VN Ren'Py Between Two Worlds [Ch.9] [Drooskati]

[Drooskati]

For those who are interested, and following the thread, Chapter 2 Beta is now in the hands of my testers, and the top tier Patrons. I've done local play testing myself, and squashed the handful of bugs I could find already. Assuming all goes well with the beta testing, Chapter 2 will be releasing shortly

As it sits, assuming no reworks are required, Chapter 2 has ~500 new still renders, and ~9,000 new unique frames of animation. To compare, Chapter 1 had ~300 images, and about ~5,000 frames of animation, so C2 will be a pretty big update.

Thank you all for your interest! Look forward to hearing your feedback!

 

[Cena2001]

Loved the developer note

 

[Darthjake]

So from what I've read is the femdom will most likely also depend on the choices? Same with the other fetish/tags, I'm guessing.

I was immediately drawn to exhibitionism and harem, and like many others, I would want my main LI's approval for the other girls to join in, so yeah, downloaded and I'll give it a run through in a little while.

 

[AnyName'llDo]

Okay, this is good stuff.

 

[SpyderArachnid]

Awesome update, and the animations, just wow! Those were really cool. Especially loved the forest walking one with Tosca, gave me a giggle, and Oscar denying Jhoram his dog lol. Still loving this game and interested to see where it goes regarding the book and some more D&D adventures. Thanks for all your hard work on this and can't wait till the next update!

 

[Deleted member 2412505]

Fantasy, romance, harem, incest, virgin!??
Damn this day couldn't get any better

 

[Incest games fan]

Incest?

 

[SilentRunning]

I am enjoying your game so far.

You might consider adding an option to make he text screen a bit more transparent though. Sometimes it blocks your wonderful images. A bit distracting.

Otherwise, fully enjoying. I play tabletop D&D every other week with friends and enjoy seeing that put into a game in such a direct way.

EDIT: For the record whenever I walk around while playing D&D I always walk exactly like Toska does... totally appropriate for traveling.

 

[Canto Forte]

Great laid back gaming, still 4 that little ”action”, like none in ch.2
there are a lot of angles where animation looks unnecessary:
1. the genie babe with the finger, she is purely distracting
in the myst and being faded in it, her beautiful face shaded,
having her hands flail around does nothing to entice anything
2. the adventures with the walking and the hiding,
those felt not actually flattering to the babes on display,
because it is make belief and watching someone duck/hide/walk,
what the game master narrates in a word, is not that interesting.
Animating fight scenes would mean something, but the mundane animations
just feel like a cop out.
3. In the end, MC is sleeping with his beloved, but no action ... what?!
That feels like it woulda been the better way to invest animations, the end love making
scene with the babe in your life. Is it a cliffhanger?

All in all, pretty solid and believable as one emersing experience.

 

[Weasel_Face]

Ok, I love Sword & Sandal movies, I saw all those epic movies in the 80's on the big screen, I love Medieval VNs like VIS, Severed Realms & To Be A King but I hate D&D! Watching a prolonged graphic version of a D&D game was like the recent Canadian Election, pointless and a big waste of my time... I get the magical book & how everybody will probably get warped into the D&D world, but... it should have happened before the Thursday night campaign, watching them play and going through the DM's monologue and all the dice rolls is like adding bread crumbs to hamburgers, it's just inert filler when we want beef...

Ok, now that I have had my asshole rant, I do like the game. I just thought that the time spent on the fake adventure was spent on the real adventure...

 

[▌Gin ▐]

[VN] [Ren'Py]
This is the Italian translation of Between Two Worlds [Chapter 2]

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**This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan"**

 

[BlasKyau]

The game can be interesting, and I like the LIs. But I see quite a few future tags that I don't like: BDSM, Blackmail, Cheating, Female Domination, Humiliation, Male Domination, Sexual Harassment, Slave, Sleep Sex, Spanking. Can they be avoided?

 

[SaltySugar]

This is pretty good so far, the only thing is that the girlfriend seems to be more interested in her roommate than MC actually but that may be just me.

 

[Drooskati]

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This is the Italian translation of Between Two Worlds [Chapter 2]

You must be registered to see the links

**This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan"**

Wow, my first translation. Thank you! I really appreciate it!

The game can be interesting, and I like the LIs. But I see quite a few future tags that I don't like: BDSM, Blackmail, Cheating, Female Domination, Humiliation, Male Domination, Sexual Harassment, Slave, Sleep Sex, Spanking. Can they be avoided?

Everything will be determined by choices you make. You will never be forced into situations that you did not in some way indicate you'd want to be in. Every impactful choice is tracked, and is used to determine outcomes later. For example, at the end of C2, you have to make a choice. Either accept her offer and thus go down a road of potential corruption, or refuse her offer, and keep to your morals. This choice will ABSOLUTELY impact what you see, what you do, and what your options will be down the road.

