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Hey Folks,
I forgot I will not be at home tomorrow 6th Sept so the mini update will be pushed to the 8th Sept.
Anyhoo,
Zip
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I figured it out myself. When Lucy and Julia spend the night together on Saturday night, you take the sleeping pills from Julia's wallet.
The more I think about this update the more odd it sems to me.
Bobby's actions are motivated by what benefits him, like he went to steal the phone for Liza not because it's the right thing to do. But it is so that he can use the video to blackmail Liza into doing things for him and corrupting her in the process.
His action in the latest update have no benefits to him (besides the physical sexual gratification) and in fact incriminates himself by recording his crime and giving Lucy leverage over him if she finds the video he made.
I'm willing to give ZipTieFun the benefit of doubt and see where he is going with the story, but this update shows that he don't have "what benefits Bobby in the long run if he does this" in his thoughts.
I don't know, I may be over thinking this.
Bobby's actions are motivated by what benefits him, like he went to steal the phone for Liza not because it's the right thing to do. But it is so that he can use the video to blackmail Liza into doing things for him and corrupting her in the process.
His action in the latest update have no benefits to him (besides the physical sexual gratification) and in fact incriminates himself by recording his crime and giving Lucy leverage over him if she finds the video he made.
I'm willing to give ZipTieFun the benefit of doubt and see where he is going with the story, but this update shows that he don't have "what benefits Bobby in the long run if he does this" in his thoughts.
I don't know, I may be over thinking this.
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You think about it too much.
Zip has often written that he has a lot of ideas but, as you can see, little time to implement them. This is why something incoherent is created, a patchwork of his ideas and Raince's ideas that lead nowhere. For Zip, only pretty graphics and individual scenes count at the moment.
Having ideas for scenes is good but you need to string them together to make a cohesive plot for the story.You think about it too much.
Zip has often written that he has a lot of ideas but, as you can see, little time to implement them. This is why something incoherent is created, a patchwork of his ideas and Raince's ideas that lead nowhere. For Zip, only pretty graphics and individual scenes count at the moment.
This mish mash of scenes is very jarring for me as it's ignoring the core drive for Bobby's actions.
I'm hoping his going somewhere with this and is not just going for quick titillation