felicemastronzo
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- May 17, 2020
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Honestly, the thing I'm most curious about the next chapter is really the handling of jealousy/rivarly/anger between Bella and JillI've said it here several times, it always annoyed the fuck out of me that DPC wrote Bella that way in EP7, she breaks up with MC if he bangs Cathy but doesn't bat an eye if he's still pursuing Jill? Really?
I mean, I get that she does that if she finds out about Cathy because she realizes MC can't keep it in his pants, but I'm certain she realized how hypocritical af the way she was behaving was. By then she had already made out with him several times, sucked him off and even slept with him, she had even already realized the way she felt about him wasn't just carnal ffs. By the time she went on the tennis date with him it was obvious they wouldn't be able to just let it go and pretend nothing happened. The longer they waited to tell Jill the worst it would be, now they got the worst possible outcome out of this shitshow and Jill found out on her own while they were railing each other behind her back, well fucking done...
It's obvious DPC did this on purpose to open a rift between Jill and Bella, but he better make up for these writing blunders with a good backstory and explanation why she behaved the way she did before deciding to get serious with MC.
in the case of Jill not really being wooed will it go smoothly?
but even in the case of double-crossing, if in the end Mc chooses Bella what will happen? i always expected a game over, but the way the 8th chapter went Mc does everything out in the open, Bella knows everything, and she asks him to leave Jill (then he doesn't make it in time because DPC wants him to not make it in time..), but Bella has nothing to blame MC for. yet we all know there will be tears and doors slamming