VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.11.1] [DrPinkCake]

[Better Cock Spock]

And then you have no say whether or not you chuck a tantrum like a five year old and storm out.

But at least you can decide whether to spend time with a horny librarian, a house full of slutty girls... or Derek

 

[Monty10]

The only reason the MC leaves Maya's Dorm in the end of Ep3 is because the developer wants the story to continue with other girls.
As for me, I don't mind living with Maya and Josy because I don't consider it cheating as long as Josy and Maya don't have penises.

 

[TonyMurray]

And then you have no say whether or not you chuck a tantrum like a five year old and storm out.

Yeah, to be fair, that's one of the downsides for me. I feel that there could have been a couple of different ways to handle it, and no matter how you've started to shape your character up to this point, the reaction is probably not in keeping with it!

 

[MiltonPowers]

Yeah, to be fair, that's one of the downsides for me. I feel that there could have been a couple of different ways to handle it, and no matter how you've started to shape your character up to this point, the reaction is probably not in keeping with it!

Agree with that, storming out like that would have been way down my list of options. We could have been given an option to chuck a tantrum or just say to the girls, hey you 2 need space to sort stuff out, so do I, I'm gonna stay somewhere else for a while and we'll circle back to it. The story progression would still have been the same, and I would have felt a lot better about MC leaving.

 

[Monty10]

This is the first time I see Derek as a wise person.

 

[Murgus]

legit in terms he already have plans and she just randomly show up so basicly he should cancel them. Jill look smart enough to understand what plans mean.
not sure Jill know they was fuck buddys and you can choose to not be fuck buddys at that point of story if I remember correctly.
Imagine Jill, who jump on every posibility to help others, just come with unplanned visit, hear you will go help friend who is sick and just start bitching "no! sandwichs more important! I don't give a shit about your plans I'M HERE SO ON YOUR KNEES! or no chance for this pussy"
1) this is so out of character for Jill
2) this is lazy way of writing. imagine every moment in game random girl come in room and say "go with me or bye". I wondering how many people in that case still try find excuses for character to do that...
there also example when you can on phone decide to spend some time with Josy and with Maya, and after free roam you decide with whom. well ok, after your choice should second girl just become not available for relationships?..

I hear you. However I personally don't see how Jill would be ok with the MC if he is involved with MaJo, Sage and has banged so many other girls. I felt like a scumbag being on her path while doing all the other things.

But I agree that it should at least be possible to get Jill even if you didn't spend time with her that day. Maybe a Chick affinity check later on in the season.

 

[Chillout1984]

But at least you can decide whether to spend time with a horny librarian, a house full of slutty girls... or Derek
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Only if you were smart enough to go on their route. If you didn't, you're stuck with Derek... Cool we can go to the Pink Rose with him, but we always end up imo with the most ugly one of the strippers that we know of: Rose.

It would also be a major trollmove by DPC if Ellie is one of the other VIP Roses

 

[Chillout1984]

Agree with that, storming out like that would have been way down my list of options. We could have been given an option to chuck a tantrum or just say to the girls, hey you 2 need space to sort stuff out, so do I, I'm gonna stay somewhere else for a while and we'll circle back to it. The story progression would still have been the same, and I would have felt a lot better about MC leaving.

Also a bad thing that during the text conversation with Josy afterwards, MC also can only react as if he is a kid with a tantrum.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

I have an idea that I've been thinking about for a long time.
Now we can say that Quinn's flashback from Ep.6 and the intro of Ep.11 are the same event from different perspectives. Earlier we saw it through the eyes of little Quinn who got out of bed and Lana's perspective: Buddy and Rox discuss the movie and the rat that should have been killed in it. We see Rox give Jonathan a poisoned dose of, which Lana later died from. Then from Buddy's words we know that Rox died of an overdose and Quinn saw it, but here's the interesting thing. If we are on Quinn's route, we learn that this happened on the same day that Lana and Jonathan bought the drugs.




Quinn remembers it very well. What's interesting is that Rox dies with the same symptoms as Lana - convulsions and foaming at the mouth.

