VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.11.1] [DrPinkCake]

[jaw1986baby]

And now i just wonder why all female road cyclists use men's bicycles.....
Are all of them potential axe murderers too or do they get last seasons bicycles from the men or what??

View attachment 1718671 i'll never see women's racing in the same light ever again....

Women's bike frames used to have a different geometry to allow for the wearing of dresses as was done by ladies of the era and no pants were allowed. The standard framing (considered men's bikes all along) is the best geometry for a quality machine

 

[hakuna-matata]

Cute butt my ass !.....
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OOOO my kind of party!

 

[Skeltom]

Exactly, I totally believe it's possible for MC and Quinn to end up together, but at what cost? That's what I meant by bittersweet ending.

I don't think anyone will die in this game, it doesn't look like that type of game to me (hope I'm right ), but I can totally see DPC writing endings where we end up with the girl we want, but where we'll still be left wondering if it was worth it all in the end.

I don't think anyone will die in this one either. I do see the potential for someone getting hurt pretty bad physically because Quinn is playing a dangerous game and all. I just hope it's not poor Rio taking the heat because she won't get away from Quinn.

DPC has shown however, that he is willing to murder someone just for shock and awe. AL didn't seem like a game it would happen in either, but it did. I'm really trying to not let it paint my opinion of what is possible and give them the benefit of a doubt but those things stick with you. You know?

 

[vogelbeest]

Women's bike frames used to have a different geometry to allow for the wearing of dresses as was done by ladies of the era and no pants were allowed. The standard framing (considered men's bikes all along) is the best geometry for a quality machine

Yeah, i know, it's carbon frames, those don't work well with the traditional women's frame form, it's not strong enough...

 

[vogelbeest]

I don't think anyone will die in this one either.

I think we atleast need a patreon voted poll on who we like to end up dead! It really doesn't need to be a burning house, anything goes! (or another patreon voted poll perhaps, but i'm okay with any creative way)

 

[Skeltom]

I think we atleast need a patreon voted poll on who we like to end up dead! It really doesn't need to be a burning house, anything goes! (or another patreon voted poll perhaps, but i'm okay with any creative way)

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To each there own. I think patreon votes are stupid myself, it's not really DPC creative way if he just panders to the voters. I don't have a problem if the votes are just for reward renders and whatnot but not for story elements.

 

[vogelbeest]

I think patreon votes are stupid myself, it's not really DPC creative way if he just panders to the voters.

Think DPC has his story and whatever happens happens, he's not gonna change it, so not to worry!
Doesn't mean i can't have a few favorites for a not so happy ending, okay, it doesn't need to be something severe, but sometimes karma rewards you by punishing your enemies too.

 

[OFT]

the male models aren't great on AVNs, but a creep like Bret I've rarely seen....

During a moment of clarity, I came to the realization that I was being very unfair to Bret.

Yeah, he creeped me the fuck out, just like his son:



I'm kidding. DO YOU HEAR THAT, DALLI? I'M KIDDING!


From their first meeting, I had the sense Bret was going to be trouble:



Especially when DPC focused on their hands touching:



I saw that, and thought, "Get you're grimy-ass hand off of her." And then to pile it on, DPC threw this at us as she left:



But then, nothing happened.


Later, during the bar scene I showed in my earlier post, Bret offered her a place to stay...



...and I was thinking, "Yeah, we all know what you want." He even gave her "The Look":



But then, nothing happened.


During Zoey's first tattoo scene, Emma and Jonah dipped out, leaving Bret and Zoey alone. He even told Jonah to lock the door (yes, I know it was past closing, but still)...



...and I was thinking, "OK, now he's going to make his move."

But then, nothing happened.


Afterwards, he invites her to his place for a few beers...



...and I was thinking, "This is it. His drunk ass is going to be all over her."

But then, nothing happened.


Wait a minute...he's supposed to be a creepazoid, right? When he walks in on Zoey getting her piercing...



...something actually happens:



He has the decency to walk out and give Zoey her privacy when he could have stayed and observed for "quality control purposes."


