When Max is peeking on Alice in the shower and gets caught, Alice is always very angry. Since the two later in the game have all kinds of agreements like naked spanking for smoking or eat pussy in front of tv or dom/sub roleplaying when Max is caught, Alice' reaction seems wrong. I would expect her to be happy to get another roleplaying session ...
When Max gives Alice a pack of cigarettes, later in the game (see above) she could be more grateful and reward him with a small scene, e.g. random a hug, a kiss, show boobs, flash panties, show butt, ... depending on clothing.