VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.11.1] [DrPinkCake]

[Darkwen]

I smell smoke and fire happening let me bring my popcorn
Yeah what Josy storyline Darkwen (i'm here just for the show)
but among the LI she has the least Storyline other than a girl who loves another girl which is LI and somehow ended up in
three way and hate her parent
worked with mc in the market
for me personally nothing make her standout like others LI if she was a side girl (in Others path)
i will say she is well written but she is somehow LI with another LI so at least something Unique other than family issues
make her standout as character without Maya story involved with her
the only flashback we have until now from her even include Derek bangs another girl and maya too

i don't hate her but i just don't see a lot unique in her story compare to others LI (Bella, Sage, Jill, Maya sorta)

damn i sound like Oscar at this point

I always hit Oscar so watch it Josy isn't drama Queen but story is clear and is better then all the others by miles

Loves mc more then any other LI, comes from a broken family, has a past she has a hard time talking about, inter battle between confident and insecure, sweet girl wild in bed, Maya's problem solver, a voice of reason, and amazingly strong women

 

[The Dick]

Yes, it's better to get these documents and kick Maya the fuck out from MC's life.
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Otherwise, I have a sense that MC will never get rid of her.

 

[ChipLecsap]

i don't hate her but i just don't see a lot unique in her story compare to others LI (Bella, Sage, Jill, Maya sorta)

There is nothing unique about any of the other girls either, they are cliche. Josy just come with the least drama that alone put her above the rest. You simply enjoy college life, study, party, and having hot sex with the hottest girl in the game. In every other case, you a good damn problem solver for everyone fucking problem. God, fix your own shit girls and leave me alone . Being a Fucking white knight for every good damned damsel in distress is not as exciting as some of you paint it.

imagine if you could just tell Maya " that's not my problem "

 

[Tremonia]

It is not a fact.

Everything I say is a fact. I'm always right and never wrong.

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[Dr.Slime]

There is nothing unique about any of the other girls either, they are cliche. Josy just come with the least drama that alone put her above the rest. You simply enjoy college life, study, party, and having hot sex with the hottest girl in the game. In every other case, you a good damn problem solver for everyone fucking problem. God, fix your own shit girls and leave me alone . Being a Fucking white knight for every good damned damsel in distress is not as exciting as some of you paint it.

imagine if you could just tell Maya " that's not my problem "

I mean it's cliche but somehow you half right least drama yes
but she always linked to someone
Maya Flashback she was there , when Quinn rejected her she used which she hate (I'm Tommy Sister to get into the HOT's)
somehow for me i don't want drama from her leave her like this just add story to her give her story without drama thats all

and if i could say this to Maya oh boy i would say it with a heartbeat

" Bitch I don't care about your ass get out "

 

[saynotoNTR]

In every other case, you a good damn problem solver for everyone fucking problem. God, fix your own shit girls and leave me alone

Yeah... and what does the MC get in return? Lies, distrust and ingratitude...
Quinn was right: “This campus is a ground-zero cesspool of backstabbing cunts.”

 

[felicemastronzo]

Okay. What's Josy main storyline? I would like to hear opinion, don't starting anything.

DPC responds to this.

Oscar accuses her of being a generic character, of having the most generic characterization possible.
Josy searches the Internet for the best hobbies for girls.

I would say everything has been said

p.s. I don't understand why DPC keeps putting LIs in a bad light, it seems to me to be a suicidal move in an AVN

 

[soprano31]

Loves mc more then any other LI, comes from a broken family, has a past she has a hard time talking about, inter battle between confident and insecure, sweet girl wild in bed, Maya's problem solver, a voice of reason, and amazingly strong women

These are characteristics that you can just as easily say about Sage,
but you know everything about her.
What do you know about Josy?
Her past ?
how she grow up,her family(except for her father,who you saw briefly)
her problems?

Every LI has her own story,mysteries,and past.
So far ,Josy is a friendly,cute girl like there are thousands in the world,
When i have to write about her,a blank page nothing..

 

[kinkyshin]

DPC responds to this.

Oscar accuses her of being a generic character, of having the most generic characterization possible.
Josy searches the Internet for the best hobbies for girls.

I would say everything has been said

Wow, just realized Oscar was right. I shouldn't have punched him. Fuck

 

[Dr.Slime]

These are characteristics that you can just as easily say about Sage,
but you know everything about her.
What do you know about Josy?
Her past ?
how she grow up,her family(except for her father,who you saw briefly)
her problems?