Ok, I love Sword & Sandal movies, I saw all those epic movies in the 80's on the big screen, I love Medieval VNs like VIS, Severed Realms & To Be A King but I hate D&D! Watching a prolonged graphic version of a D&D game was like the recent Canadian Election, pointless and a big waste of my time... I get the magical book & how everybody will probably get warped into the D&D world, but... it should have happened before the Thursday night campaign, watching them play and going through the DM's monologue and all the dice rolls is like adding bread crumbs to hamburgers, it's just inert filler when we want beef...

Ok, now that I have had my asshole rant, I do like the game. I just thought that the time spent on the fake adventure was spent on the real adventure...

I can appreciate what you're saying, but the point of the first two chapters was to establish the worlds, character relationships, how they interact, and what can be expected. As stated in the Dev Note, this ends what I see as the "intro" of the game, and the core of the game will truly get moving in C3. There were even some very subtle hints for what to expect in the future, in the D&D style gameplay, if you were watching closely. While there WILL be a couple more chapters similar to this one, the way they run will be different, because of things to come.

Incest?

Chapter 1 has hints as to where that might come from.

Thank you everyone for the feedback! I hope I've been helpful in responses. Remember, you can always join the Discord and talk to me there. I'm very very active, and the people there will tell you I'm quite responsive to questions and suggestions.

 

[BlasKyau]

Everything will be determined by choices you make. You will never be forced into situations that you did not in some way indicate you'd want to be in. Every impactful choice is tracked, and is used to determine outcomes later. For example, at the end of C2, you have to make a choice. Either accept her offer and thus go down a road of potential corruption, or refuse her offer, and keep to your morals. This choice will ABSOLUTELY impact what you see, what you do, and what your options will be down the road.

Thanks for the reply.

As long as it's easy to avoid these fetishes, it seems perfect to me.

 

[Koushiro]

I'm about to start the new update. Remember really liking the characters in the first one, so my question with regards to the choices and corruption/moral path, is will I still be able to stay moral and have a loving harem? All the girls deserve love, but some games only allow the harem if your a cheating a-hole or only concerned with lust rather than love.

Either option is obviously fine, your story is yours to tell, but I'd like to set my expectations going in, if you don't mind answering.

 

[Drooskati]

I'm about to start the new update. Remember really liking the characters in the first one, so my question with regards to the choices and corruption/moral path, is will I still be able to stay moral and have a loving harem? All the girls deserve love, but some games only allow the harem if your a cheating a-hole or only concerned with lust rather than love.

Either option is obviously fine, your story is yours to tell, but I'd like to set my expectations going in, if you don't mind answering.

Yes! It will be possible. The idea behind my planned pathing is primarily two fold. First, how the story ends. This is not a story with the default "Good guys win!" theme. The only true winner, will be you. How that unfolds, will be up to you. Second, the pathing will determine how you actually interact with the people around you. Do you corrupt them into seeing things your way, or will you force them to kneel before you? Do you love and support them, or do you manipulate them?

I have very ambitious plans, and I'm aware of that. I'm legitimately trying to create a good, immersive, quality game, while still being nice and dirty. Over time, this will of course result in adding more and more work, but I'm ready to accept that challenge. I'm setting a high bar for my first ever foray into this stuff

 

[ScroxDieded]

Looks interesting and the art's pretty good!

But I'll wait for a few more updates to stack so I can play a few hours at least.

All the best to the dev!

 

[Xeron_Xr]

Great Update

 

[DA22]

Yes! It will be possible. The idea behind my planned pathing is primarily two fold. First, how the story ends. This is not a story with the default "Good guys win!" theme. The only true winner, will be you. How that unfolds, will be up to you. Second, the pathing will determine how you actually interact with the people around you. Do you corrupt them into seeing things your way, or will you force them to kneel before you? Do you love and support them, or do you manipulate them?

I have very ambitious plans, and I'm aware of that. I'm legitimately trying to create a good, immersive, quality game, while still being nice and dirty. Over time, this will of course result in adding more and more work, but I'm ready to accept that challenge. I'm setting a high bar for my first ever foray into this stuff

Sounds very good and also very ambitious especially for a first foray. Just a little tip, leave some room and time for yourself in the storyboard to scale it back a little while still feels natural if you find out you need it later on to be able to progress in a reasonable time frame or extra places to break story off or allow to let paths combine for a bit if needed. May sound like extra work now, but if you need it since project bit to big later on to manage well you will thank yourself to have those options and made them while fresh and not have to think and come up with them while under time stress.