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Blue Dragon Studios I'd like to see this go on and get better but there are a LOT of things that need improving from The main thing being character design and appearance.. wardrobe choices (seriously those neon t-shirts have to go).. there are a MASSIVE amount of assets at your disposal, yet the production value feels like a run of the mill noob attempt all the time while reading.. f95 has a great deal of stuff at your disposal as does renderosity, renderotica and daz.. hell the freebie stuff alone on those sites is better than what is included most times here..
I know how hard VN making is and posing, lighting etc.. But if your intention here is to go MULTI season and i hope you do.. then an upgrade to the presentation and quality has to be made in order to survive people not assuming you care little enough to put out a decent product.. do away with the WAY OVERUSED meanwhile.. Later tht night.. elsewhere.. screen transition screens.. or at least do then in a style that fits your product.. there currently a distraction that shows how cheap the product is as is the neon shirts the mc wears.. hell in one scene he and diego had the same top just in diff colors.. If you want this to be good watch a lot more school drama/comedy/horror series (NOT MOVIES) as you can get a sense then of the pacing needed for such a show.. moments to focus on that make a show like this.. how to build a story arc.. how to structure character development for an ongoing series, relationship building between characters, the need to change wardrobe between days, Building tension and plot points that will be 'paid off' in the later season building to a series finale cliffhanger..
The premise behind the IDEA of this project is solid.. the writing and execution of your ideas isnt and that is where it falls flat and is often one click away from having enough and closing it down.. Ive already deleted this twice yet i try to give it another chance out of the hope it will improve and the quality will get better.. You dont need to be at Oceanlabs/Summer gone levels of skill or production but at least have some pride in what your making and do it well enough in your early builds so that people ACTUALLY WANT to put money and support into this title..
I know how hard VN making is and posing, lighting etc.. But if your intention here is to go MULTI season and i hope you do.. then an upgrade to the presentation and quality has to be made in order to survive people not assuming you care little enough to put out a decent product.. do away with the WAY OVERUSED meanwhile.. Later tht night.. elsewhere.. screen transition screens.. or at least do then in a style that fits your product.. there currently a distraction that shows how cheap the product is as is the neon shirts the mc wears.. hell in one scene he and diego had the same top just in diff colors.. If you want this to be good watch a lot more school drama/comedy/horror series (NOT MOVIES) as you can get a sense then of the pacing needed for such a show.. moments to focus on that make a show like this.. how to build a story arc.. how to structure character development for an ongoing series, relationship building between characters, the need to change wardrobe between days, Building tension and plot points that will be 'paid off' in the later season building to a series finale cliffhanger..
The premise behind the IDEA of this project is solid.. the writing and execution of your ideas isnt and that is where it falls flat and is often one click away from having enough and closing it down.. Ive already deleted this twice yet i try to give it another chance out of the hope it will improve and the quality will get better.. You dont need to be at Oceanlabs/Summer gone levels of skill or production but at least have some pride in what your making and do it well enough in your early builds so that people ACTUALLY WANT to put money and support into this title..
I like the game, it has potential. The models are well made and surprisingly different from each other, the story is interesting and I'd like to see how it unfolds, I will say there's not really much sex content yet but it is version 0.3.
I hope the MC gets rightfully mad at his mom and dad and not immediately goes "I forgive you." That's always been a pet peeve of mine when the MC quickly forgives the fact that his loved ones have kept a huge secret from them and now they're thrust into a situation that they're not really ready for. Along with the fact he was shipped off at 12 by his mom and dad and that they erased his childhood memories, I feel like the MC should be rightfully furious when he confronts them. And mad to a lesser extent at Emily since it's probably because of the Mom nd dad that she kept secrets his mom and dad deserve most if not all of his ire.
I hope the MC gets rightfully mad at his mom and dad and not immediately goes "I forgive you." That's always been a pet peeve of mine when the MC quickly forgives the fact that his loved ones have kept a huge secret from them and now they're thrust into a situation that they're not really ready for. Along with the fact he was shipped off at 12 by his mom and dad and that they erased his childhood memories, I feel like the MC should be rightfully furious when he confronts them. And mad to a lesser extent at Emily since it's probably because of the Mom nd dad that she kept secrets his mom and dad deserve most if not all of his ire.
Bro it's been a while still waiting.. Don't tell me this is abandoned. It's wonderful story line
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wtf? watch
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ugh deletet after you are forced with amy and that other chick
shame i liked it so far but forced is a no-go
shame i liked it so far but forced is a no-go
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[VN] [Ren'Py] Bite: Season One [Episode 1-4, Part 1, v0.3.5] [Blue Dragon Studios] [MQ, MyRepack-YAC]
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Meh I'm fine with rape, just don't get caught then it doesn't matter. As far as AVN's the more psychopathic the MC the better to me.
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I guess I assumed "forced" in the wrong context. So MC didn't rape anyone? Bummer.
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I have a question about the moments when MC uses "compulsion" on the girls (red text choice)...Is that an evil act that MC should avoid, or is it OK act with no repercussions later (It kind of feels like a vampire roofie...that ends with rape)? Any thoughts about this would be great to share.
- Mar 21, 2022
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nah you could decline one of the girls before now you don´t have a choice to decline to sleep with her thats what i mean with forced