Then Quinn experienced a clouding of her mind from the experience and she cannot remember what exactly Buddy shouted at the dying Rox. Both Lana and Rox died from a fentanyl overdose. And not only Lana, but most likely Rox didn't know that the drugs were poisoned. It's doubtful that the leader of a gang, an experienced drug dealer who regularly uses drugs himself, would do such a stupid thing consciously. Rox is a criminal, but I didn't get the impression of him as a stupid man.
Lana's and Rox's drugs were from the same batch and they were all poisoned - most likely these were Rox's personal supplies and he sold a small dose of his drugs for "a party was a rookie", thinking they were good. And who poisoned the batch? There's no need to think long - it was Buddy. Staging an overdose is a good way to remove the boss and take his place, while causing a minimum of suspicion.
I think Buddy is the culprit in the death of both Lana and Rox.

 

[Better Cock Spock]

I have an idea that I've been thinking about for a long time.
Now we can say that Quinn's flashback from Ep.6 and the intro of Ep.11 are the same event from different perspectives. Earlier we saw it through the eyes of little Quinn who got out of bed and Lana's perspective: Buddy and Rox discuss the movie and the rat that should have been killed in it. We see Rox give Jonathan a poisoned dose of, which Lana later died from. Then from Buddy's words we know that Rox died of an overdose and Quinn saw it, but here's the interesting thing. If we are on Quinn's route, we learn that this happened on the same day that Lana and Jonathan bought the drugs.

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Quinn remembers it very well. What's interesting is that Rox dies with the same symptoms as Lana - convulsions and foaming at the mouth.
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Then Quinn experienced a clouding of her mind from the experience and she cannot remember what exactly Buddy shouted at the dying Rox. Both Lana and Rox died from a fentanyl overdose. And not only Lana, but most likely Rox didn't know that the drugs were poisoned. It's doubtful that the leader of a gang, an experienced drug dealer who regularly uses drugs himself, would do such a stupid thing consciously. Rox is a criminal, but I didn't get the impression of him as a stupid man.
Lana's and Rox's drugs were from the same batch and they were all poisoned - most likely these were Rox's personal supplies and he sold a small dose of his drugs for "a party was a rookie", thinking they were good. And who poisoned the batch? There's no need to think long - it was Buddy. Staging an overdose is a good way to remove the boss and take his place, while causing a minimum of suspicion.
I think Buddy is the culprit in the death of both Lana and Rox.

Nothing is below Buddy after what happened with Rio I would 100% believe it if someone told me he whored out his own mother.

 

[Vill3m]

Now that the whole loan situation is resolved, Josy no longer needs to keep paying for her share of Maya's dorm and can officially move out. Does Maya stay in the dorm and risk getting a new roommate or does she move into the HOTs' house as well?

Josy moves officially out and Cinderella becomes Maya's surprise new roomie. If you're not on throuple path then eventually JM break up and Maya starts cucking the players with her new girlfriend-roommate.

 

[TonyMurray]

I have an idea that I've been thinking about for a long time.
Now we can say that Quinn's flashback from Ep.6 and the intro of Ep.11 are the same event from different perspectives. Earlier we saw it through the eyes of little Quinn who got out of bed and Lana's perspective: Buddy and Rox discuss the movie and the rat that should have been killed in it. We see Rox give Jonathan a poisoned dose of, which Lana later died from. Then from Buddy's words we know that Rox died of an overdose and Quinn saw it, but here's the interesting thing. If we are on Quinn's route, we learn that this happened on the same day that Lana and Jonathan bought the drugs.

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Quinn remembers it very well. What's interesting is that Rox dies with the same symptoms as Lana - convulsions and foaming at the mouth.
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Then Quinn experienced a clouding of her mind from the experience and she cannot remember what exactly Buddy shouted at the dying Rox. Both Lana and Rox died from a fentanyl overdose. And not only Lana, but most likely Rox didn't know that the drugs were poisoned. It's doubtful that the leader of a gang, an experienced drug dealer who regularly uses drugs himself, would do such a stupid thing consciously. Rox is a criminal, but I didn't get the impression of him as a stupid man.
Lana's and Rox's drugs were from the same batch and they were all poisoned - most likely these were Rox's personal supplies and he sold a small dose of his drugs for "a party was a rookie", thinking they were good. And who poisoned the batch? There's no need to think long - it was Buddy. Staging an overdose is a good way to remove the boss and take his place, while causing a minimum of suspicion.
I think Buddy is the culprit in the death of both Lana and Rox.

