VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.11.1] [DrPinkCake]

[Holy Bacchus]

any girls focused on next update?

All of them. This game is story-focused and each main girl gets content in some way or another.

 

[dalli_x]

Wildcat Sage.

 

[Cabin Fever]

What the hell? Jill is unusually tall for a girl.
Well, her height doesn't show properly in the game, it seems.

Well, I was just correcting Porthas' conversion errors.

But yeah, those numbers, and especially Jill's, seems really off. Jill at that height would basically be an Amazon. And she's definitely not nearly a foot and a half taller than Josy. The average height for US woman is just under 5' 4" (2016 data). I'd say most of those numbers only make sense if you count the height of the stiletto heels. And even then it still wouldn't make sense for Jill.

 

[drakken]

At least once she participated. Quinn/Riona/MC

This is possible, then again she could of gotten the deal is she simply supplies Burke with new ones. In otherwords still being a dealer.

I'm going back through every scene. Right now I'm back at the movie night at the HOT house, where they start drinking and he either puts his hand down her panties or he doesn't. I guess I'm looking for something that doesn't conclude with sex. That's usually a good sign there's more there than FWB stuff.

It comes in increments, someone who wants no attachments but gets close like that won't jump straight into it. But a big step was letting him stay then movie night, she was trying to get his mind off of Maya and josy. Second was guitar lesson outside, then you have when mc sat outside in the rain talking to her, her opening up about her family, when mc was walking her home from the cafeteria and the fact that she stopped mc from beating dawes ass. Its Little signs here n there but their building.

Edit: i forgot to mention when she was sick in there

 

[InfiniteIgnorance]

Well, I was just correcting Porthas' conversion errors.

But yeah, those numbers, and especially Jill's, seems really off. Jill at that height would basically be an Amazon. And she's definitely not nearly a foot and a half taller than Josy. The average height for US woman is just under 5' 4" (2016 data). I'd say most of those numbers only make sense if you count the height of the stiletto heels. And even then it still wouldn't make sense for Jill.

Jill isn't even 180cm. I have no idea where that 200cm shit came from. She's not even as tall as Derek.

 

[Abhishek_tanwar]

There are those who argue otherwise. And they may not be wrong. But, to me, the relationship between Sage and the MC seems based on little more than sex. That's not a strong bond.

Their relation found on chad ignorance of sage. Which develop mutual understanding of give and take then comes friendship as time goes (It's became sexual friendship) by, at the very end of chapter 6 when mc open his heart to about his mother which indicate that as sage know she is damaged by family issues.

She realizes that so does the mc suffering just like her and that issue could not be more hurting them his own (mc) existence is a outcome of his mother death.

In some of that way mc is also damaged. That is the point she hugs you more then a sexual or just friend but as partner of journey where they both have though ride.

This is the end point I was taking about when she cries for mc.

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I understand you point but relationship evolve all the time.

It's just weird. For one thing, girls don't titfuck guys they don't even like. That's not part of being fuckbuddies. Girls don't get shit out of that. She only did that for revenge on Chad. Then, after they have the buttsekz she still says they're just fuckbuddies and makes him sleep somewhere else besides her bed. And she says she's taken when the MC says he has more interest in her than in Quinn. She's bipolar or something.

 

[sorco2003]

Well, I was just correcting Porthas' conversion errors.

But yeah, those numbers, and especially Jill's, seems really off. Jill at that height would basically be an Amazon. And she's definitely not nearly a foot and a half taller than Josy. The average height for US woman is just under 5' 4" (2016 data). I'd say most of those numbers only make sense if you count the height of the stiletto heels. And even then it still wouldn't make sense for Jill.

The truth, I was just kidding, but if I tell you in a serious way it is that Josy can measure 160cm and Maya probably 165cm because between them there is not much difference

Sage is taller than Maya I would say that 168cm to 170cm

Isabella is more taller than Sage by a little so she must measure more than 170

And Jill must fit in that range of 170-175cm

And the MC with Jill I don't notice much of the difference so they can measure the same

 

[InfiniteIgnorance]

It comes in increments, someone who wants no attachments but gets close like that won't jump straight into it. But a big step was letting him stay then movie night, she was trying to get his mind off of Maya and josy. Second was guitar lesson outside, then you have when mc sat outside in the rain talking to her, her opening up about her family, when mc was walking her home from the cafeteria and the fact that she stopped mc from beating dawes ass. Its Little signs here n there but their building.

Edit: i forgot to mention when she was sick in there

It's just weird. For one thing, girls don't titfuck guys they don't even like. That's not part of being fuckbuddies. Girls don't get shit out of that. She only did that for revenge on Chad. Then, after they have the buttsekz she still says they're just fuckbuddies and makes him sleep somewhere else besides her bed. And she says she's taken when the MC says he has more interest in her than in Quinn. She's bipolar or something.

