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JohnF95zone

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Says the person whose analysis was basically, "it's great . . . except you write like shit". :rolleyes: I'd ask you to provide your own age, but I really couldn't care less. Why would I ever reveal something like that about myself on a site where I'm anonymous on purpose? Do you want my credit card details, blood type, and fingerprints as well?
Yeah, if anyone wants to know the Cookie Monster predates the World Wide Web by almost two decades (you can fact check that) :p.
 

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Mommysbuttslut

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Maaann I'm all for an over dramatic campy MC with c grade dialogue but holy fuck did he take the entitled over reactive bullshit up to 11 with this one. This fucking kid clearly didn't get bullied enough in highshcool.
Mom> Fuck this Imma tell him
MC> Fuck you both, you aren't gonna tell me, you never understand me. Let me go lock myself in my room and cut my wrists while I listen to Linkin Park.

Then he goes home, whines more and takes it out on his girlfriend for comforting him. Idk what the hell is going on with the writing but the MC is acting like a whiny fucking NTR protag, and honestly he'd deserve to be one right one.
 

KnuckleDragger79

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Maaann I'm all for an over dramatic campy MC with c grade dialogue but holy fuck did he take the entitled over reactive bullshit up to 11 with this one. This fucking kid clearly didn't get bullied enough in highshcool.
Mom> Fuck this Imma tell him
MC> Fuck you both, you aren't gonna tell me, you never understand me. Let me go lock myself in my room and cut my wrists while I listen to Linkin Park.

Then he goes home, whines more and takes it out on his girlfriend for comforting him. Idk what the hell is going on with the writing but the MC is acting like a whiny fucking NTR protag, and honestly he'd deserve to be one right one.
Agreed. This game is getting worse in all aspects with every update.

The MC is turning into a whiny little bitch, the spelling is horrible, the grammar is nightmarish and the punctuation is on the same level as a third grade lab monkey.

If the quality of the game continues to go down, I'm gonna have to bail. This is starting to hurt my brain......
 

isnt NaN

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if you're missing the bar reward open the script.rpy and edit the lines that state:
Code:
$ correct += 1
between the ~19400 / ~19600 range to say:
Code:
$ gcorrect += 1
= profit
 

-CookieMonster666-

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Nov 20, 2018
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if you're missing the bar reward open the script.rpy and edit the lines that state:
Code:
$ correct += 1
between the ~19400 / ~19600 range to say:
Code:
$ gcorrect += 1
= profit
You can also just open the Console and type those (or find the variables with a save editor and modify their values) to force the changes that way.
 

Content_Consumer

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Blue Dragon Studios

Am I the only getting "ev" showing up as unknown when she should, presumably, have a name?

Code:
define ev = Character ("Unknown", color="#02f764", who_outlines=[ (1, "#000000") ], what_outlines=[ (1, "#000000") ])
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-CookieMonster666-

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Nov 20, 2018
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Blue Dragon Studios

Am I the only getting "ev" showing up as unknown when she should, presumably, have a name?

Code:
define ev = Character ("Unknown", color="#02f764", who_outlines=[ (1, "#000000") ], what_outlines=[ (1, "#000000") ])
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If you find it later in the code defined, then yes. I do seem to remember seeing some characters with "Unknown" as their names for quite some time, probably to try to maintain mystery about them for longer.
 

Content_Consumer

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If you find it later in the code defined, then yes. I do seem to remember seeing some characters with "Unknown" as their names for quite some time, probably to try to maintain mystery about them for longer.
So far as I can see, it isn't defined in the script anywhere, which is why it looks strange when Diego is telling you her name is "unknown".

I suspect there should be two entries, like there is for other characters, one that is 'evun' and the other just 'ev'.
evun would be for when you don't know her name yet and ev would be when Diego tells you her name.
 

-CookieMonster666-

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Nov 20, 2018
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So far as I can see, it isn't defined in the script anywhere, which is why it looks strange when Diego is telling you her name is "unknown".

I suspect there should be two entries, like there is for other characters, one that is 'evun' and the other just 'ev'.
evun would be for when you don't know her name yet and ev would be when Diego tells you her name.
I think it could be either of those. Either an updated definition of it is missing, as you suggest, or it's a mistake and a term like "a bit of a mystery" or some such should've been used instead of the variable for her name when Diego says that line.
 

CamaroFan432

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Mar 13, 2020
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The names of the hunter girl and the of the fairy need to be fixed. It's stupid, that after they are actually introduced to the MC, that they still named "unknown" and "fairy". That's lazy. Also the whole family situation was stupid AF. How old is the MC supposed to be? 20? Well, he acted like a 5y old. And as others already mentioned, the writing needs improvement, it lacks maturity. It may be not the best VN, but I saw way worse.
 

Mommysbuttslut

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Feb 19, 2021
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The names of the hunter girl and the of the fairy need to be fixed. It's stupid, that after they are actually introduced to the MC, that they still named "unknown" and "fairy". That's lazy. Also the whole family situation was stupid AF. How old is the MC supposed to be? 20? Well, he acted like a 5y old. And as others already mentioned, the writing needs improvement, it lacks maturity. It may be not the best VN, but I saw way worse.
Not to mention the flashback in the crystal ball shows the MC was literally accomplice to this plan. His mom never would've done it had MC not literally walked her down from the cliff and promised her he'd be fine. Even though he doesn't know why they did it he literally knows that he was in on it and agreed with them at the time, and he's still whining about them going behind his back.
Like for fuck sakes little 8 year old MC is showing more maturity and rationality than the flaming douche nozzle we're playing right now.
Should fucking rename him Giant Pussy
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kibaris

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Not to mention the flashback in the crystal ball shows the MC was literally accomplice to this plan. His mom never would've done it had MC not literally walked her down from the cliff and promised her he'd be fine. Even though he doesn't know why they did it he literally knows that he was in on it and agreed with them at the time, and he's still whining about them going behind his back.
Like for fuck sakes little 8 year old MC is showing more maturity and rationality than the flaming douche nozzle we're playing right now.
Should fucking rename him Giant Pussy
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you also forget to say that he leaves just when his mother is about to tell him the reason, saying that now he knows they won’t tell him anything...
 

cxx

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Nov 14, 2017
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nice update as usual and finally mc had sex with his gf/wife to be, also lookslike he (we) will need to make decision in future if we save 1 girl or other.

scrshots:

1. we don't mind, 2..3. choices, 4. usual fancy restaurant dinner, 5.-8. well he's scared early but soon overcomes it, 9.-10. favors and favors, 11.-12. not gay, whatta relief.

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