Yeah, I thought that too, and I think someone posted the same thing a day or two ago. The downside for me (in terms of this progressing the story) is that there's (currently) no way for the two to be linked by those in the story. At the moment, we (as the MC, not as the viewer/reader) can only get the Lana story in full from Jill, and only get the Rox story from Quinn. I can see Jill telling her story on other paths, in time, but I can't see Quinn spilling if you're not on her path.

Maybe something will come out from the project Jill is setting up, and Quinn will hear about it, or possibly even go to one of the talks herself, and make the realisation there?

 

[felicemastronzo]

I have an idea that I've been thinking about for a long time.
Now we can say that Quinn's flashback from Ep.6 and the intro of Ep.11 are the same event from different perspectives. Earlier we saw it through the eyes of little Quinn who got out of bed and Lana's perspective: Buddy and Rox discuss the movie and the rat that should have been killed in it. We see Rox give Jonathan a poisoned dose of, which Lana later died from. Then from Buddy's words we know that Rox died of an overdose and Quinn saw it, but here's the interesting thing. If we are on Quinn's route, we learn that this happened on the same day that Lana and Jonathan bought the drugs.

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Quinn remembers it very well. What's interesting is that Rox dies with the same symptoms as Lana - convulsions and foaming at the mouth.
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Then Quinn experienced a clouding of her mind from the experience and she cannot remember what exactly Buddy shouted at the dying Rox. Both Lana and Rox died from a fentanyl overdose. And not only Lana, but most likely Rox didn't know that the drugs were poisoned. It's doubtful that the leader of a gang, an experienced drug dealer who regularly uses drugs himself, would do such a stupid thing consciously. Rox is a criminal, but I didn't get the impression of him as a stupid man.
Lana's and Rox's drugs were from the same batch and they were all poisoned - most likely these were Rox's personal supplies and he sold a small dose of his drugs for "a party was a rookie", thinking they were good. And who poisoned the batch? There's no need to think long - it was Buddy. Staging an overdose is a good way to remove the boss and take his place, while causing a minimum of suspicion.
I think Buddy is the culprit in the death of both Lana and Rox.

I don't think there is any doubt that things are amd differently. Buddy is the monster of the current level,

 

[grarg]

I have an idea that I've been thinking about for a long time.
Now we can say that Quinn's flashback from Ep.6 and the intro of Ep.11 are the same event from different perspectives. Earlier we saw it through the eyes of little Quinn who got out of bed and Lana's perspective: Buddy and Rox discuss the movie and the rat that should have been killed in it. We see Rox give Jonathan a poisoned dose of, which Lana later died from. Then from Buddy's words we know that Rox died of an overdose and Quinn saw it, but here's the interesting thing. If we are on Quinn's route, we learn that this happened on the same day that Lana and Jonathan bought the drugs.

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Quinn remembers it very well. What's interesting is that Rox dies with the same symptoms as Lana - convulsions and foaming at the mouth.
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Then Quinn experienced a clouding of her mind from the experience and she cannot remember what exactly Buddy shouted at the dying Rox. Both Lana and Rox died from a fentanyl overdose. And not only Lana, but most likely Rox didn't know that the drugs were poisoned. It's doubtful that the leader of a gang, an experienced drug dealer who regularly uses drugs himself, would do such a stupid thing consciously. Rox is a criminal, but I didn't get the impression of him as a stupid man.
Lana's and Rox's drugs were from the same batch and they were all poisoned - most likely these were Rox's personal supplies and he sold a small dose of his drugs for "a party was a rookie", thinking they were good. And who poisoned the batch? There's no need to think long - it was Buddy. Staging an overdose is a good way to remove the boss and take his place, while causing a minimum of suspicion.
I think Buddy is the culprit in the death of both Lana and Rox.

More likely DPC's limited knowledge of drug induced deaths. Sounds way too contrived.

...which is exactly the kind of soap-opera narrative you can expect...

Who's next, Tommy? Riona?