 

[shazba]

If you will allow me to be as blunt, isn't that essentially that everything popular isn't inherently good at storytelling? Which would mean that NCIS is apparently the golden goose of great narratives, I mean it's been on for 20 years and still gets good ratings. If it is critical response, well Ben Hur apparently still lives today as great of a movie as ever. If instead of countering points with scenes and narrative from the game your assertion is instead that it is popular, it becomes immune to critical discussion?

And by the way, I am here critical of the actual storytelling being done, not what I prefer. Hell, even in this particular situation there's a lot of games on this very site that have the MC turning the lesbian through the power of their magic dick, these are wish fulfillment games after all. I don't have a problem with a majority of those, even if I don't prefer the trope personally, as in them it is executed within the narrative framework they present.

Even the fact that I vent about this is that I do think there are several parts the game does well, which makes these fallacies stand up more. For example, I think the Sage storyline relatively well done and I've already pointed out the work with the teacher stories. With that I guess it is time for me to leave the negativity with me as I don't think any discussion can remain constructive once popularity becomes the defense.

You went straight to the "lots of people like it" and ignored everything else I stated.

You also completely ignored my previous post (here) that lists the various interactions between the two girls.

It just comes down to you not being satisfied that enough has been presented between the girls to convince you that they are in love, when in fact the idea that they are together has been beaten over our head so much that no further visuals are warranted.

Does anyone playing the game not know they are together? Surely not, so why do you need more visuals?

Also, all the other techniques of giving us snippets of details to be fleshed out later, you don't like it (Mona leaving as an example), but others get it. There are heaps of clues as to why Mona may have left, but it seems you need a linear story from start to finish to make you feel comfortable. That's just your preference, it's not an objective criticism.

The game's not perfect, there are lots of issues that people have raised, but to say the story telling is trash is a bit heavy handed.

 

[Holy Bacchus]

It's just weird. For one thing, girls don't titfuck guys they don't even like. That's not part of being fuckbuddies. Girls don't get shit out of that. She only did that for revenge on Chad. Then, after they have the buttsekz she still says they're just fuckbuddies and makes him sleep somewhere else besides her bed. And she says she's taken when the MC says he has more interest in her than in Quinn. She's bipolar or something.

No, she's just a woman.

 

[Holy Bacchus]

You went straight to the "lots of people like it" and ignored everything else I stated.

You also completely ignored my previous post (here) that lists the various interactions between the two girls.

It just comes down to you not being satisfied that enough has been presented between the girls to convince you that they are in love, when in fact the idea that they are together has been beaten over our head so much that no further visuals are warranted.

Does anyone playing the game not know they are together? Surely not, so why do you need more visuals?

Also, all the other techniques of giving us snippets of details to be fleshed out later, you don't like it (Mona leaving as an example), but others get it. There are heaps of clues as to why Mona may have left, but it seems you need a linear story from start to finish to make you feel comfortable. That's just your preference, it's not an objective criticism.

It doesn't even seem to be about visuals, it's like they just want Maya to look at a girl and say, "Damn, she's sexy. I'd like a piece of of that", because apparently that's what needs to happen to make it clear Maya likes girls.

 

[Abhishek_tanwar]

For sage, MC is not the one she loves now, maybe in the future

Remeber . . . (If you chose to stay at hots)
Mc : Thanks for letting me stay here.
Sage : I . . . I like you.
and then some more statements.

And here is more

Their relation found on chad ignorance of sage. Which develop mutual understanding of give and take then comes friendship as time goes (It's became sexual friendship) by, at the very end of chapter 6 when mc open his heart to about his mother which indicate that as sage know she is damaged by family issues.

She realizes that so does the mc suffering just like her and that issue could not be more hurting them his own (mc) existence is a outcome of his mother death.

In some of that way mc is also damaged. That is the point she hugs you more then a sexual or just friend but as partner of journey where they both have though ride.

This is the end point I was taking about when she cries for mc.

 

[Ilhares]

Prep boy has a unique fetish.

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Of course he does. He's a vegetarian, you see. Sex with Jill? No way, that's using animal labor (Jill is an animal) for our benefit.

Am I mistaken or is Mona just talking about the plural. If so, the girls have to fuck not only Burke but multiple old scumbags for the free tuition.
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I don't think it's about "multiple old guys" as such. I think it was the realization that she'd be fucking guys who are older than mere college-age dudes who want to get laid. She might have viewed it as a banging the age-appropriate hotties and getting paid for it. Not guys that remind her of her father.

Oh, I've played it through many, many times but nothing yet has convinced me Sage wouldn't drop the MC like a bad habit.

Then you, sir, are merely living up to your forum username. My father always said to stick with your strengths.

 

[Crystaldom]

Looks like Bella, doesn't she? Priscilla Huggins

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Has the same stone cold "nothing makes me happy" look.

 

[TripleV]

You went straight to the "lots of people like it" and ignored everything else I stated.

You also completely ignored my previous post (here) that lists the various interactions between the two girls.

It just comes down to you not being satisfied that enough has been presented between the girls to convince you that they are in love, when in fact the idea that they are together has been beaten over our head so much that no further visuals are warranted.

