VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.11.1] [DrPinkCake]

[grarg]

Honestly, it’s an excellent game up to a certain point, but there are several aspects that I find important to mention, as they personally felt annoying or poorly executed:

1. Exaggerated character designs:
I understand that some people enjoy a more fantastical style or exaggerated features, but in this case, it becomes absurd. For example, Bella has completely disproportionate body features. Sure, one could argue that she’s an adult and that this represents physical maturity, but the level of exaggeration is ridiculous and breaks any sense of realism.

While Bella and Nora seem to be walking goddesses of Italian and Norwegian descent, this isn't comic level of proportions as seen by many other games on this site. (e.g. Nora's lab coat is certainly big in the torso area, but there are plenty of fat science profs.) It certainly didn't take me out of the story, but I see what you're saying. The rendering of textures on their bodies (even Jill), do, however (e.g. their winter jackets during the skiing stick to them like glue.)

2. Repetitive and tedious pacing:
There comes a point where moving from place to place, talking to different characters, or completing certain tasks becomes exhausting. A clear example is the Halloween event — having to talk to every single person at the party is more annoying than enjoyable.

Many have stated the walkabout scenes, as well as the optional mini-games (though skippable), are too long, too convoluted, and take up so much time, and are boring. This is 90% true. There is no reason at this point for DPC to keep doing these...but he can't $$$$$ help himself. Also, the party planning is a core mini-game for some reason...like Being a DIK involves...being the DIK's party planner...

3. Visual inconsistency:
In some chapters, it feels like certain characters change their appearance noticeably. This creates confusion, as if the art style or model of the character was altered without a clear reason.

Could you be more specific? Art style? The quality of the renders have upgraded from the first season, sure, but I'm not sure if the art style has changed? Maybe better lighting? But for static model meshes, I think this is a good thing, as characters shouldn't be wearing the same outfits or have the exact same hair styles in certain cases. Of course, the time frame is around half a year going into January, so clothing, hair, shoes, winter hats, etc., should be different. The way the MC gets a haircut is a nice story touch.

However, I think Sage is a good example of what you mean, where her hair style of having uneven short bangs, and then back to a full head of long hair, and back again, doesn't make sense.

4. Flat story:
At various moments, the plot feels stagnant and lacks depth. The characters don’t seem to develop or face meaningful conflicts that lead to real change.

What plot?

And what drama you were on with a particular girl could have Been Destroyed ™ .

5. Unnecessary sex scenes:
It feels like almost every female character ends up wanting the main character. I understand the game is set in a university and aims to reflect a youthful environment, but the excessive amount of these scenes makes the story less engaging and less believable.

I would argue there are too many characters, and DPC wants too many options, bloating this Milk Machine with filler. So while I do appreciate the high quality of intimate scenes and their number, for characters we can focus on, there are too many optional SGs that shouldn't exist with them, all for the Others/DIK route. I think DPC has forgotten to put the Pink Rose girls in rotation, even if they're still in the narrative (so what was the point? Sandy is hot for MC, but can never get with him again? And he just keeps introducing more options each chapter...) Even if characters like Tara and are compelling to some, they're coming in too late, and now have to play catchup. Which means even more future scenes.

 

[rrreshad007]

If by cow, you mean "milk machine"

You got it my man.

Soon her tidis will be so huge that it won't fit in both of the MCs hands.

 

[rrreshad007]

Did someone say "milk machine"?
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This is nora right ?

But believe me man , Bella will be become more thick and huge (Her tidis outgrown that she had to change clothes so it will grow more if she becomes pregnant)

And she will be a better mother and milk machine than nora for sure

 

[Better Cock Spock]

This is nora right ?

But believe me man , Bella will be become more thick and huge (Her tidis outgrown that she had to change clothes so it will grow more if she becomes pregnant)

And she will be a better mother and milk machine than nora for sure

 

[rrreshad007]

Did someone say "milk machine"?
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This from ep10 or 9 i couldn't remember help me guys

 

[rrreshad007]

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Man need a help,

Need bella's all tidis ss from game from everyone ep and angle if you have , i think u have that

Really want to make a HD Bella's tiddis collage

 

[collin31]

I feel so bad, my Jillybean trying to flirt with me but I'm here for Bella

 

[-d2d-]

