VN Ren'Py Black Rose -A Netori Story- [v0.4] [WinteryEdge]

[kryanBR]

Here's a tip for those who dont know: Netori ("Neto" - Verb / "Ri" - Present) You will play as a useless MC. All the girls will have sex with the NPCs in the game while this useless boy watches, and he might not even suspect that it's them.

If MC knows that the girls are having sex with other guys (except with him, mc) and likes it, like the good useless and despicable boy that he is, it will be "Netorase" ("Neto" - verb / "rase" - Calisative).

Now that you know, have fun Beta boy

 

[Juerhullycin]

I loved the premise of this game but honestly I'm starting to lose the interest in this game with all this femdom, sachie femdom already(it was such a huge turn off sachie character going femdom) + future femdom again, other girls will have femdom too, that it's already too much femdom in so many books..
So if we choose to toggle the femdom off will we be skipping the scene or avoiding it?
If we have it off will we have an alternative sex scene to not lose a sex scene? Or will we have to suck up and have longer wait times between updates because we are missing scenes for having it off?
When will MC be the actually dominant one? Because for now the feeling is more of a wimpy guy being controlled into having sex with other men wife's and losing any sense of conquering or any other of the good emotions netori evokes.
Not just that but the way mc is passive with the LI's is triggering too.
Really hope this game gets on track and be good because it had the potential, will wait some more updates to see where it goes

its a cuck game in disguise, said it since the blackmail started, the faster you make your peace with it the better for you.

 

[xsikal]

Here's a tip for those who dont know: Netori ("Neto" - Verb / "Ri" - Present) You will play as a useless MC. All the girls will have sex with the NPCs in the game while this useless boy watches, and he might not even suspect that it's them.

If MC knows that the girls are having sex with other guys (except with him, mc) and likes it, like the good useless and despicable boy that he is, it will be "Netorase" ("Neto" - verb / "rase" - Calisative).

Now that you know, have fun Beta boy

Netori is cucking other men. Netorase is sharing. Netorare is being cucked.

 

[WinteryEdge]

I loved the premise of this game but honestly I'm starting to lose the interest in this game with all this femdom, sachie femdom already(it was such a huge turn off sachie character going femdom) + future femdom again, other girls will have femdom too, that it's already too much femdom in so many books..
So if we choose to toggle the femdom off will we be skipping the scene or avoiding it?
If we have it off will we have an alternative sex scene to not lose a sex scene? Or will we have to suck up and have longer wait times between updates because we are missing scenes for having it off?
When will MC be the actually dominant one? Because for now the feeling is more of a wimpy guy being controlled into having sex with other men wife's and losing any sense of conquering or any other of the good emotions netori evokes.
Not just that but the way mc is passive with the LI's is triggering too.
Really hope this game gets on track and be good because it had the potential, will wait some more updates to see where it goes

The femdom for now, was just one moment in Sachie's route.

Having the Femdom toggle off, will avoid any potential femdom scenes in the future that the player may not want to experience.
And I don't plan for that many femdom scenes.


When will MC be the dominant one?
He was already dominant in Sanae's route (the redhead heroine), if you haven't played through her route yet.

In Sachie's route?
Well maybe you should give Sachie's new Episode 4 a try, to see what happens...
Maybe things will play out differently...

 

[kryanBR]

Netori is cucking other men. Netorase is sharing. Netorare is being cucked.

Sharing? Nah, mc never fuck girls, only the NPCs and just watch in netorase. If he fucks the girls with other... This is just group sex lol

"cucking"? "Cucked"? This is just an American Slang and ignorant bro, NTR has to be followed with the rules of Japan, its creators of this genders Just follow the right instead of the slang.

 

[WinteryEdge]

its a cuck game in disguise, said it since the blackmail started, the faster you make your peace with it the better for you.

The Blackmailer just acts as the antagonist, who sets up the trials for our protagonist to overcome (which is usually overcome by the protagonist having affairs with one of the married heroines).

 

[WinteryEdge]

While this game is definitely well-made enough, I didn't find it all that satisfying.

For a game where he's the one cucking other dudes, you don't really get the feeling of conquest that's usually associated with Netori. Rather than winning over the ladies, the MC is more so being encouraged, manipulated and coerced into doing it. Everyone else in the story, even the cuck and the MC's wife, is more in control of what's going on. While it might make for better intrigue, having our MC be so filled with dread and anxiety kind of limits how hot these scenes are for me. It's taking all the fun out of sinning!

I don't know how far you are into the game yet, but the MC goes through a bit of a character development to say the least.

Especially in Sachie's episode 4.

 

[Juerhullycin]

The Blackmailer just acts as the antagonist, who sets up the trials for our protagonist to overcome (which is usually overcome by the protagonist having affairs with one of the married heroines).

yeah our "hero" is a walking dildo for the antagonist without any agency, he is as much a cuck in the situation as the other husbands, only difference is that the antagonist is using/abusing him different. This together with femdom is laughable.

 

[WinteryEdge]

yeah our "hero" is a walking dildo for the antagonist without any agency, he is as much a cuck in the situation as the other husbands, only difference is that the antagonist is using/abusing him different. This together with femdom is laughable.

That is not what a cuck is...

At the start, he does somewhat lack agency.
He's gaining more agency as the game progresses.

For instance, he already chooses who it is that he wants to pursue.

And in episode 4, he'll goes further with the heroine, of his own will & choice.

Our hero...or villain, will make important decisions.
Decisions that our antagonist will not approve of.