Does anyone playing the game not know they are together? Surely not, so why do you need more visuals?

Also, all the other techniques of giving us snippets of details to be fleshed out later, you don't like it (Mona leaving as an example), but others get it. There are heaps of clues as to why Mona may have left, but it seems you need a linear story from start to finish to make you feel comfortable. That's just your preference, it's not an objective criticism.

The game's not perfect, there are lots of issues that people have raised, but to say the story telling is trash is a bit heavy handed.

The reason I went to 'lots people like it' defense is because that's what you wrote. And when the discussion comes to that, regardless what was before it, I don't personally see much point to continue on after that. Also on the list, not only was there overlap with other responses I gave, but I didn't think it was that convincing to be honest, especially because it skips the interaction in Episode which basically negates that really clumsy reunion at the end of Episode 4. And that's not even starting how horribly that was set up because the story didn't do the work to actually earn the moment. For every moment in your list, I can probably list one to two scenes that massively undercut those 'meaningful' moments.

That is a personal opinion. Now I addressed your list. Still makes impossible anything beyond that because you made it popularity of being signal of how it succeeds in storytelling. Also, while I did get to vent, I don't see that much purpose being a source of negativity, got complaint of my chest, and now the discussion can go back to what it was with reduced complaints. Holy hell that was difficult to write without getting passive-aggressive.

It doesn't even seem to be about visuals, it's like they just want Maya to look at a girl and say, "Damn, she's sexy. I'd like a piece of of that", because apparently that's what needs to happen to make it clear Maya likes girls.

I thought I explained this particular aspect a couple of times, but obviously I failed. So one last attempt. I think we would both agree that Maya's whole tragic backstory and her motivation to resorting to the HOT process is because her father's reaction to finding out she's gay. We even got the flashback scene. So the game makes Maya's sexuality and the price she paid for it a core part of the character. Not only that, the game uses that as the cliffhanger for Episode 6.

Now, when writing it like that, I wouldn't think you needed some great sexual scene with her checking out women or hot lesbian scenes. That is sufficient. However, the only character you see Maya show any kind of sexual/romantic attraction to in the university is the male MC. There is an exception here in that if you go in to that relationship with the M&J, you could get that one scene, but even that references the MC. Hell, I could give examples of both women prioritizing the MC even if he turns them down instead of each other. This is why the fact that there's no actual show of her being attracted to women is an issue because that is the core of her story and there are multiple examples of how turned on she is about having sexual interactions with a guy.

By the way, on that longer response you gave, I didn't bother pointing this out then, you gave a real life example which is kind of weird as this is game is not real life. As are not TV shows or movies, even if they were documentaries. As such, games and all those are collections of narratives moments that are supposed to build towards a consistent story based on the scenes that are shown. Actually I always thought the golden rule was 'Show, don't tell', but apparently with Maya it's 'Why would you need to show when you can just tell?'. Sorry about that, that passive-aggressive moment felt too good to pass on.

 

[The Bush Diver]

Looks like Bella, doesn't she? Priscilla Huggins

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*drooling*

I'm not caring about her resembling Bella, I want her!

 

[Brickman]

You think it's possible Maya and even Josy end up in Mona's situation if the MC doesn't warn Maya about being weary of Quinn's intentions? Or they just quit the HOTS no matter what?

 

[InfiniteIgnorance]

Then you, sir, are merely living up to your forum username. My father always said to stick with your strengths.

Ad hominem aside, when last I left Sage she was explaining to the MC that she was at the Preps party for money and that she couldn't honor her commitment to the DIKs. Sounds like true love to me.

 

[bluehound36]

You think it's possible Maya and even Josy end up in Mona's situation if the MC doesn't warn Maya about being weary of Quinn's intentions? Or they just quit the HOTS no matter what?

Already done a playthrough without warning her and it still leads to the same outcome as if you had warned her. I suspect DPC didn't fully work out all the choices to be as impactful as they could have been or has an entirely different plan as to what happens in a later episode with that specific choice influencing her decision to return to the hots maybe.

 

[Laport Deminis]

Oh, I've played it through many, many times but nothing yet has convinced me Sage wouldn't drop the MC like a bad habit.

You need a scene in wich she runs to an airport and ask him to stay with her?

Jokes aside, the relationship is developing. Love is not something you built in a day or two. But we know how this is going to end, couse is a porn game and is meant to please our ego. The MC is a proyection of ourselfs. We are amazing couse we give DPC money ("we"): Ergo DPC is going to make Sage to absurdly fall in love with our huge cock.
And to the story: Sage sayd that she is used to hide her emotions, besides she is a 21ys old president of a university slut club. Of course she is not going to show huge emotions towards a guy she met recently. What she is going to do is what most of the girls (and boys) likeher does. Deny their feelings and pretend is just sex until she is totally in. Some peoplelive their entire lifes doing that. So, is in the small details when you see that is not just sex and something else is developing.