Lostanddamned
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The only devs from the ones that you mentioned that are better than DPC are Drifty, Notty and Stone Fox Studios. Another better writer than DPC is NLT. All other devs that you mentioned are below DPC's abilities as writers, with the exception of Oceanlab, who is on an equal level as him, but he fancies himself more as a writer than a game dev so much, that he released 6 updates in 4 years and now is spending his time reworking the game.All stories in this "Category" are implausible to impossible, so taking that critique off the table and looking at just stories, well and sometimes graphics and music where warranted.
Drifty- Leap of Faith (Compares wonderfully all around, but the story is my favorite probably. Yes some seems implausible but we took that off the table as a critique. Music and renders, Amazing! Additional Plus the story was inspired in large part by the suicide of his daughter which makes it the most gripping and gut wrenching story period. I have cried my eyes out every time I play through.)
LikesBlondes/Ptolemy-Rebirth (Story only. Graphically and musically, not on the same page. Renders are great, but no animations. Many people complain about lack of sex, but it is a vampire story, not a porn novel)
Notty-Heavy Five (Scifi on an entirely different level!! Music no. Everything else is pretty awesome)
STWAdev- Both The Author and the Unbroken (Both stories are amazing. Set in the same world/setting, and connected. Music no. The rest. Definitely.)
Motzkey- Timestamps-both stories (Time travel, hot milfs, fetishes, BACON! nuff said)
Cheeky Gimp- Where the Heart Is (Pretty amazing, but music improvements would be appreciated)
Ocean- Where it All Began (Revision- Chapter 1 models are so fucking amazing now, and beats out DPC. The original I did not think so. Leia is my new favorite over Bella and everyone who has seen me post here knows that Bella was my favorite from any game... She is now second. Story is being re-written and I am referencing the rework writing over the original thus far, but of course have to take the original into account. Music... Like almost all the other choices music would make this perfect)
PhillyGames- City of Broken Dreamers ( only thing that does not exceed DPC is the music. Depraved Awakenings also exceeds Acting Lessons by far)
StudioFOW- Subverse..... I mean..... shit.... it is amazing.
Stone Fox- Chasing Sunsets (Good story, written well so far. The renders and such, good, but not DPC quality.. music needs improving)
LewdLab- Dreams of Desire (Definitive Edition)
R.J. Rhodes- Come Home (except for music, this is pretty fucking amazing- in fairness she did just add music, but compared to BaDIK it sucks!)
Naughty Road- Light of My Life (sad but hilarious incest adventures... Models are unique, which puts some folks off, but it is amazing. Music needs help)
You asked for some good writing. Try the above out. Comparing the quality of writing, I think all of the above are better than what DPC is probably capable of on his best day. His renders and animations, as well as music is really only equaled by Leap of Faith, and render wise, Where it All Began has better renders on the revision.
Subverse was unfair I admit, but it is definitely a fun add, and the story is better. It is hilarious, and yes it is a different type of game all together. The trailer for the game all by itself is enough to show you the quality of the humor.
Not including you in this, but boy does this topic trigger the snowflakes!!
Peace
I'm not a DPC fan and I consider him an average writer, but you are talking as if DPC is such a shitty writer that he is on Slonique (literally the same game every time with different models), Gumdrop (ecstasy fuelled writing VN, which makes no sense at all) or Tremmi (VN with short updates that goes on way too long and you lose the plot) levels of a writer.