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My sincere observations:
I do not consider 99.8% of what is called a GAME here, but rather a story with animation creating immersion in fantasy and script in these animations. The one good point in the game is all the animation. It shows the developer is willing to really work for his game
That said.
In this case, DEV has a plan, script and clear development. It has a good story and knows how to develop it objectively. Yes and no... We know where the stories are going however some of the story telling strategies are getting old and too predictable. It's obvious the If I didn't think this game had any promise is trying to slow down the game not allowing the MC to actually have sex (which is fine to a point), but to slow down the 'critical moment' the developer has always some interruption that stops the sexy moments and puts it on hold. In a few cases the reasons for stopping are perfect and plausible (like her feeling her wedding ring and coming to her senses.) However to always avoid using interruptions, just make it that the situation isn't right with too many other characters being around.
The main character is well done.
This theme of betrayal and the dirty old man reach the public and this is what those who create this type of entertainment want.
Incest is a very recurring theme and boys are overwhelmingly the preferred character, each with their own taste.
DEV even seeks to satisfy its financiers and seeks to change the path to suit its will, their will.
But the perfect scenario is to give freedom to the creator, let it roll and at the end if they agree on future projects and pre-production know what they really want. For every game there has to have that special flavor to set it apart from all other games with similar plots/themes/story. Nothing is very special about the holy trio of a good script. Now a good working formula gets people leaning in. The whole old man/incest and other tropes sure... but to really sell it, the audience needs to really know what is going on in the MC's mind. MC knows Goro is going to continue his seduction... MC knows the boys are after her cookie... but we don't see her planning one way or the other to resolve it. It's a corruption game... part of the corruption part is how it affects the mind, heart and soul. All we are getting is seeing the results of the corruptions. Does the MC look forward to Goro's attention or dreading it... is she secretly turned on about the boys' attention... etc.
The most faithful comparison they make is to the other Wife and Mother, yes, but this one knew how to create the shortcut, did not abuse expectations. Some were frustrated by the old man's sex. Now they want HER to just have sex with EVERYONE in front of her, especially boys and black people or a black boy.
Even the dog wants to see her have sex, CrazyDad reminded me.
Comics are a good source.
Congratulations on your work, DEV, this story is on my radar, I'm in no rush.
I'm not obsessed, I'll be around.
If I didn't think this game had any promise, I'd have written off as a dumpster fire and not even bother following it on the forums. There are workable elements with this game... it's not in the dumpster (yet) nor has anyone struck a match to it (yet)
