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My dudes, after reading your feedback it really seemed weird how most if not all of it mentioned giving her bigger boobs, I mean, I really felt if anything I might have gone too big. So, after looking through some of Miriam's sets again, setting some of the images for reference and posing around my model I got to the conclusion that the issue was that my model was much thiccer than Miriam. Had a waaay bigger ass and hips and yeah, as some of the feedback also mentioned, needed a smaller waist.
So, here you go after some tweaking and a different pose. The breasts are pretty much the same as the previous images, just made them sag a little less. Also played a bit with the hair color and shape. Gonna start looking for a more appropriate skin texture and work on her head/face now. As always, feedback is more than welcomed. :BootyTime:

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If possible you should try making this pose with her and then we are golden.
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Forgot about that image so that was actually helpful for tweaking her body. I feel her face might be still lacking something BUT I also suspect the hair not being the same and the eyebrows being darker and longer are throwing me off. I'll probably tinker with her face a bit more next time but, like I've said, it's not meant to be a precise copy so I'll probably just go with that and start making scenes with her.

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Forgot about that image so that was actually helpful for tweaking her body. I feel her face might be still lacking something BUT I also suspect the hair not being the same and the eyebrows being darker and longer are throwing me off. I'll probably tinker with her face a bit more next time but, like I've said, it's not meant to be a precise copy so I'll probably just go with that and start making scenes with her.

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True her face is just slightly off but with just a bit of tinkering it will be perfect.

And the pose is awesome.
 
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Forgot about that image so that was actually helpful for tweaking her body. I feel her face might be still lacking something BUT I also suspect the hair not being the same and the eyebrows being darker and longer are throwing me off. I'll probably tinker with her face a bit more next time but, like I've said, it's not meant to be a precise copy so I'll probably just go with that and start making scenes with her.

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When you finish this, please share it with a Virt A Mate artist. I've tried commissioning a Miriam look ages ago, and the cost was out of my budget at the time.
 
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Depending on who you go to, they'll either charge your left nut or they're not gonna look as good as you would have wanted.
When you say a left nut how much are we talking about?
Just out of curiosity, I'm not publicly taking comms at the moment because I don't feel I have the time to deliver in a reasonable amount of time but I charge about 60$ including an outfit properly fitted, which I think it's fair, even on the cheap side probably.

Speaking about time, I probably shouldn't be doing this instead of focusing on my own works but, yeah, I just liked this character too much and don't want to let it die just like that. That's why I'm not going for fully making Miriam but instead a very, very, very, veeery close clone with a different name I'll use on my own stuff (so technically I'm working on my own works) :KEK:

Anyway, working on her face now ;)

I'd say the difficult part is differentiating between what's just a expression and what's actually her face from BA sets
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