Checked out the new version, and first that jumped out was what looked to be rendering camera spotlight used, it makes the pictures look like they have been photographed with flashlight, which might be alright in some situations, but IMO it doesn't look right in the Big Brother context, I think the lighting should be more natural.
It seems there has been more effort put in positioning, more hair options used, which is a plus.
diary prop seems redundant
really welcome thing is the added text to the choices explaining consequences and showing probabilities, though, had to reload 6 times to "win" in a 70% probability choice...
the dream sequence was a nice touch, though it could have used some post work, so we could get an idea that it was actually a dream, for a moment I thought it was some nudity scene added to the demo from future content just to to try and hook the audience, adding some fuzz or blur effects, or perhaps adjust colors to look "off" might have helped to sell it a dream sequence (something that can be done quickly in post and don't require rerendering)
and that aliens head on the desk looked like a tribute to someone...