VN Ren'Py Between Rounds [v1.0] [Mr.Voxel]

[lesnO56]

Thanks for the message — and I’ll leave this completely clear for everyone.

Between Rounds is not a NTR or Netorase project, and that type of content is not planned at any point in the story.

After reading this comment, the game immediately seemed great)
Thanks for the content, Author.

 

[HX_Eros]

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[Nimbus Commando]

So are we, finally, getting a none cuck AI game.

 

[yourmomma]

Great start, dev. Stick with your vision you'll go far.

 

[odbpm]

So are we, finally, a none cuck AI game.

well mc dont get cucked, but the mc sure has a cuckold fetish, since he enjoy watching Val x Hector and then dreams about them aswell.

 

[lesnO56]

well mc dont get cucked, but the mc sure has a cuckold fetish, since he enjoy watching Val x Hector and then dreams about them aswell.

It's not exactly cuckoldry.
If you enjoy watching others have sex, that doesn't mean you're a cuckold.
Otherwise, everyone who watches porn, for example, is a cuckold.
The protagonist likely has a voyeuristic fetish.

To be a cuckold, you must enjoy watching your Love Interest have sex with another man. And you must experience jealousy.
Without jealousy, it's not cuckoldry, it's swinging. Less shameful, but still crap.

But I admit, the line is thin.
It would have been better if this scene had not happened at all.

 

[Urk]

Thanks for the message — and I’ll leave this completely clear for everyone.


Between Rounds is not a NTR or Netorase project, and that type of content is not planned at any point in the story.

The Valeria–Hector scene in the prologue is not NTR.
Leon has no relationship with Valeria at that moment, Hector is her partner, and it’s simply part of their established dynamic.
I included it to show the environment Leon grew up in and to emphasize the tension he feels around her — but it’s not infidelity, nor does it represent romantic loss for the MC.

To be direct:
There won’t be any content where one of the MC’s love interests is involved with other men once Leon is emotionally or romantically involved with them.

I’m not avoiding the topic — I just prefer prioritizing feedback from people who actually played before jumping into assumptions.


Thanks again for the interest, and for giving the game a chance.

Good clear answer, however i must inform you that for the "non NTR" crowd actually showing any sexual interaction NOT with the MC is considered "functionally NTR". So if you want to cater your game to the hardcore "non NTR" fans i suggest you remove any scene showing sexual interactions between LI's and anyone else. That's the safest bet at least. Now realistically as long as you don't do content that warrants the Netorare tag you'll be able to attract that crow since almost all have the filter on.

Now i understand you've done it for story reason but i suggest you to find another way to "show" this part of the story and save your image generation to the MC scenes.

 

[Nimbus Commando]

well mc dont get cucked, but the mc sure has a cuckold fetish, since he enjoy watching Val x Hector and then dreams about them aswell.

Ah, so more of a peeping tom thing.

 

[odbpm]

Ah, so more of a peeping tom thing.

more like watching the hole scene unfold, not just a peep. so more like a closet cuckold, since she a future Li.

 

[odbpm]

It's not exactly cuckoldry.
If you enjoy watching others have sex, that doesn't mean you're a cuckold.
Otherwise, everyone who watches porn, for example, is a cuckold.
The protagonist likely has a voyeuristic fetish.

To be a cuckold, you must enjoy watching your Love Interest have sex with another man. And you must experience jealousy.
Without jealousy, it's not cuckoldry, it's swinging. Less shameful, but still crap.

But I admit, the line is thin.
It would have been better if this scene had not happened at all.

your mostly right.
cuckolding can also be tied to female domination and dont need jealousy in order for it to be cuckoldry, swinging can also cause jealousy the importen part of that is acceptance and mostly mutual respect.

when it comes to voyeuristic fetish i tie it to public sex and peeping on a Li. changing/showing stuff like that, but if it involves a Li with another male ill still call the mc a cuckold.

