

[DavDR]

I still don't think she looks anything like Heidi and think she's more of a nod to Leah, maybe even what DPC would have Leah look like if they were making AL now.

the eyes and especially the mouths are completely different. Heidi (and thanks for reminding me of the name) and the redhead have dimples, Leah doesn't

 

[vptxiid46]

But.. that's not an incel way. Involuntarily Celibate (more accurately: chaste). You're actively, voluntarily avoiding the contact. That's kinda the exact opposite of being an InCel.

Hahaha so truee

 

[DavDR]

I think that wallpaper is the least attractive Camila has ever been. Maybe it's the lighting? Whatever the cause, I certainly didn't see that coming!



Maya may well blame the other HOTs for Quinn' actions, because she doesn't know otherwise. From her point of view, Quinn was acting for the HOTs as their vice president. Yes, it's silly that the MC still hasn't told her anything more specific about Quinn than her being 'evil' (if that!), but there we are.

It does seem plausible that Josy might join up with the HOTs, though. She mentioned being tempted to join before, and it could fit the narrative if Maya manages to trick her father into thinking she hasn't seen Josy. It would likely strain their relationship and give Josy a chance for some time in the limelight. And if Josy winds up rooming with Heather, it could give us yet another chance for an awkward Heather peeping scene.



Yeah, I find the obsession with virginity extremely overplayed. I'm hoping the topic is simply never discussed, though I doubt I'll get my wish.

That girl in the lunch scene, the one that Josy and Maya went to HS with. I think Maya's attitude to popular party girl's is shaped by her past with girl's like her.

 

[JagsFan84]

Why do you guys write about Jill being a NTR infact she is not NTR and the proof is MC has touched her in between her thighs the night after MC and chad has fight incident tools place and the other when at the Bella's house sofa where MC dry humping Jill but she says it's going too fast for her MC would fell if something there was odd but he didn't so I request you guys never say anything about Jill being NTR

You want to maybe put some commas or periods in that paragraph there, buddy?

[Shakes head in disbelief at awful grammar and lack of punctuation.]

 

[felicemastronzo]

I think that wallpaper is the least attractive Camila has ever been. Maybe it's the lighting? Whatever the cause, I certainly didn't see that coming!



Maya may well blame the other HOTs for Quinn' actions, because she doesn't know otherwise. From her point of view, Quinn was acting for the HOTs as their vice president. Yes, it's silly that the MC still hasn't told her anything more specific about Quinn than her being 'evil' (if that!), but there we are.

It does seem plausible that Josy might join up with the HOTs, though. She mentioned being tempted to join before, and it could fit the narrative if Maya manages to trick her father into thinking she hasn't seen Josy. It would likely strain their relationship and give Josy a chance for some time in the limelight. And if Josy winds up rooming with Heather, it could give us yet another chance for an awkward Heather peeping scene.



Yeah, I find the obsession with virginity extremely overplayed. I'm hoping the topic is simply never discussed, though I doubt I'll get my wish.

Maya just doesn't like HOTs, they wouldn't have liked it even if she got the free tuition ..

at first she considers them bitches, and after her experience with them I don't think she has changed her mind.
Quinn treated her very badly, Sage didn't even listen to her problems, not caring in the least about her situation. even Mona eventually "betrayed" her. and the other HOTs don't seem to me to have much in common with Maya (apart from MC's penis...)

these are all events that have also affected Josy but marginally. in my opinion, without a more or less explicit break between the two girls, it would still be strange that Josy moved to the HOTs.

we players know that Maya's father is an impending danger, but the girls are not, for the girls the father is the same danger that he represented when Josy arrived at the BR.

Maya should ask Josy to leave or Josy should propose it. but until when? until the end of college?

but also narratively: chapter 6 ended with a twist that this separation would make a sensational flop

 

[OtstrelDebilov]

New figure released by Daz, what do you think will Dr. use it? Head has changed

 

[Deleted member 2528490]

these are all events that have also affected Josy but marginally. in my opinion, without a more or less explicit break between the two girls, it would still be strange that Josy moved to the HOTs.

we players know that Maya's father is an impending danger, but the girls are not, for the girls the father is the same danger that he represented when Josy arrived at the BR.

Maya should ask Josy to leave or Josy should propose it. but until when? until the end of college?

but also narratively: chapter 6 ended with a twist that this separation would make a sensational flop

MC and the girls are most likely about to find out that Maya's father comes and goes into their room whenever he pleases. Somehow, he's got a key to their room. That alone should be enough for Josy or Maya to move into the HOTs house, since the danger of Douchebag-of-the-Year showing up unannounced and without any warning is now constant. And since Maya just blew up at the HOTs, that leaves Josy.

Its a pretty obvious and linear progression from the end of ep6 to Josy living in the HOTs house.

