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v0.1 review
a very horny first release lol. i swear every moment the mc is not horny, he is about to be
Writing
as i played i realized the style was nonsensical so my critique on the writing will be less harsh
I won't be the most optimal person to review this as I'm not into bimbos or big-black-dicks but i went in knowing there's other stuff that appeal to me. I like the scenes with the sister, and they made up the majority of this first release, as she got into shenanigans with MC. That being said, the family dynamics with with MC: Mom being a slut but so normal and caring to MC, and the sis having that banter rapport, will be fun to explore
a very horny first release lol. i swear every moment the mc is not horny, he is about to be
Writing
as i played i realized the style was nonsensical so my critique on the writing will be less harsh
- the dynamic between the sister character and mc was what i liked most here - they have a casual practical prank relationship and adding sex into the mix makes it better
- they had so many conflicts in that one release, any one could have broken a kinship if this was a serious VN
- mc is one horny motherfucker
- given the blacked-ntr genre-driven writing, i can't complain how pathetic he is portrayed lol
- this standard of render quality hits that modern VN sweet spot, nothing gorgeous but it is still quite appealing
- the women look good though i can't say much good about the bimbo as i'm not into it
- as such, the sis' natural build i like, even if she got no ass - i'll have to look at the mom for that
- she's cute af
- love the effort put into facial expressions, goes a long way in being entertained and immersed by 3dcg VNs
- and i appreciate u for putting nipples on the boobs (it's strangely uncommon in DAZ VNs)
- H content was a disappointment for me, although that could just be my preference issue:
- the pacing of all the lewd scenes were all around the MC stroking/getting his cock stroked (meh to footjobs) so that was a bummer
- the bimbo porno were just flashes of images - not being into "blacked" also wouldn't have done anything for me
- i did enjoy the smaller scenes like the sis 'accidentally' stroking mc's morning wood, mc spying on his mom, his sis being forced to flash Dwayne, and getting a facial by her bro
- sfx for the footjob and masturbation scene don't match what it would sound like
- continuity error: black censor bar missing
I won't be the most optimal person to review this as I'm not into bimbos or big-black-dicks but i went in knowing there's other stuff that appeal to me. I like the scenes with the sister, and they made up the majority of this first release, as she got into shenanigans with MC. That being said, the family dynamics with with MC: Mom being a slut but so normal and caring to MC, and the sis having that banter rapport, will be fun to explore
bbc and exaggerated female bodies, what's not to like!
All it needs now is to be made in rpgm and have japanese names and it would be my perfect game!
- May 11, 2022
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It looks good but, but every start of the game is very uncertain, good luck with your game
, I only lose the game after several updates.
- Mar 17, 2020
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Should remove the text box fully it just covers most everything and can't hide in on android
- Sep 15, 2018
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Bro, I think I'm the first one to ge the reference of Guillermo Moreno in the telly. I see what you did there with the massive cuck form here, lmao! mandystarrx
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funniest thing would be that at the end of the game the MC had enough and he goes into the bully house and we get the sequel Bleached House
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Nice models, but given the name and description this is gonna lean heavy on humiliation and netorare. I've checked images and mc is getting some action but that's probably gonna be his last time and it's gonna get worse. Would nice if there is netorase path but i doubt it. Dev could clarify if it's only gonna be netorare path or mc might also get his dick wet as well.
- Dec 11, 2021
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Game has great potential! but please don't make it sandbox
without even bothering to mention that this VN is a sandbox. I hate sandboxes.
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Can one of these games please include a path where the MC actualy enjoys this scenario? Maybe he hates his family for treating him badly and seeing them used brings him immense joy? Path where he becomes the director of said porn studio the description talks about. A man can dream I guess.
Edit after playing the demo.
Yeah naah, you lost me at the MC letting his sister kick him in the balls after she drugged him with viagra and filmed him jerk off only to be shocked when he came on her face after she busted into the room when he was about to nut. You give me a glimpse of an interesting thing and then you literaly kick my balls.
GL dev this ones not for me.
Also chill with the stereotypical racism. Its cringe.
Edit after playing the demo.
Yeah naah, you lost me at the MC letting his sister kick him in the balls after she drugged him with viagra and filmed him jerk off only to be shocked when he came on her face after she busted into the room when he was about to nut. You give me a glimpse of an interesting thing and then you literaly kick my balls.
GL dev this ones not for me.
Also chill with the stereotypical racism. Its cringe.
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