constructive criticism. The story with Tobey needs to be tweaked...it doesn't make total sense why she would suddenly pursue this so easily. There should be an element of reluctance on her behalf and she regrets going along this path but gets in too deep and can't stop. With a few tweaks to the script it can be improved as at the moment, the build up is odd and out of character really
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She progressed with Tobey fairly quickly, she handjobs Mateo fairly easily and puts him between her boobs bearing in mind she's being blackmailed by him and there's no reluctance.
The events with secondary characters are progressing faster then they did with Goro.
Does she still blow Tobey on Day 18, if so she blew him quicker then she did Goro.
- May 29, 2024
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Everything is moving so fast - because Patreon subscibers voted that they want to see more little boys with penises, not GORO. So the developer caved in and rewrote everything quickly. Now everything seems more illogical and even funny (the toilet scene where two guys show each other their dicks ...
)Tomorrow or sometime on PATREON the dev will ask where to move the story - and if everyone votes for a VACUUM CLEANER with a penis from the closet - rest assured - this vacuum cleaner will be in her.
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I am disappointed with the game. The updates are not fast, but even when they come - there is nothing there. A few slides and animation and ..... that's it.
I want more logical plot twists and if the developer has already started one of the branches - with GORO - then let it continue and intensify. And let there be more hot scenes and sexual positions, and not what was before - bad animation and strange jerks ... (I mean sex between GORO and CHRISTINE)
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