felicemastronzo
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The Quinn drug scenes are likely integral to the overall plot (which doesn't necessarily involve the mc but I expect it will come to a head and he will be dragged in to it).
The Bella sleep over with pancakes had the potential to be a bit strange. One play through that I did, I was mean and insulting to Bella and Jill every chance I had (total DIK), told Jill I wasn't good for her during the tennis date and Bella actually hated me and yet after sorting Cathy out (which it seems in the long run was all for nothing anyway), when calling Bella, "Isabella", she says, "Bella is fine" and then it's pancake city! So much for the Ice Queen. I could stand in the middle of Fifth Avenue and shoot somebody and that scene would still go the same way.
That said, the other two girls you're alluding to are also likely to be integral to the overall plot, that, or maybe they are the mc's friends and friends help each other...
the real oddity in the whole story is actually Sage.
it is enough to refuse to teach her to play the guitar (it seems to me in the second chapter) to make her practically disappear. a really sensitive girl who understands that no means no.
sincerely that we continue to have interactions with people we know in college is normal, and it is also credible that a story that is closed for us is not immediately closed for them