Elhemeer

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Okay. This was a lot. I'll try to touch on as much of it as I can, without spoiling any of my plans. So, here we go, starting from the top.

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(y) :oops: :unsure: o_O
Also, while I'm here, lemme give you guys a sneak peek at Chapter 8. Note, this happens as a result of combat. The tank did her job as a tank!

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Ottoeight

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Mar 13, 2021
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Man, this introductory chapter 1 is as boring as fuck. Does it really need to be such an endless boring series of idle scenes and uninteresting chatting?

Dear Dev, IT REALLY NEEDS TO BE SHORTENED. Trust me.

Secondly... just another VN where 19-20 years old people "take an Uber". Good Lord... are they paying you for advertising?

Have you ever heard of a thing called taxi? car sharing? car renting? getting a hike from a friend? getting a bus? the subway? a bike?:rolleyes:

Anyway, I'm on the verge of quitting. I really hope that the game will be totally different in chapter 2.
 

Elhemeer

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Jun 20, 2022
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I'm legitimately unsure if this guy is trolling, or actually just this nonsensical.
I blocked him after I read the first sentence.

Also, his post needed to be shortened: "I don't like your game." If he had to say something, that's pretty much all he had to say. It wouldn't have been any less constructive than what he did write.
 

Old Grumpy Wolf

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Jul 17, 2021
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Man, this introductory chapter 1 is as boring as fuck. Does it really need to be such an endless boring series of idle scenes and uninteresting chatting?

Dear Dev, IT REALLY NEEDS TO BE SHORTENED. Trust me.

Secondly... just another VN where 19-20 years old people "take an Uber". Good Lord... are they paying you for advertising?

Have you ever heard of a thing called taxi? car sharing? car renting? getting a hike from a friend? getting a bus? the subway? a bike?:rolleyes:

Anyway, I'm on the verge of quitting. I really hope that the game will be totally different in chapter 2.


 

TigerWolfe

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If the intro keeps more folks like them out of the thread, even if I hadn't liked it (which I did), I'd tell Drooskatito (fyac!? But I'm leaving it cause it tickles me) to keep it unchanged, and maybe consider making it even more whatever cheesed that person off.
 

Deleted member 2755092

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If the intro keeps more folks like them out of the thread, even if I hadn't liked it (which I did), I'd tell Drooskatito (fyac!? But I'm leaving it cause it tickles me) to keep it unchanged, and maybe consider making it even more whatever cheesed that person off.
What can we say? Tastes and preferences my friends... tastes and preferences...
Now then, back to our glorious harem shall we? :D
 
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