Every LI has her own story,mysteries,and past.
So far ,Josy is a friendly,cute girl like there are thousands in the world,
When i have to write about her,a blank page nothing..
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My thought exactly
she needs something let people fight for her defend her other than she is cute , beautiful and weather she has shaved pussy or not which is very important for Fappers

 

[ReallyNotTimmy]

The US has "no fault" divorce laws which split assets 50/50 no matter what state you're in. The only way to keep assets out of play from a former spouse is through pre-nuptial agreements and normally those can only cover assets acquired before the marriage. Assets accrued during a marriage are typically up for grabs. Child support and alimony can be forced to be paid in addition to the separation of assets but are determined by time in marriage and income disparity after the dissolution.

Which is why Stephen offers a 50:50 split… unless he has something he can blackmail Jade with.

Of course blackmail isn’t legal, and Jade could always say, “Nah, screw it; the money’s way more important than my career,” and tell the cops and DA on him. And in the process of investigating him for blackmail, they discover all his other shenanigans. Between one professor fucking students, and another professor funding a prostitution ring, it’d ruin the college. Could make a fun storyline.

But I doubt DPC will ever go there. Jade will likely just scream at Tremolo about irresponsibly not deleting the video and exposing her, and end their affair with angry sex. Or a kick to the balls. Leaving him to, I dunno, fuck one of the main LIs instead—tho probably not Sage.

 

[KАRАMBA]

Everything I say is a fact. I'm always right and never wrong.

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Stop using hard drugs.

 

[ChipLecsap]

DPC responds to this.

Oscar accuses her of being a generic character, of having the most generic characterization possible.
Josy searches the Internet for the best hobbies for girls.

I would say everything has been said

p.s. I don't understand why DPC keeps putting LIs in a bad light, it seems to me to be a suicidal move in an AVN

But you do realize he said that to her because he was unable to Fuck her, right ?! I doubt that Gina is more unique than her, unless unique means whore..

What is more funny is that MC actually described every girl being the same, to Sage

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Loves mc more then any other LI, comes from a broken family, has a past she has a hard time talking about, inter battle between confident and insecure, sweet girl wild in bed, Maya's problem solver, a voice of reason, and amazingly strong women

But what you described is more about her personal qualities that you think she possesses. Story, I mean storyline.

Here, look.
Sage storyline: A girl betrayed by a boyfriend who used her, never having experienced real feelings. A family in which it is customary to be callous and soulless, family that is falling apart.
Maya - here we know everything. She is the epicenter of the game's scenario, connecting the storylines of the entire game with her story with the loan.
Bella is something mysterious and enigmatic. The story of a broken woman who went through something terrible. James. Closed door. Strange connection with Jill.
Jill is the story of a tower princess who breaks out into the outside world. Jonathan, Lana's story, is a possible link between MC and Lynette.
Quinn - a dark route of drug trafficking and prostitution, a girl raised by the hood. Potential redemption arc. The story of a weak and vulnerable woman inside, who hides under the mask of a rude bitch.

Josy, as Dr.Slime correctly noted, is the story of Maya. It would be a stretch to call it a “storyline,” which is the story of a girl who has been in love with MC throughout the game, but it’s not on the level of PinkCake. Here he miscalculated and didn’t write the personal arc from the start.

Her family is mostly okay, except for conflict with Tommy and problems with Monica. Compared to other families in the game, Josy's situation is quite normal.

 

[Tremonia]

Stop using hard drugs.

Dude, I'm not Quinn.

 

[ChipLecsap]

My thought exactly
she needs something let people fight for her defend her other than she is cute , beautiful and weather she has shaved pussy or not which is very important for Fappers

No I don't want that,. I had enough of that with Jill and Maya, and now with even fucking Quinn. and omg I probably have to deal with Sage's parents divorce too. .

 

[KАRАMBA]

Dude, I'm not Quinn.

Of course not. Quinn not talking bullshit.

 

[ChipLecsap]

Her family is mostly okay, except for conflict with Tommy and problems with Monica. Compared to other families in the game, Josy's situation is quite normal.

Madame is Josy's mother, that's gonna be the story

 

[Darkwen]

These are characteristics that you can just as easily say about Sage,
but you know everything about her.
What do you know about Josy?
Her past ?
how she grow up,her family(except for her father,who you saw briefly)
her problems?

Every LI has her own story,mysteries,and past.
So far ,Josy is a friendly,cute girl like there are thousands in the world,
When i have to write about her,a blank page nothing..
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I said we don't know everything about her but we do know she comes from a broken home yes like Sage and Maya, but her past before Maya is unknown clearly something happen to her or she wouldn't be so insecure at times. Yet Sage, Bella, and Maya can have the same story points yet when it comes to Josy people act like there nothing there that is the height of hypocrisy and why because Josy isn't whinny bitch about it, she like yeah I have a past but I just want to have fun and move on

 

[kalamar31]

When I pass the
Doctor:
"Good morning Helen how you feel today"
scene, the game suddenly shuts down. Does anyone know how to solve this or have experienced this?