I like this so far though I wish we could slow down the pace. I felt that the conflict of the tensions of the conversion and the mystery of the father were enough to go for atleast 2 chapters (maybe 3 but the might be stretching it.) it would have helped flesh out some characters and their dynamics (Like Mother, Ali, Jenny and, the twins specifically.) but with the pace it is going all the added LI's and advancing conflicts will hog each others narrative space. Also I am assuming the conversion not being explained well and not shown much was for a narrative purpose but I kinda wish we saw more of it. The scene would be hot and MC focused which is needed and if the game is going to have different paths for the mother/twins/maya relationship this would be a good place to plant seeds or start them.
While I am not that picky about LI's pasts before the MC (especially in a game with immortal century spanning vampires.) alot of people are sensitive about it less so if the past partners is only with women or dead. Showing flashbacks in a non NTR or swinging/sharing almost always starts a flame war though. Introducing Chloe so early might have been an unforced error though her dialonge made me feel the vampire were less hedonistic backstabbers and more just free use with everyone openly sleeping with everyone and kinda changes the perpective of Ali's relationship. I assume the dev (talking about her being with the princess, mile high club with a man,etc..) wanted her backstory to be a more/only lesbian centric but after chloes exposition about vampire culture and her view towards sex which seems vampire standard it kinda made me feel like basically every other characer has slept with each other in giant swinger vampire orgies including your "mother" and "father". My assumtion now is that MC's power lets him shape peoples desires which will let him changes vmapire society/start building the harem of LI's that only sleep with the MC/eachother. I am not sure if that is what I was intended to get out of that though.
Renders though are really good I am enjoying the backgrounds and their variety. The models are excellent and you can tell the dev really enjoys making them. Honestly maybe too much lol it might be influencing character introductions with the dev wanting to use the nice models he made and probably the same with the flashbacks and the crazy amount of background public sex which is kinda influncing the feeling of the vampires being free use sluts.
Anyways looking forward to this game and good luck to the dev.