Towards the end of the Interlude, he showed up at Zoey's apartment because he was "in the area"...



Yeah, the fuck you were, Bret. Then to console her, he moved up nice and close, and wrapped his arm around her:



But then, nothing happened.


The Interlude has other implications of his feelings, including the "...but as friends, right?" comment, or the unenthusiastic kiss with Emma as Zoey was leaving, or the fact that he didn't deny a relationship with Zoey to Emma.

The truth as I see it is there is no doubt in my mind that he has feelings for her. But he never acted upon them. What he did do is provide Zoey with:

• Employment
• Companionship
• Friendly advice
• Consolation

So in my moment of clarity, I was forced to realize Bret's actually not that bad of a guy, although he still looks like a fucktard with that hair.

Fortunately, the clarity has passed, and I'm back to thinking he's creepy motherfucker.

 

[Skeltom]

Think DPC has his story and whatever happens happens, he's not gonna change it, so not to worry!
Doesn't mean i can't have a few favorites for a not so happy ending, okay, it doesn't need to be something severe, but sometimes karma rewards you by punishing your enemies too.

Yeah, I'm fine with not so good endings to. In his last(?) update he says that plans in the story can change from their first idea, and it's true for any creative prosses. If it's his choice to do so I'm all for it but if its because of someone else...

 

[BadamMan91]

thx

 

[felicemastronzo]

During a moment of clarity, I came to the realization that I was being very unfair to Bret.

Yeah, he creeped me the fuck out, just like his son:

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I'm kidding. DO YOU HEAR THAT, DALLI? I'M KIDDING!


From their first meeting, I had the sense Bret was going to be trouble:

View attachment 1718692 View attachment 1718696 View attachment 1718702

Especially when DPC focused on their hands touching:

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I saw that, and thought, "Get you're grimy-ass hand off of her." And then to pile it on, DPC threw this at us as she left:

View attachment 1718720 View attachment 1718726

But then, nothing happened.


Later, during the bar scene I showed in an earlier post, Bret offered her a place to stay...

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...and I was thinking, "Yeah, we all know what you want." He even gave her "The Look":

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But then, nothing happened.


During Zoey's first tattoo scene, Emma and Jonah dipped out, leaving Bret and Zoey alone. He even told Jonah to lock the door (yes, I know it was past closing, but still)...

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...and I was thinking, "OK, now he's going to make his move."

But then, nothing happened.


Afterwards, he invites her to his place for a few beers...

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...and I was thinking, "This is it. His drunk ass is going to be all over her."

But then, nothing happened.


Wait a minute...he's supposed to be a creepazoid, right? When he walks in on Zoey getting her piercing...

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...something actually happens:

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He has the decency to walk out and give Zoey her privacy when he could have stayed and observed for "quality control purposes."


Towards the end of the Interlude, he showed up at Zoey's apartment because he was "in the area"...

View attachment 1718760

Yeah, the fuck you were, Bret. Then to console her, he moved up nice and close, and wrapped his arm around her:

View attachment 1718761

But then, nothing happened.


The Interlude has other implications of his feelings, including the "...but as friends, right?" comment, or the unenthusiastic kiss with Emma as Zoey was leaving, or the fact that he didn't deny a relationship with Zoey to Emma.

The truth as I see it is there is no doubt in my mind that he has feelings for her. But he never acted upon them. What he did do is provide Zoey with:

• Employment
• Companionship
• Friendly advice
• Consolation

So in my moment of clarity, I was forced to realize Bret's actually not that bad of a guy, although he still looks like a fucktard with that hair.

Fortunately, the clarity has passed, and I'm back to thinking he's creepy motherfucker.

you're not the one who thought wrong

It is simply that the story as it is told does not make sense.

that Bret doesn't make even the slightest advance on Zoey is as unrealistic as Sage going through a year of abstinence.

 

[vogelbeest]

you're not the one who thought wrong

It is simply that the story as it is told does not make sense.

that Bret doesn't make even the slightest advance on Zoey is as unrealistic as Sage going through a year of abstinence.

