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shamtiiomi

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My mistake, the tags are already corrected.
sorry again but,why harem in a quote> " " is that means is a virtual harem bcs i lknow you are going for multiple paths but isnt harem the true path? if u can clarify a little will be good,...[so ivi is mc sister? or her mind? ]
 

Mr. MiBo

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sorry again but,why harem in a quote> " " is that means is a virtual harem bcs i lknow you are going for multiple paths but isnt harem the true path? if u can clarify a little will be good,...[so ivi is mc sister? or her mind? ]
It is in quotation marks because it is not like in other games. Or rather, it won't be. As I mentioned before, you will be able to finish the game with several women at once, several. Let's say you are with Mia and Zoe, you want another girl to join, but they don't get along, or they don't want anyone else. So you have to choose. Join one more and risk whether it will last or give up. Or should I give up the triangle and stay with the new woman? I keep thinking about how to resolve this so that it makes sense. I want the player to have a fairly free choice between the girls, as much as possible, unless he definitively says he wants to be with a specific woman.
 

Vortex@

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So maybe I can help you a bit. I'm planning a few endings. You can end the game with one of the girls, you can end it with two or three. You can also end up with all the girls that will be available. Or finish the game as a single, because all the girls kicked you in the ass. Now someone will probably ask: "So why didn't you tag it as a harem?" Well, that's because, as I mentioned earlier, you won't be able to finish the game with all the women that appear in it. There will be several of them, and additionally, there will also be fleeting episodes. And regarding your post.
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As for the scenes without the MC, they will be skippable.
I don't think I had a option to tell Mia I loved her...Is it the kisses that lock you in? Because my mc told her he loved her with no choice from me. If you are with Mia does it lock you out of Zoe? They should be allowed together, even both on a love path with mc since they are such good friends and would want her to be happy. This thing really needs a WT. It would also be a lot better if mc wasn't a douche on the "harem" path. Mc doesn't need to tell them he may not have feelings for them, of course you're going to have feelings for them. Just started the throuple path, hopefully mc has more feelings now, those earlier conversations were cringe. The story has been very interesting, If this had a decent harem path it'd be worth subscribing too. He doesn't need to talk like he doesn't care for them
 
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shamtiiomi

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I don't think I had a option to tell Mia I loved her...Is it the kisses that lock you in? Because my mc told her he loved her with no choice from me. If you are with Mia does it lock you out of Zoe? They should be allowed together, even both on a love path with mc since they are such good friends and would want her to be happy. This thing really needs a WT. It would also be way better if mc wasn't a douche on the sexfriend path. Mc doesn't need to tell them he won't have feelings for them. Of course you're going to have feelings for them. Just started the throuple path, hopefully mc has more feelings now. The story has been very interesting, If this had a decent harem path it'd be worth subscribing too.
i though the same but i do seethe choice to say u love her,....my real problem is all the girls semms fine with mc having all this women around ,so why onlyy the choice of the women or the mc will matter?isnt mia nad zoe so blind that they don know all the others already have feelings for the mc and so selfish they discar those feelings? or is the mc so blind that dont care shit about the other girls? for me is a waste of time so many open paths ,if i need to chose ,i will say right now 3 paths are possible a troupe with zoe and mia,alone ,or a full harem ,those are the possiblilities ,more than that is .well soemthing that dev need to think better bcs now i think mc dont have any scene if he choses to dismiss mia and zoe.....and the pace is going to fast for any meaningful relatiosnhio to develop,at least with mia and zoe not with the others ,....
 
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Acsuka

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Well, I see a lot of potential in this game. Interesting story, good visuals... There's humor, tension, love, sex, just what you need for a good turn-off... I have a lot of questions about the future: how extreme will the author be with the violent scenes? How many girls will he sacrifice to increase excitement and drama? How much influence will the players have in the MC's actions (I'm thinking mainly of future fights)? This guy was in the military for 10 years and was in the Elite unit, don't make "soft pussy" decisions. There are elements of violence and horror in this game, if the MC has to kill, he should kill to protect his own life and the lives of his connections. Mercy is not acceptable at this level. The pregnancy tag is a pleasant surprise, and based on the codes I see that Mia just got pregnant (balcony scene in the new house, if you finish "inside"). She's a nice girl and seems open-minded, so I think she doesn't mind sharing MC with the other girls. Because if girls are just "decoration" naked in front of everyone, then it's just "blue balling".
I would only ask two things from the developer: The first small thing, maybe the animations could be a little longer, and from more angles... the second important thing, please add more lighting to the evening and night pictures, because you can't see anything in the pictures. Maybe you wanted to create reality or tension with this, but this is too much. Good luck in the future, and I'll keep an eye on the next releases. (y)
 

OG-Cheese

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I didn't include the tag "rape" for a simple reason. There wasn't even a scene like that yet, it was ONLY mentioned.
I know that's why I said "NOT SHOWN" but rape is in the VN if you see it or not. It's not some rando chick and Vlad f.e but Lynn with whom you have love points a shower scene and an intimate relationship with. Just because it is not on display it is still a big part of Lynn's story and her personality it's not even just rape but gang raped for days. I didn't expect to find it yet as it is only in the planned tags and didn't see anyone mention it.

