VN Ren'Py Betrayal [v0.1] [Frxnz]

[HELIO CESAR]

Wtf is wrong with you people? I suggested a PATH where that could be a possibility, not that game becomes centered around a lesbian/bisexual relationship.

Do you not understand the point of a PATH?

Come-on man, you are an engaged member, you must have know by now how most people here are.

 

[SOABUK80]

Right so i spent like an hour reading this and then it said End of Prologue and the entire vn was just all whining and bitchyiness, wont be touching this again anytime soon, felt more like a boring soap opera, what a disappointment, the art work was nice though.

 

[Scooter_Tramp]

Without custom naming I'm not interested...

 

[metamorphMP]

agree with previous posters, it felt like main trio kept beating around the bush instead of saying anything substantial, it's annoying and tiresome

and dialogues... man

A - How close am I?
R - Not close enough.
A - Cut the bullshit. I want real answers.
R - You're closer than you were. After this job, you'll be even closer.
A - How much closer?

so, I have a question: how close is Ashley?

my take on Luara's secret - just tell them already why you need money, please, enough with this charade, I’m begging you

MC is a definition of charm:

R - I'm really glad I got to see you again.
MC - I'm really glad too.
R - Don't blame yourself for something that's not your fault.
MC - Thanks.
R - I really want our first meetup after all these years to be fun, you know?
MC - Whatever you say.

I think meaningful lines in a game could be delivered in 20–30 renders. I spent 2 hours playing, but it feels like main plot barely moved

But I liked car models, thanks for that!

 

[AlexMpog]

agree with previous posters, it felt like main trio kept beating around the bush instead of saying anything substantial, it's annoying and tiresome

and dialogues... man

A - How close am 1?
R - Not close enough.
A - Cut the bullshit. I want real answers.
R - You're closer than you were. After this job, you'll be even closer.
A - How much closer?

so, I have a question: how close is Ashley?

my take on Luara's secret - just tell them already why you need money, please, enough with this charade, I’m begging you

MC is a definition of charm:

R - I'm really glad I got to see you again.
MC - I'm really glad too.
R - Don't blame yourself for something that's not your fault.
MC - Thanks.
R - I really want our first meetup after all these years to be fun, you know?
MC - Whatever you say.

I think meaningful lines in a game could be delivered in 20–30 renders. I spent 2 hours playing, but it feels like main plot barely moved

But I liked car models, thanks for that!

To me, it feels like different parts of the game were written by different people (or with different tools). While I agree that some dialogues were atrocious, there were a few decent ones - for example, scene between MC and Mona. But overall, I agree - it was hard to read. I played it in the evening, and monotonous, repetitive lines made me sleepy.

 

[metamorphMP]

To me, it feels like different parts of the game were written by different people (or with different tools). While I agree that some dialogues were atrocious, there were a few I liked - for example, scene between MC and Mona. But overall, I agree - it was hard to read. I played it in the evening, and monotonous, repetitive lines made me sleepy.

Mona is such a sweetheart, but it looks like Vincent is gonna screw her over. The only likable girl

 

[AlexMpog]

Mona is such a sweetheart, but it looks like Vincent is gonna screw her over. The only likable girl

Their main target is a reporter. Mona’s her assistant - collateral damage maybe, though I doubt it.
Well, let’s hope the MC gets screwed 1st (and it looks like that’s the case here), so there won’t be any need to go through the whole operation .

Jokes aside, I dunno if Mona is a LI or not, but she’s my favourite girl so far, even though we still know nothing about her or her agenda.
I also like Wanda (therapist), though MC constantly being a DIK to her for whatever reason kind of ruined my experience.

 

[godscoper]

How to change the MC name? Forced names removes immersion.

1.open with notepad or whatever you use
2. change all "Your Name" text to whatever name you want
3. save and move to Game folder.
should work

You might get a few renders where he still calls himself Vincent, or some girls still call him Vincent.

 

[SOABUK80]

1.open with notepad or whatever you use
2. change all "Your Name" text to whatever name you want
3. save and move to Game folder.
should work

You might get a few renders where he still calls himself Vincent, or some girls still call him Vincent.

Thanks ill give it a try.

 

[MIkedante]

1.open with notepad or whatever you use
2. change all "Your Name" text to whatever name you want
3. save and move to Game folder.
should work

You might get a few renders where he still calls himself Vincent, or some girls still call him Vincent.

Not to mention that there is too shortened version of his name used in dialog, where is only single "V".

 

[SARBASST]

I-patch??

 

[MiltonPowers]

I-patch??

It would make absolutely no sense at all.

 

[Noxedia]

Nothing says 'corporate dystopia' like three mercenaries arguing over who gets shotgun while stealing a car

 

[AlexMpog]

It would make absolutely no sense at all.

When exactly did it stop pure incest fanbase?

 

[MiltonPowers]

When exactly did it stop pure incest fanbase?

Yeah I know. Forgot where I was for a second.

 

[Nimbus Commando]

It’s a complex question because Ashley is more open to such things, but in my vision, she isn’t a lesbian. Laura, on the other hand, is completely heterosexual, but who knows what Ashley might convince her to do

Well, I can tell this will be a dumpster fire.

 

[Ricthequick]

Ever since I played it, everytime I read "Betrayal" on a piece of media/entertainment I go back to the early 90's...


Synopsis kind is the same tho.

 

[TribalJOB]

Thanks for sharing your game Frxnz !
However, keep in mind that not everyone uses Windows.
Some of us use Mac or Linux, so remember to compile for those operating systems.

 

[FatYoda]

drop the lesbian tag...unless i chose something wrong there isn't any content in the game yet so it doesn't belong until they do something. Hoping for a throuple path...where the girls are loyal to the throuple but they encourage MMC to have some fun with other girls too. With the feelings blondie has though that might take a bit of time...or corruption. Turn her into a cuckquean after she sees Vincent with the Brunette.

 

[Ghost'']

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