Just assume whatever happened and with who, wasn't of any importance to the story. Once you start talking realism in a game there's always a bunch that wants a day and night cycle, eating, sleeping, hunger, tiredness and whatever implemented too.
(the same bunch that thinks it's weird to implement the need to piss and poop, because that would be just ridiculous)
It's not shown so no need for the tag.... that's all....

 

[felicemastronzo]

Just assume whatever happened and with who, wasn't of any importance to the story. Once you start talking realism in a game there's always a bunch that wants a day and night cycle, eating, sleeping, hunger, tiredness and whatever implemented too.
(the same bunch that thinks it's weird to implement the need to piss and poop, because that would be just ridiculous)
It's not shown so no need for the tag.... that's all....

in this case it was important though

if Bret had made the slightest advance toward Zoey, and she had friendly stopped him, the rest of the story would have been more natural
instead so Emma is a raving lunatic, that objectively there is no reason to forgive her and to give her a second chance with Bret

two renders really, Bret trying to caress her and Zoey breaking free

and also Sage doesn't come out very well. but that's a different case

 

[vogelbeest]

if Bret had made the slightest advance toward Zoey, and she had friendly stopped him, the rest of the story would have been more natural
instead so Emma is a raving lunatic, that objectively there is no reason to forgive her and to give her a second chance with Bret

two renders really, Bret trying to caress her and Zoey breaking free

Emma being a raving lunatic for that doesn't make much sense either, lets face it even if Bret and Zoey did anything it would be their decision only. Emma is extremely jalous and in a unreasonable manner, she has feelings for Bret but there's no relation, she assumes there is something between Bret and Zoey and goes on tilt.... I dunno, but i don't really think the other option would feel more natural, maybe it would feel Emma's reaction is a bit more deserved that way, but it's still overreacting...

 

[crabsinthekitchen]

in this case it was important though

if Bret had made the slightest advance toward Zoey, and she had friendly stopped him, the rest of the story would have been more natural
instead so Emma is a raving lunatic, that objectively there is no reason to forgive her and to give her a second chance with Bret

two renders really, Bret trying to caress her and Zoey breaking free

and also Sage doesn't come out very well. but that's a different case

Emma is totally a paranoid bitch. In what world a dude walking out immediately after seeing a girl's tits means they're fucking?

 

[sixart]

In what world a dude walking out immediately after seeing a girl's tits means they're fucking?

In the world of the deluded mind

 

[DVDMills]

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This game fucking smacks

 

[sixart]

it's weird to implement the need to piss and poop

I think you are right... that is not needed... BUT ! when a developer decides that it is an option ( and task ) to build or renovate your house... isn't it an interesting thing that said house contains various rooms but for some reason the bathroom ( or water closet ) and even the fucking shitter is missing ???!!! It is not BADIK so everybody relax but such bullshits do happen where we come back to the ^ first point... if you neglect these things that's fine but at least create the possibility that our MCs could do their business if it's needed for some reason ( it's not vital for us to get a visual on it but hope you get the general idea )

 

[dalli_x]

but the problem for the inheritance is not Rusty, it's the fact that Lynette was in fact disinherited

the first check that came to Mc didn't shock him one bit, much less a car with air conditioning....

Lynette was not disinherited because she predeceased her. The MC only received $5,000 because Lynette did not have more. The MC is her successor in the line of succession. Ergo, the grandfather must disinherit the MC.

 

[felicemastronzo]

Emma being a raving lunatic for that doesn't make much sense either, lets face it even if Bret and Zoey did anything it would be their decision only. Emma is extremely jalous and in a unreasonable manner, she has feelings for Bret but there's no relation, she assumes there is something between Bret and Zoey and goes on tilt.... I dunno, but i don't really think the other option would feel more natural, maybe it would feel Emma's reaction is a bit more deserved that way, but it's still overreacting...

there is no limit to the worst, you're right

but at least Emma would have had a reason to think that there was something between the 2, instead so she only had reasons to think that there was nothing, and despite this she went with the maximum possible penalty for Zoey (the internet is forever, a slap passes)

Emma is a Leah who takes it out on social media rather than with matches