One thing is it's not badly patronising like some works esp. those who want to describe for you play by play what exactly pervy thoughts the MC is thinking rather than actually get some dialogue going.
Yeah, I don't like that either.
Nope, apparently not reading...Yeah - "something like Amish" - scared of lightbulbs and making butter in their free time?
Nope. We already had that. She's talking about someone she can't be every day with. She is every day in that shop. So...What about if she was the girl steave dad was cheating with ??
I'm currently pretending not to be all that interested
Like i'm perfectly normal.. almost decent!Don't expect it to be anything serious. Its a porn flick through and through
Yeah, you could almost fool the normal person...I'm currently pretending not to be all that interested
Don't expect it to be anything serious. Its a porn flick through and through
yes but she cant be with him because then everyone would know..
that she was the girl he was cheating with. 
... and if you guys come now up that she will cheat again ... if you treat your girl right and you and her are happy she never cheat again
We'll find it out sooner or later. I find it kinda pointless, the whole 'I'm in a relationship' thingy if we don't to be honest. Steve dad is just not interesting enough to be that person. Its a "meh, who cares" character.yes but she cant be with him because then everyone would know..
Oh you poor thing! I like your fondness for romantic tales though
Good on you giving Josy some hopefor me its irrelevant who is the other ... i will stay faithfull to Josy ... cause the MC and her are Soulmates
nice to see a bit of loyalty I know all about that with Jade 
i have to disagree on this, i learned this the hard way...
What? To stay loyal to a married woman who is looking for a boytoy only? If you'd ask her if she'd be interested in a full commitment, Rick Astley style, she'd probably laugh. In game terms, she could be a relief girlI know all about that with Jade
Hot one too. It would be ideal if she could get the gym receptionist into a threesome for extra fun friday nights!
Married women aren't off-limits especially ones that look like Jade and clearly, everything is not so rosy with her marriage so yeah it might start off as a bit of fun and lead to something a bit more seriousWhat? To stay loyal to a married woman who is looking for a boytoy only? If you'd ask her if she'd be interested in a full commitment, Rick Astley style, she'd probably laugh. In game terms, she could be a relief girl
besides it's more fun to go after the married ones 
It’s likely Josy is in an unhappy relationship. But what if she’s not? What if her partner is treating her right but she’s still cheating anyways because she’s more attracted to the MC.for me its irrelevant who is the other ... i will stay faithfull to Josy ... cause the MC and her are Soulmates
The most serious it could ever lead is a spin-off short comic that details aformentioned friday night events. I'd be okay with thatit might start off as a bit of fun and lead to something a bit more serious
Otherwise.. no. You just into a side chick. Welcome to the club. Its kinda growing 
josy is not so happy with her BF and it seems its forced by her parents
Yes she is but I was kind of hoping instead of mentioning Dawe it should be Cathy I bet her and Jade got up to all sortsJade is best teacher. 20 years ago, when she started college with Dawe, she was best girl.
Because pointing out your error must mean I have not read what you wrote?
That makes anti-sens but whatevs,have fun