"everyone who watches porn" thats a shit take, here you are watching a Li fucking another male, in porn you are watching ppl you dont know. tho if you are parasocial and in love with the actress then yes you would be a cuckold.

 

[yourmomma]

Good clear answer, however i must inform you that for the "non NTR" crowd actually showing any sexual interaction NOT with the MC is considered "functionally NTR". So if you want to cater your game to the hardcore "non NTR" fans i suggest you remove any scene showing sexual interactions between LI's and anyone else. That's the safest bet at least. Now realistically as long as you don't do content that warrants the Netorare tag you'll be able to attract that crow since almost all have the filter on.

Now i understand you've done it for story reason but i suggest you to find another way to "show" this part of the story and save your image generation to the MC scenes.

Man just let the guy write his story. I don't know why there is this obsessive desire by some people to police a dev's story craft.

All these silly semantic arguments over tag definitions is absolutely neurotic.

 

[PStonix]

Mr.Voxel

Hi, I'd like to try writing a walkthrough mod for your game.
Would you be okay with that?

P.S. I'm new to this, so I can't promise I'll succeed. I just want to try my hand at it.

 

[Nimbus Commando]

more like watching the hole scene unfold, not just a peep. so more like a closet cuckold, since she a future Li.

Yeah, I just played it that hole dream thing, yeah, not into that at all bro like yeah I get it they are together it does not mean I want to see that shit. What a waste of damn time, love how they always make the first actual scene be some peeping tom shit, then some weird as fuck dream shit, and then they come up with some retarded reason to include it oh this was to show tension nah bro you just wanted to add some quick shit in there could have been the MC but nah might as well just ruin another LI while you are at it bro.

 

[Mr.Voxel]

Mr.Voxel

Hi, I'd like to try writing a walkthrough mod for your game.
Would you be okay with that?

P.S. I'm new to this, so I can't promise I'll succeed. I just want to try my hand at it.

Thanks for your interest! I tried sending you a private message, but it seems I can’t reach you yet — probably because your account is still new.
Right now Part 1 of the prologue is very simple in terms of branching, but if you want to experiment with a walkthrough now — or wait for the next release — feel free to do so.
And if you ever need clarification on something, you can ask here and I’ll gladly help without spoilers.

Thanks again for the support!

 

[PStonix]

Yea i don't have enough coments to be able to comunicate through direct messages thx for quick answer.

 

[Urk]

And the other one would be to make the women's body proportions a bit more on the realistic side, by this I mean curves are great, but too much is too much. Love me a big booty, big titty woman, no complaints there, but Olivia's and Val's proportions look ridiculously exaggerated, especially Olivia's in some renders, no offense.

A bit of slimming down, so to speak, would make them look better without going into caricature territory, IMO. Just a simple suggestion, you decide if it's useful or just me nitpicking too much.

Girls are beautiful wtf are you talking about. Val is perfect, Olivia as well.

 

[Urk]

Man just let the guy write his story. I don't know why there is this obsessive desire by some people to police a dev's story craft.

All these silly semantic arguments over tag definitions is absolutely neurotic.

He says he is not going to do an NTR story, so wtf are you talking about.

 

[lesnO56]

The art style is actually very good!
The proportions are great just the way they are. The main thing is that the waist should be narrow.

 

[milfkiller]

It's not exactly cuckoldry.
If you enjoy watching others have sex, that doesn't mean you're a cuckold.
Otherwise, everyone who watches porn, for example, is a cuckold.
The protagonist likely has a voyeuristic fetish.

To be a cuckold, you must enjoy watching your Love Interest have sex with another man. And you must experience jealousy.
Without jealousy, it's not cuckoldry, it's swinging. Less shameful, but still crap.

But I admit, the line is thin.
It would have been better if this scene had not happened at all.

hector os val husband

 

[PStonix]

If anybody is intrested I created a walkthrough mod. This is my first mod so, every piece of feedback will be well appreciated.

Walkthrough mod​