WarblGarbl

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Turning someone's house into a brothel has to be a home owners association violation. Unless they're in on this too?
 

anon280

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v0.1 review

a very horny first release lol. i swear every moment the mc is not horny, he is about to be

Writing
as i played i realized the style was nonsensical so my critique on the writing will be less harsh
  • the dynamic between the sister character and mc was what i liked most here - they have a casual practical prank relationship and adding sex into the mix makes it better
    • they had so many conflicts in that one release, any one could have broken a kinship if this was a serious VN
  • mc is one horny motherfucker
    • given the blacked-ntr genre-driven writing, i can't complain how pathetic he is portrayed lol
Visuals
  • this standard of render quality hits that modern VN sweet spot, nothing gorgeous but it is still quite appealing
  • the women look good though i can't say much good about the bimbo as i'm not into it
  • as such, the sis' natural build i like, even if she got no ass - i'll have to look at the mom for that
    • she's cute af
  • love the effort put into facial expressions, goes a long way in being entertained and immersed by 3dcg VNs 37.jpg 64.jpg
  • and i appreciate u for putting nipples on the boobs (it's strangely uncommon in DAZ VNs)
H content & Other
  • H content was a disappointment for me, although that could just be my preference issue:
    • the pacing of all the lewd scenes were all around the MC stroking/getting his cock stroked (meh to footjobs) so that was a bummer
    • the bimbo porno were just flashes of images - not being into "blacked" also wouldn't have done anything for me
  • i did enjoy the smaller scenes like the sis 'accidentally' stroking mc's morning wood, mc spying on his mom, his sis being forced to flash Dwayne, and getting a facial by her bro
  • sfx for the footjob and masturbation scene don't match what it would sound like
  • continuity error: black censor bar missing 125.jpg


I won't be the most optimal person to review this as I'm not into bimbos or big-black-dicks but i went in knowing there's other stuff that appeal to me. I like the scenes with the sister, and they made up the majority of this first release, as she got into shenanigans with MC. That being said, the family dynamics with with MC: Mom being a slut but so normal and caring to MC, and the sis having that banter rapport, will be fun to explore
 

RottenPlum

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Nice models, but given the name and description this is gonna lean heavy on humiliation and netorare. I've checked images and mc is getting some action but that's probably gonna be his last time and it's gonna get worse. Would nice if there is netorase path but i doubt it. Dev could clarify if it's only gonna be netorare path or mc might also get his dick wet as well.
 
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