VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.11.1] [DrPinkCake]

[M.Sato]

OK, i try something with this low cost sig...

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It has a lot of potential. A wavy function on the wooooo and a seesaw like motion to her arms and, IMHO, it's ready to go.

 

[mindern]

Actually this was before she allowed the MC to call her Bella which she only lets friends do that and at the time that was only Jill.

And well they are co-workers they might have been friends before but not now after the advances of either Jade or Stephen.

Eh, it’s before but it’s also a scene that only exists if you pass one of the most complicated checks in the game and that is the same check that decides if she lets you call her Bella.

My problem with the theory boils down to Occam’s razor. The Burke theory is based one one single line, entirely out of context with the larger scene, and it assumes she’s friends with the Burkes based on being coworkers. It also fundamentally changes the character from everything else she says and does regarding fidelity. It undermines all her crying, frustration and self hatred for cheating. It also directly goes against lines said by other characters (Burke directly denies any relationship and says she was in love with someone else).

Conversely if it is the MC she’s talking about it’s in line with the rest of the scene thats entirely about him. It’s backed up by all the other scenes the two share and the (Perhaps future) established friendship. Its in keeping with the character having feelings for the MC but suppressing and actively stopping them (pushing him towards Jill) and rather than being actively denied, we know for a fact she kissed the MC.

A theory in keeping with the entire story holds more water than a theory requiring nothing but assumptions.

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

Well, the MC better not lose his phone again and get done like Jamie.

Especially since fucking Derek linked his Rooster and Swyper accounts. THAT could get awkward pretty quickly.

UnoriginalUserName You mentioned in the beginning of your list a couple games you feel are the best as far as story goes.
Being HH and Deluca. What is HH I am not sure I am familiar with that one.

Harem Hotel by Runey

 

[Sancho1969]

we know for a fact she kissed the MC.

we know for a fact she jerked him off in the shower too

 

[Mormont]

Eh, it’s before but it’s also a scene that only exists if you pass one of the most complicated checks in the game and that is the same check that decides if she lets you call her Bella.

My problem with the theory boils down to Occam’s razor. The Burke theory is based one one single line, entirely out of context with the larger scene, and it assumes she’s friends with the Burkes based on being coworkers. It also fundamentally changes the character from everything else she says and does regarding fidelity. It undermines all her crying, frustration and self hatred for cheating. It also directly goes against lines said by other characters (Burke directly denies any relationship and says she was in love with someone else).

Conversely if it is the MC she’s talking about it’s in line with the rest of the scene thats entirely about him. It’s backed up by all the other scenes the two share and the (Perhaps future) established friendship. Its in keeping with the character having feelings for the MC but suppressing and actively stopping them (pushing him towards Jill) and rather than being actively denied, we know for a fact she kissed the MC.

A theory in keeping with the entire story holds more water than a theory requiring nothing but assumptions.

If it was the MC then why not just refer to him as something like that idiot boy in the way she would, she says friend and I believe it's someone else that she is thinking about.

 

[Buttsmarnnn]

I really hope so. The model is beautiful, and the basis of work in her story can be very well used.

I don't know what game that lady is from.
But if you or SerHawkes know and wish to tell me for uhhh.. Research purposes. That would be greatly appreciated.

Especially since fucking Derek linked his Rooster and Swyper accounts. THAT could get awkward pretty quickly.

When whoever takes the MC's phones and gets a good look at his Swyper.... That ain't gonna be fun.

 

[Monetauro]

OK, i try something with this low cost sig...

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"And it was here that I discovered the monster that I had created"
You already got the size right, and I loved the fact that she looks naked.

waiiiit you mean you're gonna do Yennefer and Jill in one ?

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I'd worship you If you do It

Well prepare my altar! I like chocolates every night, and if it have a little bit of liquor, even better.

Actually, I just didn't start because, what I have in mind, will be a challenge for me, since it will have more PS than anything.
And there's the problem with her image (Yen). If I had free art to use, in addition to the game... But I'll find a way.

 

[jackofshadows]

My problem with the theory boils down to Occam’s razor.

Yeah, guys, as much as I can tell that you're just enjoy to throw one crazy theory onto another, from what I've seen in DPC's both games - there's always can be any outcome just for some task at hand (specific h-scene, for instance), not because it was thought through and set in stone before.

 

[ogar nightelf]

Especially since fucking Derek linked his Rooster and Swyper accounts. THAT could get awkward pretty quickly.



Harem Hotel by Runey

LOL of course the game right bellow this one. Thank you

 

[mindern]

If it was the MC then why not just refer to him as something like that idiot boy in the way she would, she says friend and I believe it's someone else that she is thinking about.

Why didn’t she call the Burkes coworkers or Burkes? She’s never once called those two friends in the story. Every hole you poke can be equally applied to your own theory.

She said friend because it was an escalating internal monologue. She says she shouldn’t be fooling around with “young students” and then leads into saying she shouldn’t be doing it with “friends” either. The stream of consciousness continues to her saying all that doesn’t matter because she’s stopped doing it anyways.

