VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.11.1] [DrPinkCake]

[Esp``]

Like the MC said prior, in terms of love and feelings, he is very new to it. Sex and certain emotions it isn't new. So maybe he might be a bit of a snowflake in the basic terms but still, falling for two softie girls...kinda a new thing, specially after "moving one" from a surfer girlfriend who is hella hot.

Definitely, I cannot understand who says MC is overreacting.. I mean Maya and Josy are the two Love Interests which was introduced at the earliest in the story. You have to take the story into progress, season 1 went by MC being romantically involved in these two girls. Add to that he is a teenager which did have very intimate moments with both of them. You might be thinking clearly and saying "just ignore them lol why cry", it does make sense to MC feel like this in the story.

I feel like people needs to empathize with MC more. He felt something for Josy, learned she had a partner but still she clung onto him. Then he met Maya, which was a like a friendly relationship which became something more later on both living in the same room.. Until someone else came to that room and secrets revealed. I honestly felt sad for the MC most of the time. Most people say he is not faultless or similar stuff, but you don't think like that in a moment of pain..

I even wished he had a harsher option to choose at the end of the library dialogue.

 

[Deleted member 1767426]

I can't even focus on life anymore man. Other games became uninteresting, movies became boring. Outside became a bother.

I only want to theorycraft and write fanfiction for future releases of BADIK..

I want to learn where Sage went that night. She faces multiple challenges in her life, the sorority houses, Chad's affair.. MC is there for her every time she is about to lose it, just like when she was there for him when he needed.. They become dependent on each other with every passing day, becoming more than what they was.. Want to see the moment she dumps Chad and MC declares another love confession casually just like he does everyday and Sage says Yea yea I know.. Then she smiles and says I love you too silently. She crosses her arms to MC's neck. Embracing him, finally sure of her feelings...

I want to have more dates with Jill. I want her family to learn about MC and threaten to kick MC out of school or worse relocate Jill to another city.. MC cares for her and stops seeing her.. Jill can't understand the MC at first and has a emotional breakdown.. When she learns the true reason of why MC has stopped seeing her, she sheds tears and embraces MC.. Then she goes to her family with holding MC's hand, tells them she doesn't need them and she is in love with him...

And I thought I could never forgive her but..

MC watches the relationship from a far. He said that he could only be friends with them but he secretly yearns for Maya.. He cannot forgive her for betraying and leaving him but he cannot move on either.. Maya understands that their problems with her partner actually never solved and after a brief honeymoon period, they start back to usual arguments. She is depressed and thinks about the past times with the MC. She misses the times how MC made her feel.. Her life becomes worse when her father comes to campus and catches her with another girl. The father gets angry and causes a scene. In a total chaos he slaps her daughter open in the campus. When MC sees them, he gets enraged and jumps onto father like a wild beast. He screams at him while giving a beating.. All of his pent up anger, is released.
Maya embraces the MC from behind.. MC asks why Maya why.. I only ever loved you.. But you wanted me to share you? Why.. All the past feelings keep rushing back to Maya.. She says forgive me.. Battered from the fight, MC limps while she gives him her shoulder to lean onto. They walk away slowly, holding each other tightly.. They look at each other smiling, feeling the bliss of reunion...

Seriously I think I am addicted to this fanfiction writing stuff.

Yeah I think it's just loneliness. Most of us wouldn't be on this site if we had people to relate to or had the deep embrace of a loving woman. We're just depressed incels...well maybe not all of us

 

[name88 - King of Hearts]

Quinn: well well...i was not against her from the start, but also not warmed towards her. All this changed after ep4. Name88 is a man of wisdom, also fully understood her. Of course he deserves her

Someone give this man a blow job

Which would you rather have wake up our MC after joining the DiKs?

A: Riona giving a morning special after staying with the MC overnight after listening to her and being there for her?

B: The Queen of Buttsluttery, Camila, riding cowgirl while Mona (Or should I say Moanalots...get it? Okay I'll just leave) records it for..."science".

C: Sarah and Melanie dual licking the MC before each taking a turn on the disco stick?

D: Arieth taking a few selfies with the party tool before going down on it. (Without the seafood. If, then insue chaotic comedy scene).

E: Quinn with the entirely left field fuck session.

