VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.11.1] [DrPinkCake]

[godkingxerxes]

what about rusty? oh yeeh of litle faith

so you want the MC to narrate? i did not imagined you for the zombie kind of guy... maybe he can ask his new roommate James to help out with the narration giving Bella the axemaiden origin story...

As for more drama plenty of drama can be added with Josie looking coi at Maya and saying congrats we´re going to be mothers, as you see the MC pulling an Arieth and running out the window! ... and after the MC runs away they start laughing and go something along the lines of "that should teach that fucker to not be such an ass about wearing a condom"

As for the Quinn situation its easy to explain during the 2 months of summer she burned trough her savings all spending and no income can land someone in such situations, as long as she keeps her cool and plan better it will even out! so yes it can sit on the backburner she does monthly payments, as long as she does not loose her cool or anything bad like loosing all her profits like what happened last time happens she should be safe! Besides it seems she caught up the dude who stole from her... but if he already spent it that might be an issue! It bugs me tough that since she as her drop offs delivered and only goes once a month to make her payments someone could have timed it so well, perhaps it was a spur of the moment thing of someone who knew her but if she was being fallowed... might be one of those situations where she is indeed being surveilled by the cops and a junkie just jumped her on the spur... but she being caught unwares seems weird considering she grew in that enviroment!

The MC is already narrating this story, it's happened in the past. We see that in the introduction and with Bella in episode 3.

I'm just saying it's just as likely he could be narrating in the near future instead of the far future, where he married and has 5 kids with the girl he knew for 6 weeks.

 

[shazba]

Her story might not last the year, I can agree with that. But the story can move on without her.

At the end of the day the story is about getting a college education and making money to help out his Daddy.

All the drama we're experiencing, the Frat Wars, the Maya tuition, the Quinn drugs, the Burke scandal, it's all just points on the MC journey of college. None of it is really important to the main goal.

Forgot about his dad as part of the endgame. So which girl are you gonna bring home to meet the parents?

Neil: "So, got anyone special in your life now?"​

mc: "I sure do Dad, her name's Jill, here's a picture of her..."​

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[Holy Bacchus]

Her story might not last the year, I can agree with that. But the story can move on without her.

At the end of the day the story is about getting a college education and making money to help out his Daddy.

All the drama we're experiencing, the Frat Wars, the Maya tuition, the Quinn drugs, the Burke scandal, it's all just points on the MC journey of college. None of it is really important to the main goal.

Yeah, and Van Wilder is all about getting a good college education.

This might be what the MC is technically there to do but it's not what the story is here to tell. We're not going to go through all 4 years of their time at college and we may very well not see his whole first year. We're here to be part of and experience the first tumultuous few months of the MC's life at college, where he meets lots of interesting new people, gets dragged into relationship dramas with several people, and has to contend with and probably getting roped into dealing with an illegal drug and prostiution ring operating within the college.

Once that's been dealt with, there will be nothing left to tell because when the dust settles, it will just be a regular college experience for him and that's not something that needs to be shown in quite the same level of detail as these first few months.

 

[Kellermann]

Plausibility aside Holy Bacchus, I simply must have a Halloween party with all of the girls in costume along with a fun Christmas episode, and I sure as fuck need a B&R spring break. I can't believe you guys don't care about seeing spring break. Even not knowing much about an American college, it involves babes in bikinis, sunny beaches, and lots of guilt free sex! Come on maggot brothers!

 

[shazba]

Plausibility aside Holy Bacchus, I simply must have a Halloween party with all of the girls in costume along with a fun Christmas episode, and I sure as fuck need a B&R spring break. I can't believe you guys don't care about seeing spring break. Even not knowing much about an American college, it involves babes in bikinis, sunny beaches, and lots of guilt free sex! Come on maggot brothers!

Given what the girls wore at the CUMpetition and the movie night, whilst Halloween may be more inventive, it couldn't possibly show more skin. Spring break on the other hand...

 

[n0cn1l]

At the end of the day the story is about getting a college education and making money to help out his Daddy.

I disagree, the story is about family(the game started saying that) and take sage for example she is a senior, what the point in having her as LI if she will stay only for a year while you keep going. The game will probably go till christmas or new year's eve.