She was rattling off reasons she shouldn’t be doing things with the MC. This thought process is backed up by her actions where she goes out of her way to not be physical with him and actively pushes Jill on him (texting her when he’s in the library and then looking jealous from the wings).

That scene is her inner monologue justifying not being involved with the MC. She then goes ahead and does anyways and has a very visceral response to breaking her plan of not being involved.

 

[Yennefer]

Well prepare my altar! I like chocolates every night, and if it have a little bit of liquor, even better.

Actually, I just didn't start because, what I have in mind, will be a challenge for me, since it will have more PS than anything.
And there's the problem with her image (Yen). If I had free art to use, in addition to the game... But I'll find a way.

I'll be extremely grateful
I'll give you all the Chocolate you want mate
But really you don't have to do this If you don't want to
what you did with the Jill sigs was already really good
And btw I will literally print out your pic and make an altar if you do this

 

[Le Pew]

How can anyone not agree ?

 

[Coriolan]

I tend to like your version of Sage little more than DPC's, Coriolan. You seem to make her thighs/legs more proportional to her ass and it makes a world of a difference. Sage is gorgeous no matter what, but I definitely give you the thumbs up on yours.

Yes, for the needs of the stage, I had to improve this aspect (at least for me).

I like harmonious curves

I was bored. Hope you're not mad
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What the hell is that?

I don't mind, as long as it's not degrading to Bella.

Dammit me and Ellordrings can't say no to Missy.

I had noticed that several of you had Melissa's avatar, that's why, even though I had already made one some time ago.

Damn, it Coriolan! You could have tagged me! I almost missed it it weren't for my twin sloppy gonzo! I love Jill, but Missy is my love!
High five, girls!

Yes, I'm sorry, but I know you're on the forum regularly.

Come on, for the sake of argument, here's another one.

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

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When whoever takes the MC's phones and gets a good look at his Swyper.... That ain't gonna be fun.

*MC gets up and answers a knock at his door*

MC : "Chad?!? What are you doing here?"

"Don't play coy with me, MC, you know why I'm here." says Chad as he pushes past the MC and enters the room.

MC : "No. No I really don't, but sure, come in, why not..."

*MC shuts the door and turns around to find Chad...*

Spoiler: ...waiting for him

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MC : "Oh, fuck me..."

Chad : "That's the plan, big boy."

 

[Mormont]

She says she shouldn’t be fooling around with “young students” and then leads into saying she shouldn’t be doing it with “friends” either.

Young students referring to the MC and whoever her friend is? would make for a much better story than it just being a reference to the MC. But this is going no where right now just in circles.

 

[Joermundgand]

Why didn’t she call the Burkes coworkers or Burkes? She’s never once called those two friends in the story. Every hole you poke can be equally applied to your own theory.

She said friend because it was an escalating internal monologue. She says she shouldn’t be fooling around with “young students” and then leads into saying she shouldn’t be doing it with “friends” either. The stream of consciousness continues to her saying all that doesn’t matter because she’s stopped doing it anyways.

She was rattling off reasons she shouldn’t be doing things with the MC. This thought process is backed up by her actions where she goes out of her way to not be physical with him and actively pushes Jill on him (texting her when he’s in the library and then looking jealous from the wings).

That scene is her inner monologue justifying not being involved with the MC. She then goes ahead and does anyways and has a very visceral response to breaking her plan of not being involved.

Well she only has one friend really...

 

[Yennefer]

*MC gets up and answers a knock at his door*

MC : "Chad?!? What are you doing here?"

"Don't play coy with me, MC, you know why I'm here." says Chad as he pushes past the MC and enters the room.

MC : "No. No I really don't, but sure, come in, why not..."

*MC shuts the door and turns around to find Chad...*

Spoiler: ...waiting for him

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MC : "Oh, fuck me..."

Chad : "That's the plan, big boy."

 

[Knight_LC]

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[Joermundgand]

*MC gets up and answers a knock at his door*

MC : "Chad?!? What are you doing here?"

"Don't play coy with me, MC, you know why I'm here." says Chad as he pushes past the MC and enters the room.

MC : "No. No I really don't, but sure, come in, why not..."

*MC shuts the door and turns around to find Chad...*

Spoiler: ...waiting for him

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MC : "Oh, fuck me..."

Chad : "That's the plan, big boy."

Arrggghhhhh, my eyes, death of the soul, heat death of the universe, throw it into a singularity ASAP.

 

[Monetauro]

I don't know what game that lady is from.
But if you or @SerHawkes know and wish to tell me for uhhh.. Research purposes. That would be greatly appreciated.

Oh brother, I was referring to the MC's ex. But here:
https://f95zone.to/threads/halfway-house-ep-5-az.33607/

I'll be extremely grateful
I'll give you all the Chocolate you want mate
But really you don't have to do this If you don't want to
what you did with the Jill sigs was already really good
And btw I will literally print out your pic and make an altar if you do this

I offered it, of course I want to do it. The greater the challenge, the better!

And now then, I will love to see your creation too.