Great game, Dev! Only a few minor criticisms and concerns. Your writing was very good in the beginning and then the attention to detail fell off. "Y'all" (the correct spelling of the contraction, 'you all') as found in the Southern states, became "yawl" for some reason. "You're" and "Your" started getting swapped which is really jarring. "You're" = "you are" and "Your" = possession. "Yeah" became "ya" which makes the MC sound Swedish/Norwegian or from Minnesota in my head, "Ya sure, yooo betcha." Minor grammatical errors aside, the story is well done. I would have liked an option of what to do with the narcotics, as I thought the MC was going a different route with regards to the gang.
Renders. Herein lies my biggest issue. The old ladies do not look like they have taken care of themselves AT ALL. If you're going to have women over the age of 50, then hit us with the Jennifer Lopez (52), Helen Mirren (76), Salma Hayek (54), Elizabeth Hurley (56), Catherine Zeta-Jones (51), Teri Hatcher (56), Vanna White (64), Katie Couric (64), Kathy Ireland (58), women that have worked hard to maintain their figures or were just naturally blessed to keep their looks longer than normal. The occasional dumpy, old lady is not an issue, there are a lot of them, after all, but this is a porn game, reality kind of flew out the window a long time ago.
All in all, an amazing game despite the minor issues listed above.
ETA: If there's a mod that alters the old ladies to something a little more fit, somebody please let me know. Thanks.