I feel so bad, my Jillybean trying to flirt with me but I'm here for Bella
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Holy shit you just jumpscared me so bad

 

[Better Cock Spock]

This from ep10 or 9 i couldn't remember help me guys

Episode 10

Man need a help,

Need bella's all tidis ss from game from everyone ep and angle if you have , i think u have that

Really want to make a HD Bella's tiddis collage

Here's titties from every episode

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[collin31]

DPC really write this scene with his porn brain, it not enough we are sleeping in Jill's bed by barely knowing her but we also ask for taking our clothes off

 

[Vega101]

Starting a Bella run, I'm thinking about who to fuck as a sidegirl, maybe I can get the ep11 Jade scene that I couldn't get before I also couldn't get some of the Cathy's and Lily's lewd scenes but those are not smart to get in this run I guess
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How do you plan to be with Bella and Jade at the same time in episode 11?

 

[collin31]

How do you plan to be with Bella and Jade at the same time in episode 11?

I'm not planning, I thought maybe I can get it by cheating on Bella but it was just thought, I couldn't get that scene before cause I didn't know we had a option to not the show the Jade's sextape to the DIKs, I guess I will do another manwhore run to get that scene and some Lily scenes that I couldn't get.

 

[Vega101]

I'm not planning, I thought maybe I can get it by cheating on Bella but it was just thought, I couldn't get that scene before cause I didn't know we had a option to not the show the Jade's sextape to the DIKs, I guess I will do another manwhore run to get that scene and some Lily scenes that I couldn't get.

I hope this serves as a guide and not a spoiler for you.

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[collin31]

I hope this serves as a guide and not a spoiler for you.

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yeah its aight, the reason I didn't get Lily's scene was that, my manwhore save was focused on Quinn so I've been told to stay away from Lily

 

[Better Cock Spock]

yeah its aight, the reason I didn't get Lily's scene was that, my manwhore save was focused on Quinn so I've been told to stay away from Lily

You can do both, Lily and Quinn just don't like it

 

[Vega101]

yeah its aight, the reason I didn't get Lily's scene was that, my manwhore save was focused on Quinn so I've been told to stay away from Lily

If you have Quinn's number, I'd go to her restaurant.

It's perfect for playing with Bella. No one will be offended, and they'll have something else to spend their money on.

 

[FalconLover420]

This is nora right ?

But believe me man , Bella will be become more thick and huge (Her tidis outgrown that she had to change clothes so it will grow more if she becomes pregnant)

And she will be a better mother and milk machine than nora for sure

NGL Idk whose boobs are going to get bigger Nora's or Bella's when they become pregnant.

We will start seeing in EP12 with Nora and take that for comparison

But we been filing all the girls like a twinkie and still no pregnancy

 

[Better Cock Spock]

NGL Idk whose boobs are going to get bigger Nora's or Bella's when they become pregnant.

We will start seeing in EP12 with Nora and take that for comparison

But we been filing all the girls like a twinkie and still no pregnancy

Contraceptives are like magic in AVNs for evidence of that, look at Arieth once Quinn swapped Dawe's pills.

As for Nora or Bella having the bigger preggo tits, we should knock them both up at the same time, for the sake of science

 

[Vega101]

The game has many other problems, but for some reason you singled out these 5.

I actually like the parties, especially the Halloween one, which took up the entire episode. The entire episode maintains a consistent theme; you don't have to check the Rooster and play minigames every time you're free to roam, like you did in Seasons 1 and 2.

4. Flat story:
At various moments, the plot feels stagnant and lacks depth. The characters don’t seem to develop or face meaningful conflicts that lead to real change.

There's no coherent plot in the game. Just interactions with other characters and parties.

Season 3 is where significant events occur that greatly change Riona and Quinn.
Some characters develop. For example:
Sage has learned to share her feelings with others.
Jill has become less shy and naive.
Josie plans to change in the new episodes.
Zoey—her whole story is about change.
The main character changes a lot over the past six months.
Derek hasn't changed. He's still the same fool he was

 

[-d2d-]

Contraceptives are like magic in AVNs for evidence of that, look at Arieth once Quinn swapped Dawe's pills.

As for Nora or Bella having the bigger preggo tits, we should knock them both up at the same time, for the sake of science

I gotta go with Nora on that one, Bella wins the ass contest.

I'm all for the science experiment though, I bet Nora will approve your thesis