EmperorGus
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- Oct 11, 2020
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Some decent points in there.If you think that this is Josy's story, you really, really, have not been paying attention. Josy refuses to complain about a lot of things in her life; such as her abusive stepmother, abusive stepbrother, cheating shitbag of a father and cold, disapproving mother but she has just as many problems as Sage/Maya if not more. Her relationship with Maya almost imploded because her controlling father and bitch stepmother grounded his adult daughter. They did make up later because he is a malignant narcissist and knows how to weaponize her love for him against her. He's been doing it for years. She has been pushing this shit down for years and trying to see the best in everybody. So when she gets shit talked by a random guy that she was just trying to be nice to all that pushed down shit came bubbling to the surface. She is used to getting devalued like that, and she tries to find a positive way to change it. It seems likely to me that the fashion and blogging aspect is aimed at getting attention from one person: her mother. You see this more if you play her route, but she is basically trying to emulate her mother's career. She isn't attention-seeking so much as running home to mommy. Perhaps this is to address the mistake she made in taking her dad's side during the divorce. In any case, she matches Maya well in the baggage department.
But, please, make better use of paragraphs and line spacing so it's not so damn hard on the eyes.