- Dec 26, 2021
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Looks nice, but the MC is too feminine, maybe make Brian be the MC and have the current character be his femboy brother. I don't like playing an MC that is cuter than some of the girls.. lol.
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- Dec 28, 2017
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I'm gonna be the grouch here: the movement in those animations looks like crap.
The art in the still renders looks fantastic though.
The art in the still renders looks fantastic though.
- Jun 24, 2021
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Graz to the dev! But Anywho, here we go:
PROS
- Render quality is amazing.
- Models are gorgeous and detailed, and we can see differences between the models (of both men and women).
- Dev added music, which actually sounds good.
- Animations are decent, and the ones in the preview images look amazing as well.
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- I'm almost sure English isn't the dev's native language: In some points the structure of the dialogue sound weird and makes things slightly confusing. Also, the use of 'buddy'. I'd say in an English translation, it would be more natural to use "Bro" or "Dude" (Just like in a Spanish translation, for example, it would be more natural to use "men" , "Wey" or even "Bro" as well).
- In some bits, Kayla refers to MC as 'she'. The MC refers to Angela as 'he', and when Megan is passed out on the couch, Kayla refers to her as 'Kayla'.
- I don't know if I'm being ignorant, but I'd swear Calep and Brain are meant to be Caleb and Brian. Unless Calep is the equivalent in another language, and Brain is just a nickname....or he's actually named Brain.
- In some bit the characters' lines are so short and made them sound like robots, they like emotion. There's also a line that has a question and lacks the question mark, which again, make the character sound robotic.
The VN looks good, I hope the dev sees any suggestion and constructiv criticism to improve his work, which had a very decent start.
PROS
- Render quality is amazing.
- Models are gorgeous and detailed, and we can see differences between the models (of both men and women).
- Dev added music, which actually sounds good.
- Animations are decent, and the ones in the preview images look amazing as well.
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CONS & Constructive Criticism- I'm almost sure English isn't the dev's native language: In some points the structure of the dialogue sound weird and makes things slightly confusing. Also, the use of 'buddy'. I'd say in an English translation, it would be more natural to use "Bro" or "Dude" (Just like in a Spanish translation, for example, it would be more natural to use "men" , "Wey" or even "Bro" as well).
- In some bits, Kayla refers to MC as 'she'. The MC refers to Angela as 'he', and when Megan is passed out on the couch, Kayla refers to her as 'Kayla'.
- I don't know if I'm being ignorant, but I'd swear Calep and Brain are meant to be Caleb and Brian. Unless Calep is the equivalent in another language, and Brain is just a nickname....or he's actually named Brain.
- In some bit the characters' lines are so short and made them sound like robots, they like emotion. There's also a line that has a question and lacks the question mark, which again, make the character sound robotic.
The VN looks good, I hope the dev sees any suggestion and constructiv criticism to improve his work, which had a very decent start.
- Aug 7, 2024
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The MC sounds like and looks like one hell of a pussy.
- Nov 18, 2017
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- Jun 26, 2018
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Personally I'm going to wait for confirmation if the game is harem and doesn't have NTR (or to be more precise, that the only one who has sex scenes, with the LIs and if possible with any other girl, is the MC).
- Feb 25, 2024
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I liked that the developer isn't greedy; the highest Patreon tier is $20, and they already have 65 supporters—amazing.
- Oct 25, 2022
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What a sweet femboy, awesome, I'm guessing it's a transformation? 
Might also want to make sure none of the other guys start fucking the MC, he is pretty damn cute
lol
- Jun 26, 2018
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I hadn't thought that this could happen. In any case, it's another thing that I hope doesn't happen.Might also want to make sure none of the other guys start fucking the MC, he is pretty damn cute
- Feb 23, 2023
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- Nov 11, 2017
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from a glance, i like the speed of animation but the women all have the same face asset
It is made on purpose, this really seems a game by the "Vilkas group", great renders, sissy MC, a lot of dude rivals in the game to show the sissy how to fuck the babes, etc.
This will definitely have some kind of ntr/sharing stuff in the near future
I don't know why this guy is getting downvoted so much when what he says will probably happen anyway and if you dont see it coming you just in denial
- Jul 14, 2018
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- Feb 25, 2024
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I'm not usually one to complain about dialogues in games, but in this one, I got a bit confused. It has the option to switch to my native language, but that made it even harder to understand. The renderings are great, but I felt secondhand embarrassment playing this.