Graz to the dev! But Anywho, here we go:
PROS
- Render quality is amazing.
- Models are gorgeous and detailed, and we can see differences between the models (of both men and women).
- Dev added music, which actually sounds good.
- Animations are decent, and the ones in the preview images look amazing as well.
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CONS & Constructive Criticism
- I'm almost sure English isn't the dev's native language: In some points the structure of the dialogue sound weird and makes things slightly confusing. Also, the use of '
buddy'. I'd say in an English translation, it would be more natural to use "
Bro" or "
Dude" (Just like in a Spanish translation, for example, it would be more natural to use "
men" , "
Wey" or even "
Bro" as well).
- In some bits, Kayla refers to MC as '
she'. The MC refers to Angela as '
he', and when Megan is passed out on the couch, Kayla refers to her as '
Kayla'.
- I don't know if I'm being ignorant, but I'd swear Calep and Brain are meant to be Caleb and Brian. Unless Calep is the equivalent in another language, and Brain is just a nickname....or he's actually named Brain.
- In some bit the characters' lines are so short and made them sound like robots, they like emotion. There's also a line that has a question and lacks the question mark, which again, make the character sound robotic.
The VN looks good, I hope the dev sees any suggestion and constructiv criticism to improve his work, which had a very decent start.