 

[felicemastronzo]

MC and the girls are most likely about to find out that Maya's father comes and goes into their room whenever he pleases. Somehow, he's got a key to their room. That alone should be enough for Josy or Maya to move into the HOTs house, since the danger of Douchebag-of-the-Year showing up unannounced and without any warning is now constant. And since Maya just blew up at the HOTs, that leaves Josy.

Its a pretty obvious and linear progression from the end of ep6 to Josy living in the HOTs house.

doesn't make much sense to me

if Maya's father finds out it's too late to send Josy elsewhere, the damage would already be done.
if they find out that he has the key they will have the lock changed, and may even report him.

Maya can't go to the HOTs after the scene with Quinn, Josy might as well temporarily, but waiting for what to happen?

for me the reason for this choice is still missing

 

[y K4M1K4Z3 y]

o que What page is the Lily wallpaper?

 

[Meushi]

What page is the Lily wallpaper?

https://f95zone.to/threads/25332/post-4973130

This will return all of N7s 10k patrons wallpaper series posts.

 

[shazba]

MC and the girls are most likely about to find out that Maya's father comes and goes into their room whenever he pleases. Somehow, he's got a key to their room. That alone should be enough for Josy or Maya to move into the HOTs house, since the danger of Douchebag-of-the-Year showing up unannounced and without any warning is now constant. And since Maya just blew up at the HOTs, that leaves Josy.

Its a pretty obvious and linear progression from the end of ep6 to Josy living in the HOTs house.

Once they find out the dad has a key, I dunno, just change the fucking lock. It takes like 5 minutes to change a lock.

But that point, that the dad may have been coming and going as he pleased for a while, that's fucking creepy.

doesn't make much sense to me

if Maya's father finds out it's too late to send Josy elsewhere, the damage would already be done.
if they find out that he has the key they will have the lock changed, and may even report him.

Maya can't go to the HOTs after the scene with Quinn, Josy might as well temporarily, but waiting for what to happen?

for me the reason for this choice is still missing

Given Maya's already enrolled, if the dad finds out and and stops the payments, I imagine it doesn't mean that she is suddenly kicked out of college. She'd surely be paid up until the end of the semester or something.

So here's a simple solution. Instead of the girls running to the MC to get their problems solved, why doesn't Josy fuck her way through college on a Quinn's Restaurant funded scholarship, and redirect her dad's payments to Maya. Bang, everyone wins, including the incest crowd when Tommy finds out it's Josy on the other side of the toilet stall sucking his fat one.

And then MC can spend his 5K over at the Pink Rose guilt free. "Hi Nicole, oh, another freebie, this day just keeps getting better."

 

[felicemastronzo]

Once they find out the dad has a key, I dunno, just change the fucking lock. It takes like 5 minutes to change a lock.

But that point, that the dad may have been coming and going as he pleased for a while, that's fucking creepy.

Given Maya's already enrolled, if the dad finds out and and stops the payments, I imagine it doesn't mean that she is suddenly kicked out of college. She'd surely be paid up until the end of the semester or something.

So here's a simple solution. Instead of the girls running to the MC to get their problems solved, why doesn't Josy fuck her way through college on a Quinn's Restaurant funded scholarship, and redirect her dad's payments to Maya. Bang, everyone wins, including the incest crowd when Tommy finds out it's Josy on the other side of the toilet stall sucking his fat one.

And then MC can spend his 5K over at the Pink Rose guilt free. "Hi Nicole, oh, another freebie, this day just keeps getting better."

at least it would be an explanation ....

and would serve to earn Maya other fans, those of the NTR

 

[Deleted member 2528490]

doesn't make much sense to me

if Maya's father finds out it's too late to send Josy elsewhere, the damage would already be done.
if they find out that he has the key they will have the lock changed, and may even report him.

Maya can't go to the HOTs after the scene with Quinn, Josy might as well temporarily, but waiting for what to happen?

for me the reason for this choice is still missing

You're assuming the dad finds out about Josy and Maya being back together. There's a number of ways that could play out. One of which is the much theorized MC pretending to be Maya or Josy's boyfriend. Or maybe Josy has to take a shit, and only Maya and MC go to the room first and find the dad, and while they confront him, Josy hears it from the outside and stays away. Or some other scenario.

But the danger of Daddy showing up whenever he pleases unannounced still remains. And so Josy moves in to the HOT house.

As for "waiting for what to happen?" Thats literally what Maya's plotline is about. Finding a solution to her dad's bullshit.

EDIT: Hell, you know what, maybe DogshitDaddy DOES find out about Josy and Maya living together. And sets down an ultimatum of "one of you gets the hell out of this room or Maya's not getting the money". Queue Josy to the HOTs.

Once they find out the dad has a key, I dunno, just change the fucking lock. It takes like 5 minutes to change a lock.

But that point, that the dad may have been coming and going as he pleased for a while, that's fucking creepy.