 

[Sngo]

The femdom for now, was just one moment in Sachie's route.

Having the Femdom toggle off, will avoid any potential femdom scenes in the future that the player may not want to experience.
And I don't plan for that many femdom scenes.


When will MC be the dominant one?
He was already dominant in Sanae's route (the redhead heroine), if you haven't played through her route yet.

In Sachie's route?
Well maybe you should give Sachie's new Episode 4 a try, to see what happens...
Maybe things will play out differently...

Yeah one but it was so out of character for Sachie, it broke off completely her character.
Will we get alternative scenes for the ones that have femdom off or will we just be losing cotent/scenes?
Any ideia when will mc stop shrugging off his wife coldness and silence and do something about it?

Yeah I'm going to give EP 4 a try to see if it gets better, just hope to see more agency and assertiveness by the mc, because like I said I think the game as potential but isn't just going in the right way in my opinion since isn't evoking any feeling's that a netori story should evoke.

Ty for your time

 

[ljoker]

This work is excellent to me. It’s rare to see a game that portrays characters’ emotions so delicately. I hope you can complete it.

 

[BakaHu]

All them download options even Gofile
Are running slower than a tortoise that's been injected with every downer in the pharmacy

Very unusual for gofile

30+ minutes to download 1.3gb

 

[WinteryEdge]

This work is excellent to me. It’s rare to see a game that portrays characters’ emotions so delicately. I hope you can complete it.

Thank you ljoker, I'm glad you're liking my writing of the characters.
I hope to complete it as well.

 

[RuthBlackett]

Ihate games with flying dicks.



Unless it's a horror story - like that porn film where Ron Jeremy died and the monster fucking people to death was his zombie cock...

 

[Juerhullycin]

Our hero...or villain, will make important decisions.
Decisions that our antagonist will not approve of.

so the bad end is a cop out, because the "antagonist" isn't going through with his threat when you defy him seems logical.
you wrote a shit scenario with a powerless cuck mc and need to handwave away the country sized potholes already showing.

 

[the_fluff]

This is pretty good, I do like that the MC really is having a moral dilemma and the dialogue for it is pretty good. I was annoyed by the MC's meek attitude but I was hopeful it was a meek to dominant approach so I went through it and looks like it is leading to that which is nice. I'll look forward to how the MC develops. I feel like the animations could use work though. Like when the text mentions the MC is fucking an Li hard but the animation is pretty slow. Makes it a bit disappointing that it doesn't match the intensity that the text is telling us it is. I'd give it about a 3/5 for now.

I did not like that the femdom happens canonically whether you want it to or not, but I was hopeful the we would have a payback scene. And we kind of did but I was a bit disappointed by it because it felt like it was payback against Jona but not against Saichi. Saichi still femdomed us and I'm still bitter about it. We punished Jona but not Saichi and I'll be bitter about it until we get payback on Saichi too where she feels shitty. Maybe by making her watch us fuck Sanae and getting really jealous as punishment.

 

[GameAdam]

I have to ask... what does this blackmailer have on the MC? Form the little interactions regarding the actual blackmail they have he just 'knows' about the arrangement and mentions 'materials' but never specifies what or shows it. This alone won't work for the blackmail as you have to prove your threat as credible. If you don't no one will take you seriously (ideally you want to send the material first so they know what they have over you). Also how is this life ending stuff it would put someone's life on pause at most a month but most people will get over it around that time as new gossip will quickly take over and people will forget it for the most part. The only way it can stick around is if someone is constantly posting about it and they will get caught quickly.

Also why can't I just ponce the blackmailer when we meet in person? He has no weapons on him. Even if he reveals the materials if you get to see their face you can get them arrested for blackmail which is honestly far worst offence. That would be useful for earning sympathy from people and would make people not care for the actual blackmail.

 

[Juerhullycin]

I have to ask... what does this blackmailer have on the MC? Form the little interactions regarding the actual blackmail they have he just 'knows' about the arrangement and mentions 'materials' but never specifies what or shows it. This alone won't work for the blackmail as you have to prove your threat as credible. If you don't no one will take you seriously (ideally you want to send the material first so they know what they have over you). Also how is this life ending stuff it would put someone's life on pause at most a month but most people will get over it around that time as new gossip will quickly take over and people will forget it for the most part. The only way it can stick around is if someone is constantly posting about it and they will get caught quickly.

Also why can't I just ponce the blackmailer when we meet in person? He has no weapons on him. Even if he reveals the materials if you get to see their face you can get them arrested for blackmail which is honestly far worst offence. That would be useful for earning sympathy from people and would make people not care for the actual blackmail.

the Blackmailer has nothing and will do nothing as the Dev told himself. I quoted him on that in my last comment. He himself said MC will start doing stuff the blackmailer doesnt like, so the blackmailer never had anything, or he would use it to get MC in line, but somehow he cant?

The Plotholes just grow larger the longer the blackmail plot goes on. It didnt make sense the first time it dropped. Exactly because of the reasons you said and it will only go downhill from there.

 

[Raziel_8]

The Plotholes just grow larger the longer the blackmail plot goes on. It didnt make sense the first time it dropped. Exactly because of the reasons you said and it will only go downhill from there.

What was there ever to blackmail the MC ?
So the MC agreed to help his 'friend' to get his wife preggo, all are aware and agreed...i mean, the MC's friend could get some bad talk for a while from his colleagues...and that's it, what would the MC have to fear about ?

 

[Horkor]

It's time for the protagonist to be the one doing the ntr