Tori has just discredited himself. Indeed, with the new scenes, it will last even longer.So... Since the remake has added many new scenes/CGs not in the original, does that means that Page 3 on the remake would be even lower on the original? Then it need way more than 7 pages until the remake reaches the original?
There's no set schedule for public release but somewhere between 2-3 weeks.
he keeps saying this but the remaster so far is very, very, very similar to the old version of the game.
Ayumi definitely continues to prioritize MC during the pool scene and they communicate a lot, though as you might guess there will be "distractions" that they both wind up enjoying. If you like what this MC likes, the scene is wholesome.
I really appreciate this detailed feedback! This kind of perspective is valuable, especially since I'm sometimes too close to the story to see how certain elements might come across. (since I know exactly what will happen
) (and you can 'train' her to be dominant or submissive)
Keep sticking true to your vision! There's a lot of toxicity on this forum, don't let these gremlins poison your creativity. They wish they could do something half as creative themselves.I really appreciate this detailed feedback! This kind of perspective is valuable, especially since I'm sometimes too close to the story to see how certain elements might come across. (since I know exactly what will happen
Since I'm in community management mode today, let me address some of these points:
1 - You're right that MC, even on the Dom path, isn't the typical alpha male trope. That's intentional - he's still fundamentally a shy accountant. The Dom path is about his growth into that role rather than instantly becoming someone else.
2 - Regarding satisfaction - the walls of text in certain scenes were meant to show that MC has no trouble giving Ayumi (or Ari) orgasms. Ayumi is meant to be a tease regardless of path because that's core to her personality. She's more of a gentle dom in the femdom route and more bratty on the submissive route.
3 - Terrace was always designed as an outlier with his attributes. If anything, the remake makes MC way more standard-sized compared to the original. Part of the story's challenge (and fun!) is balancing that dynamic while maintaining a wholesome relationship. Another way of looking at it is: if you can destroy a relationship because of a larger dick, it's because it wasn't the right relationship from the start.
4 - Not every man in this universe has the same physical attributes as Terrace. Without revealing too much, Act 2 might surprise players with how things unfold.
5 - The hot past kink often focuses on memorable experiences, which naturally includes big cock encounters. Ayumi understands this is MC's kink and plays with it accordingly.
6 - The aftercare conversation following this scene addresses some of these concerns and that might not be immediately obvious.
It's still a story about discovery though - I simply decided to setup some story beats to make the build-up more believable in the limited time frame of the in-game timeline. If anything, and it might surprise you, Ayumi is actually the most innocent character in all of this. It's a Ayumi training story
Even if the game doesn't hit all the right notes for you this is still very cool feedback. Thanks.
What's the point on giving you any feedback, if you never listen to it. I already try in last year, but it give zero results. You will stick to "you vision" no matter what, or drop the project.
That's our role as fans though, isn't it? Speak honestly and hope some of the stuff we want is picked up over time. I do feel that Tori incorporates the suggestions they think will improve the envisioned plot. They also don't overly restrict forum posts and engage with readers here, which is a really positive sign that they're reading and considering all feedback.
Better script? Great. Get rid of the entire maze route...makes zero sense.
Give it some time, tori probably will make you to suck out terrace cum out of girls holes at some point of the story haha.
It was an ok update. The reclamation scene was great, everything after that was mid. It was too much of a step down from the dressing room scene - that was why people disliked it that much. But the last scene in the club was gearing up to be something good.
DId you really play the remake or are you talking about the size in the original? Because in the remake it seems like a slightly below average 5 inch dick, which is fine for this game. I am not sure what are you talking about
Maybe you have played and read too much hentai if you think that something like Terrace is actually reasonable.it was teased as a big escalation and let people down. kazou ended up being a nothing character, terrace was gone from the entire party, almost all of the sex scenes were lesbian scenes, the greek stuff was out-of-place and didn't pay off at all, and then ended on a cliffhanger that was never resolved and the game got rebooted shortly after.
