Sorry, I haven't read the prior posts so forgive me if this has been mentioned.
To begin, I was pleasantly surprised by this game, I only started playing this a few days ago and must say, the music and env. sounds are very well chosen.
I normally turn off the music in most VN's fairly quickly, but with this one it actually gives a great feel of immersion.
I do have some critiques though... there's a couple of moments where the continuity rambles on all sides.
I didn't make a note the first few times, because ok sometimes it happens. But some were so painfully obvious they stuck with me.
For instance, prior to the moment when Alorine makes here entrance when they are playing the game, there's a loud bang and all the windows supposedly close.
However, in the next few scenes, they are suddenly opened again...
Then there's the moment MC and Skylar visit the mermaids, and MC gets told about the pirate captain's name and the fact she's a woman.
But in the follow-up scenes, they start referring to the captain as a 'him' and MC is surprised when he enters the captain's quarters to find it's a woman, and an attractive one at that...
There were some minor other ones earlier in the game, but like I said, I didn't make a note of these. Maybe in my second play-through...