dalli_x
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I understand what you are trying to tell me.I'm confused. The MC's relationship with Maya & Josy in Episode 4 is completely unaffected by who else he's pursuing. In fact, in Episode 5 the MC will convince Maya to opt for a "no strings" relationship, even if the MC has shown no interest in anyone but Maya and Josy!
The problem with the writing in Episode 4 is that there is a relentless focus on the MC being torn up by the shocking reveal that the two girls he's crushing on are an item, but the big climax is all about helping them reconcile. The MC's relationship with them is a literal afterthought. Combine that with the fact that the MC cannot call them out on the legitimate mistakes they made and the fact that they will automatically reject him for DIK affinity (not for sleeping around) despite never objecting to that behavior previously, and the ending is at best rushed and at worst a hot mess.
Maya and the MC agree that there should be no commitments yet. Josy, however, was not so happy with it. I figure if it's like real life, women say one thing and mean another. So if the MC makes one on DIK, it may not do Maya, but with Josy I'm not so sure.
I would have acted differently in the place of the MC. But on the other hand you could mention that you only appreciate something when you lose it and just the facial expressions of Josy and Maya are worth it that the MC has gone. Lies have short legs, as they say in my country.