Take a wild guess

This because I'd be a sucker for a girl that needs some help and Riona especially has a lot going on right now she would need a good release. B also sounds appealing

That so...you

 

[look_skywalker]

Definitely, I cannot understand who says MC is overreacting.. I mean Maya and Josy are the two Love Interests which was introduced at the earliest in the story. You have to take the story into progress, season 1 went by MC being romantically involved in these two girls. Add to that he is a teenager which did have very intimate moments with both of them. You might be thinking clearly and saying "just ignore them lol why cry", it does make sense to MC feel like this in the story.

I feel like people needs to empathize with MC more. He felt something for Josy, learned she had a partner but still she clung onto him. Then he met Maya, which was a like a friendly relationship which became something more later on both living in the same room.. Until someone else came to that room and secrets revealed. I honestly felt sad for the MC most of the time. Most people say he is not faultless or similar stuff, but you don't think like that in a moment of pain..

I even wished he had a harsher option to choose at the end of the library dialogue.

When I say he overreacted, I don't mean he shouldn't feel hurt with the whole situation. Of course it was really upsetting. I was feeling really sad when I finished playing episode 3. But sad, not angry. I remember when I was 16 or 17, I was at a birthday party of my crush, found out she had a boyfriend, I pretty much excused myself in the middle of the party. I remember how upset I was, so I fully empathize.
What I'm saying, he shouldn't just blame the girls for everything and be angry with them. The situation sucks, but it's not all their fault. No more than his fault.
It's ok to feel hurt. It's not ok to snap at people because you feel hurt.

 

[Esp``]

After all him being upset could be the reason why Maya and Josy wouldn't just reconcile and forget about MC. They would pick up on him being upset and finally confront him and ask to tell him what's going on with him and that's how the second half of the library talk would come into play.

Yeah I wanted something like this, they should've noticed the MC's sadness and took longer to reconcile. The issue was ignored too long at start, which I can relate to MC's pain. But the library part where everything resolved and their reconciliation felt so rushed. Them making out in front of the MC moments later did not help either.

 

[name88 - King of Hearts]

I love a redemption story/character. Having a hard time coming to terms with the whole prostitution thing, when it come's to Quinn though.

Yup,with Quinn there`s just nothing to redeem,she`s perfect the way she is

Look at Rena in AL we can always have hope that he could reconsider and add another Li or two But I think he is much more invested in the main girls and their stories if there was to be another girl on the Dik route as a Li it should surely be Quinn.

 

[EZ8lt]

I think this is likely as well. When she takes you home the first time, there are picture frames scattered around the house. When she decides to let you stay with her, they've all vanished.

Nah, that room is where she hid the body.

Mel may only be had if you're staying with Sage. Rose comes up if you're staying with Derek. I'm not certain, but I believe both require DIK alignment.

You can check fairly regularly via your cellular phone app, same place you can see your money.

I think you also needed to fuck Envy in order to get Rose. Not sure tho, I always go for old boobs.

Long story but a asshole so called friend was on my laptop at the same time and was fuckin' with me last night. I thought I was losein' it and everybody else too.

Let me guess, it's the same friend that posted the cluck of Cathy from the Diks laptop.

 

[M.Sato]

Seriously, DPC should fish one or more editors out of this forum. There are a lot of more cringe aspects of last and others episodes which could've been, if not entirely solved, massively toned down by simply having someone point to him "This scene is too dense, spread the burden a little with that other one" or "you're pushing this point too far, step down a little", like many users have. Plus, I'm sure many would be pleased to give back months/years of free entertainment.

*not that ep4 or others were bad, far from it.

 

[JeefZ]

Nah, that room is where she hid the body.



I think you also needed to fuck Envy in order to get Rose. Not sure tho, I always go for old boobs.



Let me guess, it's the same friend that posted the cluck of Cathy from the Diks laptop.

How ya know???

 

[jamdan]

Seriously, DPC should fish one or more editors out of this forum. There are a lot of more cringe aspects of last and others episodes which could've been, if not entirely solved, massively toned down by simply having someone point to him "This scene is too dense, spread the burden a little with that other one" or "you're pushing this point too far, step down a little", like many users have. Plus, I'm sure many would be pleased to give back months/years of free entertainment.

*not that ep4 or others were bad, far from it.

He already has an in house option. Karen Rebecca Johnson who is 19 years and 2 months old. She is going to be the greatest editor in history of editing.

