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VN Ren'Py Beyond Tomorrow [Ch.2] [Dream Games]

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WastedTalent

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I would say most of what's written in the changelog is pretty decent and the lewds that we have are pretty great. That said the lewd pacing is pretty low. There were many opportunities to share a kiss or do a little flirting teasing to start a build up to something more with multiple characters maybe even have an oral/hand job scene and maybe something more at a later time but there's a whole lot of dialogue/internal monologue and not a lot of "bang" for the experience. As long as the first two chapters are there should be at least double or better the current amount of lewds figure every chapter at the current lengths at least 1 lewd every 5-10k words unless it's meant to be a slow burn in which case that should be stated in the overview so players know what to expect. Just my two cents... That being said great character models and so far pretty decent story.
 

yossa999

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I just feel like saying Olivia is kind of a selfish bitch
Well, she's definitely not without her flaws, like any human being. And she certainly has a strong stubborn streak in her character, even Lily confirmed that Olivia probably inherited that from her.

But I think what plays a big role here is that we, as outside observers, know more than the character who is inside the drama and doesn't feel what the character is supposed to feel, so our judgments aren't clouded by the character's feelings. She just sees it differently.

Olivia is constantly stressed because of the drama with Sasha. They love each other, but they barely get to spend time together and have to hide from everyone. Keeping secrets from the people close to you everyday is very difficult, so it’s no wonder that Olivia is nervous and rude for no reason, it’s just a consequence of constant stress. She also feels guilty when she skips college to spend some time with Sasha.

She sees and understands perfectly well how much effort Lily puts into giving her children a decent future. But she is torn by the impossibility of telling the truth to her mother (she is afraid of condemnation and misunderstanding), being rejected by Sasha, who is also not delighted with the situation and expresses dissatisfaction, and on top of that, Sasha's asshole father is looming on the horizon.

And to top it all off, there is a complete lack of understanding of why Lily is hiding the truth about her father and does not want to discuss this topic and anger at her, because not knowing the truth, she begins to come up with her own explanations and in her head Lily is to blame for their father's leaving.

As a result, all this accumulated stress, negative emotions and anger spills out into an ugly scene, and by a terrible coincidence, it is on this day that Lily's illness manifests itself. (Which had clearly begun a long time ago)

Of course, in this situation, it looks like Olivia is the only one to blame because she is such a bitch. But is that really the case?
 

Canto Forte

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That was always the case: she just hangs around and other people need to bring their own entertainment.
It is what we see and what we read; there is nothing more to it: she just did not mature enough past the fact she does spend a lotta time with some girl and keeping secrets from others is a thing that gives thrills to younsters such as herself. everybody knows they spend copious amoounts of time together, there is no secret at all in that. Yeah, they are cheap thrills, these low hanging fruits of mischief, but everybody has them and she is getting her highs out of being the dark horse in the family. She likes the attention, albeit for, in your selfish own, reader perspective, some made up, higher purpose.
Point being, girls living together play nude or topless around eachother in this game, they sleep in the nude, so false drama about making herself a victim and keeping a secret or two, all in the interest of ”good writing” and to make heself feel alive, those are common in youngsters and it does the job of feeding their egoes and their self esteem.
I just feel like saying Olivia is kind of a selfish bitch
For now that is the impression she gives
No harm in looking
 
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yossa999

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Man, in my first playthrough I decided to be the good bwoi Marcus.


So I refused to peek while Susan took a shower and opened her box.
Damn, I was almost sure there's something related to MC's father and Lily, old photos, letters, whatever...

But then I remembered that one redhead: "WHAT'S IN THE BOX!!!"
And I fucked up my good bwoi's playthrough. :KEK:

What can I say, Susan is beautifully built for her age, and these mommy's milkers... Dayum...
But the contents of the box... Oh Susan, you're such a bad, very bad girl! :BootyTime:
 

Ray_D

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Man, in my first playthrough I decided to be the good bwoi Marcus.


So I refused to peek while Susan took a shower and opened her box.
Damn, I was almost sure there's something related to MC's father and Lily, old photos, letters, whatever...

But then I remembered that one redhead: "WHAT'S IN THE BOX!!!"
And I fucked up my good bwoi's playthrough. :KEK:

What can I say, Susan is beautifully built for her age, and these mommy's milkers... Dayum...
But the contents of the box... Oh Susan, you're such a bad, very bad girl! :BootyTime:
She just needs a little love and compassion and I am willing to make that sacrifice in the future if possible....:BootyTime:
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brisketsNbiscuits

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The worst decision he could have made at that point. Just leaving it in would have been better and of course giving the choice would have been the best idea.

As it was, Sam was the best part of the avn for me lol

The dev decision making process could be improved ...
Damn that's fucked! Sam is my favorite so far anyways. And it's already hinting that she wants him as more than a friend. So let me get this straight. The dev took additional time to "fix" the first season and then ended up removing probably the best thing about it? Man I feel played lol
 

Miranha157

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Forget the incest, this game is going to Steam and the guy has Patreon, he won't make the same mistake as Ocean with WiAB, so Olivia is just a lesbian sister who likes the same fruit as Marcus!
 

yossa999

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Damn that's fucked! Sam is my favorite so far anyways. And it's already hinting that she wants him as more than a friend. So let me get this straight. The dev took additional time to "fix" the first season and then ended up removing probably the best thing about it? Man I feel played lol
Actually, Dream got a pile of shit and curses in this very thread because Sam was the MC's girlfriend from the very beginning. "We don't need a girlfriend, we want to chose!" - they screamed and stomping their little feet.
Then he got another pile of shit for the lewd scene with her. "How can you, MC's mom is dying, and he got a hard-on for Sam. It's unrealistic."
Well he changed it. Now it's time for the next pile of shit.
 

MiltonPowers

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Damn that's fucked! Sam is my favorite so far anyways. And it's already hinting that she wants him as more than a friend. So let me get this straight. The dev took additional time to "fix" the first season and then ended up removing probably the best thing about it? Man I feel played lol
You'll still be able to get on Sam's path, it's just not a forced path at the start anymore.
 

Zorro#34

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There was vaginal sex in the original version, but people complained about the forced girlfriend, so dev removed her as forced (and the sex scenes along with it). :cry: Now, we wait.
Damn that's fucked! Sam is my favorite so far anyways. And it's already hinting that she wants him as more than a friend. So let me get this straight. The dev took additional time to "fix" the first season and then ended up removing probably the best thing about it? Man I feel played lol
Actually, Dream got a pile of shit and curses in this very thread because Sam was the MC's girlfriend from the very beginning. "We don't need a girlfriend, we want to chose!" - they screamed and stomping their little feet.
Then he got another pile of shit for the lewd scene with her. "How can you, MC's mom is dying, and he got a hard-on for Sam. It's unrealistic."
Well he changed it. Now it's time for the next pile of shit.
Be careful what you wish for, indeed…
 
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