felicemastronzo
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on Josy wouldn't have changed much in the first part, she wouldn't have had the guilt of betrayal, but she would still have had the drama of non-acceptance at the BR, so still we would have ended up with MC at the BR not knowing what happened to Josy and her announcing herself only at the last moment.Ok, time for another "What if" situation:
What if... Josy hadn't EVER known Tremolo OR Maya BEFORE university
First impressions:
- Maya wouldn't be in trouble with his father (unless she knew another girl, but I think it's unlikely, being so shy)
- Maya didn't ask to join the HOT's
- The history between Tremolo and Maya did happen at least until Josy the reject appears
- No early throuple drama (living Maya and Josy together in the same room can start it)
More ideas?
at that point probably depending on the relationship with Maya there would have been a fork in the road where Josy may or may not have caught MC and Maya in intimate attitudes, or even this could have become a DPC “trap” where regardless of the decisions made Josy would have misunderstood the relationship with Maya or the other way around.
if that had been a canon passage it wouldn't have changed much with the role reversal of an MC trying to explain himself and the girls wounded avoiding him (with all the simp on the side of the girls running away).
more difficult would have been to justify Mc seeking hospitality around that only makes sense if Mc has a problem with Maya
at that point perhaps the relationship between Josy and Tommy would have been better developed, otherwise she would still have had to wait until the eighth chapter somehow.