Well, changing the key won't really do anything, imo. The dad managed to get a key somehow in the first place. Presumably, he'd just a copy of the new key the same way.

 

[felicemastronzo]

You're assuming the dad finds out about Josy and Maya being back together. There's a number of ways that could play out. One of which is the much theorized MC pretending to be Maya or Josy's boyfriend. Or maybe Josy has to take a shit, and only Maya and MC go to the room first and find the dad, and while they confront him, Josy hears it from the outside and stays away. Or some other scenario.

But the danger of Daddy showing up whenever he pleases unannounced still remains. And so Josy moves in to the HOT house.

As for "waiting for what to happen?" Thats literally what Maya's plotline is about. Finding a solution to her dad's bullshit.


Well, changing the key won't really do anything, imo. The dad managed to get a key somehow in the first place. Presumably, he'd just a copy of the new key the same way.

if the father does not find Josy it makes no sense that Mc pretend to be someone's boyfriend, what good would it be?

how would Maya's father justify his presence in his daughter's room? either he catches them red-handed or he just risks a complaint and losing the advantage of the key and surprise visits.

if instead the boys do not find anyone in the room I don't see why they should decide to change thei behavior

Maya's father has always visited his daughter, but this does not convince them of the danger of living together, the father could have knocked on the door even during rehearsals with Mr. Pinky ..

I am not saying that it is impossible, but today there is no reason

 

[Deleted member 2528490]

if the father does not find Josy it makes no sense that Mc pretend to be someone's boyfriend, what good would it be?

I don't think you're understanding my posts at all.
Scenario 1: MC, Maya, Josie go to the room. Find Dad. MC pretends to be one of their boyfriends.
Scenario 2: MC, Maya go to the room. Josie takes a shit, or forgets something and goes to get it or whatever. Comes back, here's Dad, leaves until he's gone.
You're confusing two different situations together.

how would Maya's father justify his presence in his daughter's room? either he catches them red-handed or he just risks a complaint and losing the advantage of the key and surprise visits.

What needs to be justified? "Shut up or you won't get the tuition money."

if instead the boys do not find anyone in the room I don't see why they should decide to change thei behavior

Sure, yeah. But then there's no point to the ep6 cliffhanger. That whole cliffhanger is MC/Maya/Josie going to the room while Dad is there. Thats literally the big "oh shit whats going to happen next time" moment.

Maya's father has always visited his daughter, but this does not convince them of the danger of living together, the father could have knocked on the door even during rehearsals with Mr. Pinky ..

I am not saying that it is impossible, but today there is no reason

Previous visits, the dad called, if I remember correctly. This time, he's here unannounced, entering the room without permission, using a key he should not have. If you cannot tell the difference between these two situations, I don't know what to tell you.


EDIT: Bear in mind, I'm not actually siding one way or the other with Josie going to the HOTs. I'm just saying, with the way Ep6 ended, there is a logical and straight line to Josie moving in with the HOTs . So dismissing that possiblity is silly, imo. Thats all.

 

[felicemastronzo]

I don't think you're understanding my posts at all.
Scenario 1: MC, Maya, Josie go to the room. Find Dad. MC pretends to be one of their boyfriends.
Scenario 2: MC, Maya go to the room. Josie takes a shit, or forgets something and goes to get it or whatever. Comes back, here's Dad, leaves until he's gone.
You're confusing two different situations together.

the first scenario detonates the bomb, it is not credible that Maya's father finds her with Josy and is willing to believe the fairy tales they want to tell him

the second scenario would cancel the twist of the closing of the sixth chapter, at that point it would be better not to find anyone, at least in this way the twist would only be postponed.

What needs to be justified? "Shut up or you won't get the tuition money."

I do not agree.

forget that it is very controversial that the father has the money of a student loan.

but if he does not find Josy in the room, the father MUST justify his presence, it is not that the tuition justifies any of his interference

it does not make sense. imagine even worse what would happen if Maya walked into the room with another girl, her father would go to jail.

so either the father already knows about Josy or he goes away.

Previous visits, the dad called, if I remember correctly. This time, he's here unannounced, entering the room without permission, using a key he should not have. If you cannot tell the difference between these two situations, I don't know what to tell you.

here it is you who did not understand me.

that the father can show up at his daughter's door is a real risk, but this does not stop the two girls from living together.

finding him inside the room at night is another situation, but that one day he unexpectedly knocked on his daughter's room would have been a perfectly normal scenario, which the two girls did not care too much about.

so if they are not aware of their father's nocturnal visit I don't think they would change their behavior

if instead the boys do not find anyone in the room I don't see why they should decide to change thei behavior

Maya's father has always visited his daughter, but this does not convince them of the danger of living together, the father could have knocked on the door even during rehearsals with Mr. Pinky ..

the two sentences were in the same speech