 

[Holy Bacchus]

Plausibility aside Holy Bacchus, I simply must have a Halloween party with all of the girls in costume along with a fun Christmas episode, and I sure as fuck need a B&R spring break. I can't believe you guys don't care about seeing spring break. Even not knowing much about an American college, it involves babes in bikinis, sunny beaches, and lots of guilt free sex! Come on maggot brothers!

Well, perhaps as a compromise, let's say that it will jump forward to end on Spring Break as an epilogue after the Halloween massacre incident that exposes everything and ends the main story.

 

[Kellermann]

Given what the girls wore at the CUMpetition and the movie night, whilst Halloween may be more inventive, it couldn't possibly show more skin. Spring break on the other hand...

I want it to be a campus-wide (and maybe off campus aka Pink Rose) Halloween where EVERYONE dresses up, even faculty

P.S. Why is there no jizz in my pants smiley for postings? What? I can't jizz in my pants over my own comments?? Just like real life

 

[gamingdevil800]

I disagree, the story is about family(the game started saying that) and take sage for example she is a senior, what the point in having her as LI if she will stay only for a year while you keep going. The game will probably go till christmas or new year's eve.

What is this Fast and Furious? Also he can play out the story as long as he wants in this year time frame and just do a time skip to graduation for the ending if he wants to only a week or so has passed in game time (not like a realistic passage of time really matters though).

 

[StachuJons]

Who helped Maya pass the HOTs challenges if MC is on DIK route ?

 

[Holy Bacchus]

What is this Fast and Furious? Also he can play out the story as long as he wants in this year time frame and just do a time skip to graduation for the ending if he wants to only a week or so has passed in game time (not like a realistic passage of time really matters though).

3 weeks have passed, actually. To get to the end of the year he'd need to make each episode from now on at least half a months worth of time each and that isn't likely to happen.

Who helped Maya pass the HOTs challenges if MC is on DIK route ?

Nobody. They faked it with porn videos and were able to fool Arieth with them.

 

[AchedCroissant]

Forgot about his dad as part of the endgame. So which girl are you gonna bring home to meet the parents?

Neil: "So, got anyone special in your life now?"​

mc: "I sure do Dad, her name's Jill, here's a picture of her..."​

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Wincest

 

[godkingxerxes]

I disagree, the story is about family(the game started saying that) and take sage for example she is a senior, what the point in having her as LI if she will stay only for a year while you keep going. The game will probably go till christmas or new year's eve.

Yes helping out his Daddy is family.

And I never said 4 year game, a 1 year game with it ending after the first year. With him still in college is significantly better than a 20 year time jump and him being married with someone he knew for a few weeks. It's just a pandering ending.

We don't need bows tied, this is just one stop on the story of the MC. Let first year college play out and leave off in an optimistic spot with the future bright, he's still on college, he's still working to better his family life. That's a good ending.

 

[Kellermann]

Wincest
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That's definitely the Jill penis reveal face.

 

[JohnDelfino]

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Hopefully this isn't forced on you like the yoga and most other Bella scenes.

 

[felicemastronzo]

That's definitely the Jill penis reveal face.

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[SenkuIshigami]

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Anyone considered Jill and Josy vs MC and Bella? I’d like to think Tybalt isn’t there, that prick

 

[Laport Deminis]

Spring Break sound good, but its not like we need reasons, or a nice moment to see the girls naked. Is more like:
- Thnks for the guitarr lessons, now lets fuck.
- I like your tie... lets fuck
- We smoke weed... lets fuck
- I was stolen and loose all my drugs... lets fuck.
- I dont want to have another feminist class... lets fuck
- Did you find tequila?, cool... now lets fuck.
- We are in a sauna so... lets fuck.
- We need this item for our... you now, it doesnt matter, lets fuck.

Except for Jill of course wich is more like:
- Wait, we re going to fast.
- But we have been marries forfour years.
- I know, but lets take it slowy.

 

[AchedCroissant]

That's definitely the Jill penis reveal face.

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[Holy Bacchus]

Hopefully this isn't forced on you like the yoga and most other Bella scenes.

Narrator: "But it was in fact forced upon all players and most didn't care because Bella is hot as fuck and who in their right mind would want to avoid scenes with her?"