There is no daughter or sister...
Because this is Mrs. Watson (it's even the same game thread) and has been renamed and remade 16,000 times now.
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That makes sense ...
And it's tragic what I remember of the old Watson and this new(er) version. I see where the developer wants to take the game but is having pacing issues with the plot as well as the overall structure of the story
*It lacks MC motives for her conduct. *
^It doesn't have to be any more complicated than the MC being a freak with some serious kink issues. But the game does need a 'conflict' to act as a catalyst that triggers some of the events.
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*I suspect there are more love interests in the waiting that haven't been produced yet. And that would detract from all the other paths already started.*
^Some of the other characters can be used to further expand the plot. But it seems father/Daughter path is in the making and if there is a blackmail path with the neighbor's son and the daughter is also put into that, that would mess up the father/daughter plots. Organization and separation need to be maintained. I guess the MC is supposed to be the 'slut' but not all the female characters need to become a slut but can be involved within their own paths
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*Honestly a writer and/or editor are needed in this game to keep it on the rails*
^All the plots are getting too twisted... I'm too busy myself at the moment, but are there any writers wanting to help this developer?