 

[Better Cock Spock]

Yeah, I thought that too, and I think someone posted the same thing a day or two ago. The downside for me (in terms of this progressing the story) is that there's (currently) no way for the two to be linked by those in the story. At the moment, we (as the MC, not as the viewer/reader) can only get the Lana story in full from Jill, and only get the Rox story from Quinn. I can see Jill telling her story on other paths, in time, but I can't see Quinn spilling if you're not on her path.

Maybe something will come out from the project Jill is setting up, and Quinn will hear about it, or possibly even go to one of the talks herself, and make the realisation there?

I'm not sure Quinn would ever go to that, even with prodding from her MC. Maybe after Buddy is taken care of?

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

Nothing is below Buddy after what happened with Rio I would 100% believe it if someone told me he whored out his own mother.

I don't think there is any doubt that things are amd differently. Buddy is the monster of the current level,

Buddy in my death note, without any excuses, just like Vinny.

Yeah, I thought that too, and I think someone posted the same thing a day or two ago. The downside for me (in terms of this progressing the story) is that there's (currently) no way for the two to be linked by those in the story. At the moment, we (as the MC, not as the viewer/reader) can only get the Lana story in full from Jill, and only get the Rox story from Quinn. I can see Jill telling her story on other paths, in time, but I can't see Quinn spilling if you're not on her path.

Maybe something will come out from the project Jill is setting up, and Quinn will hear about it, or possibly even go to one of the talks herself, and make the realisation there?

This story is primarily designed for the player, not the MC - he is limited in knowledge of the world around him and the MC exists in this detailed world where the surrounding characters live a full life - this is part of the DPC narrative of creating a living environment, which we do not see in many AVNs, where the MC is the center of the universe, which makes them dead worlds.
Your last assumption is possible, that this event will probably be for Quinn and Jill, and the MC will not necessarily be there. This scene can live without him, like many others.

 

[Catsup3227]

I thought it was also disappointing that Jill accepts it way too easily if you say she should wear skater clothes, especially since earlier she said she wouldn't wear such clothing because it isn't her style.

Well she is just a badly written character that is supposed to be naive because of her privileged and probably sheltered upbringing but she just becomes this trope or caricature of a real character. It is like she knows next to nothing about anything that is going on in the real world and when she finally lets loose she's doing almost a 180 turn on how she used to be.

Don't get me wrong, deep down I like Jill and would love for her to be a better character, but as DPC has written her she is just... meh.

 

[SirDawcio]

Mensa challenge

Good, he thinks about gooners ability to think smart and lay down IQ tests while their cocks are up

 

[TonyMurray]

This story is primarily designed for the player, not the MC - he is limited in knowledge of the world around him and the MC exists in this detailed world where the surrounding characters live a full life - this is part of the DPC narrative of creating a living environment, which we do not see in many AVNs, where the MC is the center of the universe, which makes them dead worlds.
Your last assumption is possible, that this event will probably be for Quinn and Jill, and the MC will not necessarily be there. This scene can live without him, like many others.

Well, of course the game is for the player... What I mean though is that it's all very well for us to know things, but unless the MC knows them, they won't be able to progress the overall story. If it's important, it will almost certainly have to involve MC bringing the two parts together, otherwise there needs to be some way for the information to become at least a little bit public, so the two can overlap (basically so Jill can learn of it). It's possible, of course that Jill will never find out, but since the information is in the game, I'd like to think she would have to find out somehow.

I suppose another way for the overlap to happen would be for Quinn's revenge to be successful, the police take down Buddy and his operation, and Quinn tells her story - it would be out of character for her to do so, but maybe Buddy's arrest would change things in that respect, and make her open up to a support group, or at least a Jill-path MC (unlikely). Jill could hear details through that of how Rox died, and compare it to what she knows of Lana's death, putting the pieces together from there. I don't know if closure is the right word, but finding out who was behind it and learning that they are being served justice might have some small healing effect for Jill and her family.

 

[ModiThorrson]

Now that the whole loan situation is resolved, Josy no longer needs to keep paying for her share of Maya's dorm and can officially move out. Does Maya stay in the dorm and risk getting a new roommate or does she move into the HOTs' house as well?

In my ideal headcanon world, she stays in the dorm and spends most of her nights in MC's room at the frat.