NewTricks
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- Nov 1, 2017
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Zoey fucked no one, but so what if she did? Sage did have sex with Chad at some point. Let that soak in while you cringe. Two of your love interests fuck each other whether you like it or not. Bella fucks her imaginary husband during her psychotic breaks. Half of the HOTS you can fuck work a glory hole in the dorm. The other half have steady boyfriends, that they admittedly cheat on. Don't get me started on fucking Quinn. So if all you want is goddamn Jill by all means. Enjoy the blessed virgin! A woman having a healthy sex life when she is single and unattached is hardly the worst thing in the world.One big problem (as I see it) is he devoted time and effort to some bitch who shouldn't even be in the story anymore. If he was absolutely insistent on re-introducing the MC's ex, he could have had her show up for one scene where he's like : "So, how have you been? I see you went full retard and got your tits tattooed.' And she could be like : "Yeah, woo, Cali for life, fucked some guys but ran out of money, hey I hear you got some recently." Roll credits.