 

[Deleted member 1767426]

Yeah I wanted something like this, they should've noticed the MC's sadness and took longer to reconcile. The issue was ignored too long at start, which I can relate to MC's pain. But the library part where everything resolved and their reconciliation felt so rushed. Them making out in front of the MC moments later did not help either.

You should work for DPC as a writer. I think you would really add some contrast and improvements to what he may be thinking. You would do really good!

 

[JeefZ]

Yo, you got some goat milk? I heard Quinn likes weird stuff.

Got A goat but I don't milk it would like it too much

 

[Deleted member 79621]

Definitely, I cannot understand who says MC is overreacting.. I mean Maya and Josy are the two Love Interests which was introduced at the earliest in the story. You have to take the story into progress, season 1 went by MC being romantically involved in these two girls. Add to that he is a teenager which did have very intimate moments with both of them. You might be thinking clearly and saying "just ignore them lol why cry", it does make sense to MC feel like this in the story.

I feel like people needs to empathize with MC more. He felt something for Josy, learned she had a partner but still she clung onto him. Then he met Maya, which was a like a friendly relationship which became something more later on both living in the same room.. Until someone else came to that room and secrets revealed. I honestly felt sad for the MC most of the time. Most people say he is not faultless or similar stuff, but you don't think like that in a moment of pain..

I even wished he had a harsher option to choose at the end of the library dialogue.

When I say he overreacted, I don't mean he shouldn't feel hurt with the whole situation. Of course it was really upsetting. I was feeling really sad when I finished playing episode 3. But sad, not angry. I remember when I was 16 or 17, I was at a birthday party of my crush, found out she had a boyfriend, I pretty much excused myself in the middle of the party. I remember how upset I was, so I fully empathize.
What I'm saying, he shouldn't just blame the girls for everything and be angry with them. The situation sucks, but it's not all their fault. No more than his fault.
It's ok to feel hurt. It's not ok to snap at people because you feel hurt.

I don't think people hate on the MC for being upset about it as much as they think that he was upset about it for way to long. Which is also supported that after the dorm scene you can say you overreacted and then the story continues to make you overreact anyway and draw out the drama way farther than it probably needed to be. I don't really have a problem at all really how the drama itself went I was more so upset that Maya and Josy became connected like that. Don't get me wrong the twist at the end of episode 3 was CRAZY but I just didn't like that they stayed together anyways. I wanted to gain a relationship with them individually and not a package deal. I'm a simple dude and threesomes never really interested me. I only want one chick at one time. Now Jill is always my favorite but Maya interested me and I liked helping her with her tasks and seeing the relationship grow between her and the MC and Josy is kind of in the way of that.

I'm sorry but I didn't write that very well organization wise and with correct punctuation, but I got tired and lazy and I didn't want to go back and fix it

 

[EZ8lt]

You should work for DPC as a writer. I think you would really add some contrast and improvements to what he may be thinking. You would do really good!

He isn't wrong tho. Writing has several issues at ep 4.

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

Seriously, DPC should fish one or more editors out of this forum. There are a lot of more cringe aspects of last and others episodes which could've been, if not entirely solved, massively toned down by simply having someone point to him "This scene is too dense, spread the burden a little with that other one" or "you're pushing this point too far, step down a little", like many users have. Plus, I'm sure many would be pleased to give back months/years of free entertainment.

*not that ep4 or others were bad, far from it.

I think the "Great Summer Waifu Wars of 2019" may have scared him away from here to be honest. It was a crazy time. Someone even made a big map with borders and continents and shit dividing up the countries between the girls.

 

[Wizard_Shiryuu]

He isn't wrong tho. Writing has several issues at ep 4.

And considering this was the first episode after going pro and that going pro would mean more time for better scripts and proofreading...

 

[Mormont]

Someone give this man a blow job


Take a wild guess


That so...you

When it comes to a female in need I'm right there I just have to soft a heart at times

Yup,with Quinn there`s just nothing to redeem,she`s perfect the way she is


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Well I thought I'd be nice with Quinn but yeah I'd have her as a Li the Dik route needs more than just Sage and Quinn fits in nicely and also to see people have a meltdown because of it

 

[android3231]

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[look_skywalker]

I think the "Great Summer Waifu Wars of 2019" may have scared him away from here to be honest. It was a crazy time. Someone even made a big map with borders and continents and shit dividing up the countries between the girls.

Damn, I wanna see that. I wanna know which girl's continent i'm living in.

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

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