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My last post, the one immediately above your, answers the typical misconception that Jill dumped the mc because he didn't go on the date.That was a long comment your wrote. Well thought out though.
While I don't think Jill is domineering, and she is kind, she is either stupid or too selfish for me. Childish (inexperienced) people can be selfish. They don't understand that relationships aren't fairy tales, they are compromise and tons of fucking work. Jill literally springs this grand romantic gesture on the MC, but only implies is a casual thing. And when she does tell Fuckface, he explains that he already promised to take care of his sick friend.
Yeah, it sucks for Jill and i'm sure she's disappointed, but MC did nothing wrong here. And if this is a dealbreaker for Jill, her attitude should be a dealbreaker for all of us. If someone is ok with their significant other bailing on taking care of someone they already promised to help, because something more pleasant came up, thats not a good thing. Jill doesn't just accept this, she encourages it. She should be thrilled her BF is a good friend, then show him how she would be a great BEST FRIEND for him to have. Instead, she reacts possesively and when she doesn't get the attention, she dumps him for no reason.
No i don't blame Jill. This actually seems a touch out of character (trash pandas are known for their easygoing nature), I do blame DPC for taking a cheap way out to narrow the paths, and in doing so, writing Jill OOC.
That being said there's nothing we can do about it. And if we take the story as written, Jill doesn't deserve my MC's affections. A secure girlfriend is a good girlfriend. And a secure girlfriend knows i'll put her first and be excited to hang out with her, so if i'm taking care of someone else, its cause that NEEDS to happen.
Don't get me wrong, I'll still bang Jill, unprotected and to the finish, but purely so i can get her pregnant and then dump her at the alter. Cause i'm a good person, and she's a bad person.
In life, there are many choices, some will open doors, some will close doors, and many of the consequences are indirect.
If the picnic doesn't happen, a number of things don't happen.
- The mc doesn't share the tragedy of his birth with Jill.
- The mc doesn't express his strong resolve in overcoming Tybalt's BS.
- They don't share a romantic encounter in the rain.
- The mc doesn't tell Jill that he's falling for her (going by memory here, I think he says something like that).
I don't think we really need robust, indisputable drive as to why a female character behaves a certain way. You sure as shit don't get that in the real world!I agree that the picnic was a pivotal moment for the Jill path and as such must be required to progress. But that's a purely Doylist explanation. The Watsonian argument - that Jill's passion for the MC waned when she didn't see him thanks to Tybalt's ultimatum - is both unsatisfying and, IMHO, unsupported by what we actually see in game.
It's unsatisfying because there's no logical reason the MC needed to shut Jill down cold turkey when she springs her picnic on him after he already agreed to take care of a sick friend! The only reason Jill can lose interest is because DPC refuses to let us contact her after that choice. Even if we bought into Jill's ludicrous levels of superstition, the MC still knows he owes her a date, yet he sets on his ass ignoring her until Bella drags him back into it (at which point it's too late).
It's unsupported because there's no satisfactory explanation for why Jill goes from 100% chasing the MC to "Then why haven't you [tried to see me] more?" at the drop of a hat. She was willing to defy Tybalt and ask the MC out once, why not do so again when he actually has free time? The only plausible justifications are either she resents the MC going to see a girl instead joining her picnic, or that she's really did think that picnic date was astrologically perfect or some such nonsense. Neither paints Jill in a good light.
I'm sure this wasn't what DPC intended, but sadly it's what we got. DPC really should have had Jill ask the MC to go on a picnic first, THEN have Sage ask for help once he was committed. Now there's at least *a* reason for Jill to interpret missing the picnic as rejecting her (even if her logic is still spotty).
Jill is a "human" character, like so many of the others. With character flaws and not a robotic personality. To complain that she breaks out of character (the mc being a "Chick" guy and looking after a sick friend should be encouraged by Jill) is to paint her as two dimensional. She's not just a "Chick mc" loving girl. She's also superstitious, she's also naïve, she's also confused.
She's allowed to have confused feelings. When the mc turns her down and doesn't make alternative arrangements, she's allowed to feel down (sure the mc could have made alternative arrangements, he could have also dropped in to see Sage after the date too, but that shit didn't happen).
Any girl who makes you an impromptu picnic and get turned down at your doorstep is gonna feel dejected, no matter what your excuse is. People's feelings override their intelligence a lot. That doesn't mean she hates the mc, but it was the difference between wanting to take the step and invite him to meet her friends or not.
Really, when it comes down to what happened with Jill and the picnic, it's a matter of accepting, "Shit happens". And if you can't, then you're behaving the exact same way that you're criticising Jill for behaving.
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