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felicemastronzo

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Seriously, I just want to know the name of the dev/VN that has raised the "writing" standards so high over here that this is always treated like shit.
It may not be the best but, is still better than most of the crap that we see in this genre. Imho the writing is impressive considering he is managing so many characters with some level of drama attached to everyone.
With so much going on, the writing will seem a bit off sometimes but as long as it's fun it shouldn't matter.

And looking at the no. of pages in this thread, it's safe to say that it's quite enjoyable for a lot of people. So as the game fulfills its primary objective, "good" writing is only secondary.
someone give this man a cookie !!!

on what is well written or not everyone will always have their own idea that depends on the taste, experience and competence of each individual person.

you can love terrible films and find absolute masterpieces boring, and you are not wrong in either case.

the only thing we have to defend is how we spend our time. like talking about how treacherous Maya is ...
 

Holy Bacchus

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She is nowhere as good as Harley Quinn.
She is a whore. Pimp. Drug Dealer.
Not even in the same universe as Harley. Sorry Bacchus, you are totally wrong.
It's not a 1:1 comparison. They share similar character traits and could have a similar character arc, so the comparison in this regard is quite accurate.

Also, Harley was a murdering psychopath when she was with the Joker and helped him do all sorts of unspeakable things, so I think the actions of old, villain Harley far outweigh Quinn's petty crimes.

DPC can not handle critical thoughts. I seriously doubt he looks at this. HE wants to be worshiped for his sub par writing and great renders. IF someone else took over the writing, like anyone else, it would be better. His renders are his ONLY strong suit.
Seriously, why do you keep harping on about this? I know you got banned on their Steam for voicing some criticism, but feels like you're holding on a little too lightly to a silly grudge.

If DPC's writing was so bad, there would a lot more dicsussion about it, but there isn't. There's far more discussion about the story, plot threads, characters arcs, etc, precisely because the writing is good. They might not always handle everything the right way, like the M&J situation in ep 4, but even the most experienced screenwriters and novelists can miss the mark occasionally.

Honestly, I feel like you need to let this go because the writing is not that bad. If it was, people wouldn't be so invested in this story and the characters, and the reason why they are is because it's a well-written story that has made people care so much.

WT for v. 0.5.2 please!
Seriously, check the OP. :rolleyes:

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Where is android at
Broken and unplayable. There is no working version.
 

daksmkadfad

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Also he left this forum because crybabies started harassing him during Acting Lessons development because they couldn't take that game's last act.
I'm sorry i dunno who's the crybaby here, he as a dev knew (or at least i hope he knew) the "risks" and that his story will get negatives comments too not only praising ones, no he just got himself locked in his ivory tower after he hit the jackpot that's it, let's be fair...
 

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Probably asked a thousand times already but any news for chapter 6? (I don't wanna join and all that jazz)
 
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So far i like every part of this game i wonder what the next update will bring oh yeah and i still wanna beat up jocks.
Considering the title of episode 6 I'd say... damage control ?

The beginbing of the reconstruction of the DIK mansion.
The consequences of Cathy's picture on rooster.
More shenanigans between M&J and MC.( To be honest wither we're friends or in trouple with them, they are in a stale mate right now and there are more important matters. Beside they were focused a lot in the last to episode)

A 2nd date with Jill
Some progress with Bella about hers and MC's urges ( more story-wise than sex-wise)
Development with Sage and Chad, because that kiss at the end of episode 5 is not a simple fucking buddy kiss with no strings attached.

If Tybalt got punched, a scene with Jade and no consequences for MC.
A sex scene with Cathy?

An episode ending with Mc going back home for his birthday and reading his letter about his mom.
 

d_pedestrian

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even after Maya and Josy did not accept to have relationship with MC they still show they have feelings for him, especially josy. Any chance to get back in a relationship with them after break up?
 

felicemastronzo

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Considering the title of episode 6 I'd say... damage control ?

The beginbing of the reconstruction of the DIK mansion.
The consequences of Cathy's picture on rooster.
More shenanigans between M&J and MC.( To be honest wither we're friends or in trouple with them, they are in a stale mate right now and there are more important matters. Beside they were focused a lot in the last to episode)

A 2nd date with Jill
Some progress with Bella about hers and MC's urges ( more story-wise than sex-wise)
Development with Sage and Chad, because that kiss at the end of episode 5 is not a simple fucking buddy kiss with no strings attached.

If Tybalt got punched, a scene with Jade and no consequences for MC.
A sex scene with Cathy?

An episode ending with Mc going back home for his birthday and reading his letter about his mom.
there should also be developments on the drug issue with Quinn's suppliers / partners

I'm starting to think this second season could be HOTs centric.

in the end there will be for sure the scavenger hunt, Quinn and her trades, Mona's Mistery and at this point I would also expect developments between Sage and Chad

even after Maya and Josy did not accept to have relationship with MC they still show they have feelings for him, especially josy. Any chance to get back in a relationship with them after break up?

with certainty nobody knows, we hope so

what Josy says after we help her with the bags seems to go in that direction
 

Holy Bacchus

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even after Maya and Josy did not accept to have relationship with MC they still show they have feelings for him, especially josy. Any chance to get back in a relationship with them after break up?
Probably, but we'll have to wait and see.
 
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