Such a tag can often be a small scene with a random girl or maybe noncon like sleep sex so I tried it anyway imagining I would be able to see it coming. As someone who faced attempted same sex rape when I was 8 years old I cant stand that shit specially when it's someone I am supposed to care about. Anyway I wasn't trying to bash you, I know mods cant catch everything but after so long I would have expected someone to have pointed it out already. I enjoyed the VN apart from that and now I know there is more planned.

I just wanted to point it out for other's like me. I wish you luck for your project.
 

Mr. MiBo

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I know that's why I said "NOT SHOWN" but rape is in the VN if you see it or not. It's not some rando chick and Vlad f.e but Lynn with whom you have love points a shower scene and an intimate relationship with. Just because it is not on display it is still a big part of Lynn's story and her personality it's not even just rape but gang raped for days. I didn't expect to find it yet as it is only in the planned tags and didn't see anyone mention it.

Such a tag can often be a small scene with a random girl or maybe noncon like sleep sex so I tried it anyway imagining I would be able to see it coming. As someone who faced attempted same sex rape when I was 8 years old I cant stand that shit specially when it's someone I am supposed to care about. Anyway I wasn't trying to bash you, I know mods cant catch everything but after so long I would have expected someone to have pointed it out already. I enjoyed the VN apart from that and now I know there is more planned.

I just wanted to point it out for other's like me. I wish you luck for your project.
Okay, now I understand what you meant. But I decided that I will only place tags in the completed ones if they will actually be visible on the screen.
 
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LinkBox88

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Not bad but not great either. Pretty generic as far as story goes.

I found a few things annoying.

Too many of the characters have known each other for a long time. It kind of makes it awkward for us as the player. They have this existing knowledge of each other so we don't really have an in-game reason for getting to know them. It felt like hanging out with a friend group that you're new to but they all know each other. Because dynamics already exist, we don't get to establish one of our own.

The whole AI/robot reveal rubbed me the wrong way too. I don't want some forceful robot showing up and telling me what I need to be doing. I think maybe the proliferation of AI in real life has really killed my appetite for it in fiction. I especially have no tolerance for portrayals of AI that are optimistic or humanized. It has to be dystopian and cautionary or fuck off with AI.
 

Woodstock_1983

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If there's a point system to gain relationship points, there should be a WT mod to show what choices gains the points.
 

Woodstock_1983

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This game has lots of errors to fix. Here's some examples. Picture 1 was supposed to be from Lucas not the MC. Picture 2 was supposed to be from Mia not the MC. No telling what other errors I'll find.
 
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lionarslan

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Is it pronounced Ivi or Lvi?
You mean spelling? It's Ivy clearly, I don't know how you mistake that, it's either plant name or something unreadable, if you doubt.
This game has lots of errors to fix. Here's some examples. Picture 1 was supposed to be from Lucas not the MC. Picture 2 was supposed to be from Mia not the MC. No telling what other errors I'll find.
Oh, you put out the least of errors in this game and decided to show everyone. For me, mix of number (I mean singular/plural) is much more annoying. When you constantly see "women" instead of "woman"... after more than 10 repeat it's infuriating af.
 
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ArunPrime

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I'm not usually someone who writes long texts, but while writing this, it just kept going.

So I’ve only played up to the drone scene so far, and I’m trying out 3 different routes: solo Mia, solo Lynn, and the so-called "harem" route. Honestly, I don’t even think it counts as a real harem, but that’s already been discussed so I’ll skip that part.

In Lynn’s solo route, I rejected Mia just to explore the scenes, and then I got hit with a forced lesbian scene with Zoe. Like… why? I mean, sure, the dev can create as many routes and choices as they want, that's cool, but it makes no sense if I rejected a character and the game still throws in a forced scene with her. What’s the point of rejecting someone then?

I actually like lesbian scenes, but only when the MC is involved or at least gives his approval. Personally, I’m not into forced stuff, and I know I’m not the only one. Even if it’s important for the story, there should at least be an option to skip or avoid it for players who don’t like that kind of thing.

Also, right now the solo and “sex friend” Mia routes first sex scene feel almost the same, just different dialogues. If you go solo Mia, she’s shown as a virgin. But in the lesbian route, it’s like she and Zoe already did stuff before… more drama. And they’re talking about setting boundaries and all that, but Zoe has a boyfriend and is still doing these things with Mia. So yeah, not making much sense, and this is supposed to be the only exception?

And what is this about incest tag, don't tell me it's only for the raped scene.

Then there’s the “old save file won’t work” message in the dev log. Not sure if that’s just for this update or earlier ones too, but that’s a dealbreaker for me. I’m not just talking about skipping content, the game has way too many different routes and choices to start over every time a save breaks. That’s why I’m putting it on hold for now. I’ll check again in the next update and see if anything changes.

Don't mind me, just sharing my thoughts....
 

sergesan

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yeah ,nope too much drama behind drama behind drama....started interessting but have the feeling that there is too much drama(for a good story).....i know i know everyone has his own likes but i prefer more 1st OP mc´s and a more straight line for story without endless drama....but thats me i sup(p?)ose...anyway good luck
 
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