Cabin Fever
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I'm of the opposite opinion. By this point in the story every fuckable girl wants a piece of MC. A Zoey that has been sleeping around would make her just another side girl in the waiting line for MC's cock.Speaking of interlude. I'm a little surprised that Zoey hasn't had sex with anyone during those months in San Diego. She looks like a girl with an open mind and in all this time she has not found a single partner. It would add more drama to the plot, for example, if she became a sex friend with that orange guy (I don’t remember the name) that Emma bitch was jealous of her. It would have connected her more to the San Diego characters and added plot twists in the future. In the current situation, the appearance of these characters in the future does not make sense.
I am not a hater of the interlude, I rate it 4/5 as introducing a new important character and defining her personality (DIK or CHICK Zoe). But I think it could be better.
On the other hand, a Zoey that hasn't been sleeping around brings a very dramatic contrast to MC's experience at the college. It would make MC realize that the two of them had a much stronger and meaningful bond that he realized, instantly elevating her to main LI potential.
Also, if Zoey has been sleeping with Bret, it makes Emma's jealousy and anger justified. It'd also give MC another reason to move on.
Lastly, it's not sex that makes Zoey connected to the San Diego characters. It's the friendship and feelings they've developed that connects them. It's obvious that Bret has feelings for Zoey. If he's going to come chasing after Zoey, he'll come, whether they have had sex or not.