VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.11.1] [DrPinkCake]

[vir_cotto]

I need to see some activities that would require a "mastermind" in the first place...
The prostitution - girls could have set that up easily by themselves,especially having the amazing,the incredible,the sensational Quinn on their side.
The drug trafficking(?) - I`ve seen drug use so far...but let`s assume the trafficking part(because the DiK`s have to have money from somewhere),here`s how it works:you get a supplier,you sell from "under the table",you clean the money - it`s easy,it`s something Tommy could be doing on his own.

We have a scene with Burke in the stall and Quinn+Riona leaving the toilet - that scene is there for a reason,that reason could be Burke cheating on his wife,with the students or having some pull on Quinn.
Not saying that the "mastermind" thesis doesn`t make sens,it does,again I have not seen anything that would require said "mastermind"

Prostitution - as girl or girls doing as private business is something that could go without the problem. ORGANIZED prostitution - where one person is practically running bordello at the very small college - FOR YEARS - is something impossible. That requires a powerful person to cover up and control that or you'll have all government agencies at the campus before you can say "otorhinolaryngology".

And when you add to that drug trafficking... Again, it's not some smartass selling marijuana here and there. We're talking about the big operation. When new fraternity starts overnight and buys a big mansion?! That would raise alarms everywhere. Unless someone is behind that.

Of course, there is a possibility DPC didn't really think thoroughly and he just throws those things as interesting additions to the story. But, so far, we know DPC is very detailed about everything in his stories.

 

[vir_cotto]

Quinn is a big player here but she's not the mastermind. There is a bigger enemy the MC hasn't seen yet whether that's Burke, Tommy or someone else.

Tommy isn't smart enough. I really expect a story arc where MC will need to save Tommy because all of his BS he get into.

 

[vir_cotto]

In fact, regarding Tommy, I think he's idiot thinking how his whole business is successful not even knowing he is just a pawn for someone with more brains. Maybe that so many times commented scene, with Quinn taking drugs and DIK we don't see the face, is trying to show us exactly that?

 

[Goblin Baily: DILF]

In order for her to never be surprised by anything,she would have to be a fortune teller

I'm surprised you of all people saing that Quinn is limited and can't do everything....

 

[Mormont]

he is just a pawn for someone with more brains.

This right here is Tommy in a nutshell just add waste of space junkie to that and it's exactly all he is.

 

[Grohal]

MC, Derek and Troy - the three musketeers who will topple the hierarchy within the school.

Doing their own fraternity with blackjack and hookers.

 

[mihi]

Maya for life

 

[Nevu]

I was thinking and don't recall anyone else suggesting the possibility of a choice between visiting pops and going on a date/meetings with one of the LI... for example Jill wants the MC to meet her parents while on the other hand MC hadn't seen super dad in a while.... obviously people playing this as a porn game would choose Jill, but what if in the meanwhile pops had a heart attack and there was no one to call an ambulance ... obviously the MC would be suffering emotionally, and even blame the girl,... now let's assume that the player picked going back home, dad is saved but it was a bonding opportunity that was passed...
Who needs house fires...

Well then call my MC an anime protagonist because he's about to lose his father for character development.

 

[Blablablafapper]

Maya has sex with someone else?

If DPC did that he'd lose like half of his patreons lol

 

[Blablablafapper]

Thing is with Burke being mastermind why would he draw needless attention to himself we all know the guy is a creep and a perv and if he did anything out of line he would surely be caught out.

We haven't seen him do anything too crazy or out of line though.

 

[Blablablafapper]

I need to see some activities that would require a "mastermind" in the first place...
The prostitution - girls could have set that up easily by themselves,especially having the amazing,the incredible,the sensational Quinn on their side.
The drug trafficking(?) - I`ve seen drug use so far...but let`s assume the trafficking part(because the DiK`s have to have money from somewhere),here`s how it works:you get a supplier,you sell from "under the table",you clean the money - it`s easy,it`s something Tommy could be doing on his own.

We have a scene with Burke in the stall and Quinn+Riona leaving the toilet - that scene is there for a reason,that reason could be Burke cheating on his wife,with the students or having some pull on Quinn.
Not saying that the "mastermind" thesis doesn`t make sens,it does,again I have not seen anything that would require said "mastermind"

You seem to be under the assumption that Quinn is running everything quite smoothly and doesn't need any sort of outside help from another person/people.

 

[Mormont]

We haven't seen him do anything too crazy or out of line though.

So he is taking a shit from the stall that Quinn was coming from and he is the big bad there is nothing to pint towards him being anything other than a lecherous teacher who may or may not be married to Jade

 

[vir_cotto]

We don't have anything solid against Burke. All evidence against him is circumstantial.

We saw someone with pants similar to his in the toilet. He doesn't have ANY content except that little scene in the library where he was creepily over-friendly with MC - almost like an archetypical villain in Hollywood movies. And he is one of the persons with BIO, despite everything before mentioned.

So, because most people believe there is a mastermind behind everything, he was seen as an obvious culprit, at least for now.

 

[Blablablafapper]

In fact, regarding Tommy, I think he's idiot thinking how his whole business is successful not even knowing he is just a pawn for someone with more brains. Maybe that so many times commented scene, with Quinn taking drugs and DIK we don't see the face, is trying to show us exactly that?

Spot on I also think Tommy is just a dumb junkie and a pawn.

 

[Grohal]

If DPC did that he'd lose like half of his patreons lol

q.f.t.

 

[Mormont]

This right here is Tommy in a nutshell just add waste of space junkie to that and it's exactly all he is.

Spot on I also think Tommy is just a dumb junkie and a pawn.

Hmmm

 

[Blablablafapper]

It's not realistically possible for one college girl to be in full control of a prostitution ring in a school unless she has backing. Let alone if you add in her involvement with narcotics.

 

[Blablablafapper]

Hmmm

Does Tommy radiate intelligence and carefulness to you? Certainly not to me.

 

[vir_cotto]

If we're using AL logic, "The big bad guy" is someone who we perceived to be completely opposite of that.
Rusty? Jacob? Magnar? Someone we didn't meet yet? Burke?

Just to remind you that Burke is the only one of those who have influence and power in the college.

 

[Goblin Baily: DILF]

Well then call my MC an anime protagonist because he's about to lose his father for character development.

Character development.... that's precisely what Jill lacks, so far she's just the intro girl turned meme due to rabid fans unable to admit that she has no personality. And this is different from Bella where her outer coldness is just a fasade... Jill is just a pretty face, but as a LI.... she makes Josy look like waifu material, and I hate Josy .