aluoaniki
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- Sep 29, 2018
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the overview and first few chapters made me think this was a detective story of sorts with porn elements and light supernatural spin on it. no problem, it could be great.
then mc got kicked out of the detective part, those supernatural abilities were thrown in the mud and what's follow was every character spoke to mc's face "i know something but i won't tell you". first sign of bad writing.
all of a sudden mc's sister can do magic. what.
then mc turns into werewolf and the story goes full supernatural. at least sex scenes are watchable.
from here on out make every girl prolapse. o.m.g.
then mc got kicked out of the detective part, those supernatural abilities were thrown in the mud and what's follow was every character spoke to mc's face "i know something but i won't tell you". first sign of bad writing.
all of a sudden mc's sister can do magic. what.
then mc turns into werewolf and the story goes full supernatural. at least sex scenes are watchable.
from here on out make every girl prolapse. o.m.g.